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Only on chapter 50 as of this review. However, this is a really great read, and I would fully reccomend to try it.
pure gold this is so good it just lack some writing quality because there's some typo here and there the one thing i don't like is the chaos in the cyberpunk act is just feels a little bit forceful
keep going and remind the reader on the review part because we all actually just forget about the review thing because of laziness.
This is a great fanfic. I'm also not great at criticizing stuff but I am having fun. Please continue.
Honestly a really fun story with a likeable MC and cast. The system is fresh and fun! Check it out and you鈥檒l enjoy it.
before i start reading i hope i can know the current harem members or te total no. of girls in harem , because the last thing i want is the mc to catch girls like pokemon.
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Great fanfiction don't give up on it 馃憤 great fanfiction don't give up on it 馃憤 great fanfiction don't give up on it 馃憤 great fanfiction don't give up on it 馃憤
very good story that's well told and interesting. would recommend other to give it a go. 馃憤 very good story that's well told and interesting. would recommend other to give it a go. 馃憤
very good story that's well told and interesting. would recommend other to give it a go. 馃憤
Si prota op pero no mames ,se mamo las recompensas se maman tal como Salvala a saki: 9 recompensas entre ellas te vuelves la raza de anti-espiral bien pinshi op. Jajajja lo seguire leyendo a ver si no se mama mas adelante jajj.
I enjoyed this very much. Some mistakes in the writing. I also would like more detailed chapters if you know what I mean ;) Hope you do your best author
Una gran historia wue me encontre la recomiendo completamente ybel autor que siga con sus ideas jajjaja
Need to add Tonikaku Kawaii characters! WAIFUUU!!! Tsukasa chan!!!.... Ahem, this young and venerable one has it's thoughts leaked out. You may all forget it.
How should I say this... I didn't expected this to be a multiverse fanfiction...BUT I think 馃 this fanfic is good 馃憤 and can have BIG potential... It's just that I think the author CAN make it more good...well all and all I'm not really that experience to judge someone's else works soooo good luck on your writing author.
Ah... Finally..., A Danganronpa Fanfic Where they don't end up on a death game... good story hope it doesn't drop
A piece of art.馃帹This FF may be the best work of the author, at lesst from the ones that I have read.And I am super nervous each time I read another chapter since there is only 49ch for now.馃槄Not to mention that the author is sadly is not famous for his stable update or not dropping his stories 馃槶.That's way i will use all my accounts to drop all my PS in this work, if only the author can keep stable updates, I don't know why I feel like someone doing blackmail 馃 ma eka馃槡.Anyway I want o say that this FF is completely worth it to others readers and if it didn't drop or anything like this and it keeps with unbelievable amazing pace it will definitely reach the top 3 best FF.Love u author kun馃ぉ
I'm quite tired so ill say it out right I like It quite a bit. Onto the review Writing Quality: 4/5 First chap had emojis but I diddnt see anymore after that which was a good choice grammar is nice but sometimes youll see words that have diff letters at the start common mistake on this but not too bad. example: "hood" instead of good but doesn't really mess up the reading experienceStory Development: Good. I'm tired thats itCharacter Design: Most are from dangonronpa but you get up most respect for saving saki also Hassan Of Serenity Is my favorite assain good stuff Author. Updating Stability: 6 chaptera a week what else do you want? World Background: First World Is a missmash of different world's I liked it. Not Too cluttered aswell. Reffering to "First World" as I said Its a multiverse story I like those. To Author I know this isnt as popular as your other works but I see potential in this. Thanks for reading this terribly cooked review.
I may have found the holy grail of FFsI will donate all my PS to this FF from now on, I just hope it has a stable updates and never drops.
Eu adoro essa hist贸ria ...................................................................................................................................
It鈥檚 good the character are like how their are in their games and I鈥檓 the situations their in feel natural
The story was good but the author made 2 mistakes for me, 1 wanting to put more girls even having saki, mikan and Serenity. he failed 2 is the trips to other worlds you have a big world with several animes and history and he wastes it with the trips, you would have expected after 70 or 100 chapters to develop your world. If you like big harems, 6 or more girls, and trips to other worlds, it's for you, but it's not for me.
La verdad aunque no capt贸 la mayor铆a de los personajes de la trama puedo captar el esfuerzo descriptivo de las situaciones con mucha claridad, me gust贸 el giro situacional del mundo as铆 como la inclusi贸n de los otros personajes de anime as铆 como el avance lento para mejorar al protagonista eres un buen novelista de fanfic ojal谩 sigas as铆 de bien en actualizaci贸n solo recuerda informar tus descansos
Please stop adding these nonsense emojis... Everything fine but these emojis make the story cringey... Don't like it! It make you feel like you are reading a story of a beginner author who doesn't know how to write... Author-san this is a request from me please edit the story by removing out those emojis.
Well this is interesting, It's a shame it's still new. I have to wait for a while to read a new chapter but besides that good job author
I'm disappointed. I'm disappointed in everything. I don't want to write more than that................................................................................................... ...................................................................... ..............................
Only on chapter 50 as of this review. However, this is a really great read, and I would fully reccomend to try it.
pure gold this is so good it just lack some writing quality because there's some typo here and there the one thing i don't like is the chaos in the cyberpunk act is just feels a little bit forceful
keep going and remind the reader on the review part because we all actually just forget about the review thing because of laziness.
This is a great fanfic. I'm also not great at criticizing stuff but I am having fun. Please continue.
Honestly a really fun story with a likeable MC and cast. The system is fresh and fun! Check it out and you鈥檒l enjoy it.
before i start reading i hope i can know the current harem members or te total no. of girls in harem , because the last thing i want is the mc to catch girls like pokemon.
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Great fanfiction don't give up on it 馃憤 great fanfiction don't give up on it 馃憤 great fanfiction don't give up on it 馃憤 great fanfiction don't give up on it 馃憤
very good story that's well told and interesting. would recommend other to give it a go. 馃憤 very good story that's well told and interesting. would recommend other to give it a go. 馃憤
very good story that's well told and interesting. would recommend other to give it a go. 馃憤
Si prota op pero no mames ,se mamo las recompensas se maman tal como Salvala a saki: 9 recompensas entre ellas te vuelves la raza de anti-espiral bien pinshi op. Jajajja lo seguire leyendo a ver si no se mama mas adelante jajj.
I enjoyed this very much. Some mistakes in the writing. I also would like more detailed chapters if you know what I mean ;) Hope you do your best author
Una gran historia wue me encontre la recomiendo completamente ybel autor que siga con sus ideas jajjaja
Need to add Tonikaku Kawaii characters! WAIFUUU!!! Tsukasa chan!!!.... Ahem, this young and venerable one has it's thoughts leaked out. You may all forget it.
How should I say this... I didn't expected this to be a multiverse fanfiction...BUT I think 馃 this fanfic is good 馃憤 and can have BIG potential... It's just that I think the author CAN make it more good...well all and all I'm not really that experience to judge someone's else works soooo good luck on your writing author.
Ah... Finally..., A Danganronpa Fanfic Where they don't end up on a death game... good story hope it doesn't drop
A piece of art.馃帹This FF may be the best work of the author, at lesst from the ones that I have read.And I am super nervous each time I read another chapter since there is only 49ch for now.馃槄Not to mention that the author is sadly is not famous for his stable update or not dropping his stories 馃槶.That's way i will use all my accounts to drop all my PS in this work, if only the author can keep stable updates, I don't know why I feel like someone doing blackmail 馃 ma eka馃槡.Anyway I want o say that this FF is completely worth it to others readers and if it didn't drop or anything like this and it keeps with unbelievable amazing pace it will definitely reach the top 3 best FF.Love u author kun馃ぉ
I'm quite tired so ill say it out right I like It quite a bit. Onto the review Writing Quality: 4/5 First chap had emojis but I diddnt see anymore after that which was a good choice grammar is nice but sometimes youll see words that have diff letters at the start common mistake on this but not too bad. example: "hood" instead of good but doesn't really mess up the reading experienceStory Development: Good. I'm tired thats itCharacter Design: Most are from dangonronpa but you get up most respect for saving saki also Hassan Of Serenity Is my favorite assain good stuff Author. Updating Stability: 6 chaptera a week what else do you want? World Background: First World Is a missmash of different world's I liked it. Not Too cluttered aswell. Reffering to "First World" as I said Its a multiverse story I like those. To Author I know this isnt as popular as your other works but I see potential in this. Thanks for reading this terribly cooked review.
I may have found the holy grail of FFsI will donate all my PS to this FF from now on, I just hope it has a stable updates and never drops.
Eu adoro essa hist贸ria ...................................................................................................................................
It鈥檚 good the character are like how their are in their games and I鈥檓 the situations their in feel natural
The story was good but the author made 2 mistakes for me, 1 wanting to put more girls even having saki, mikan and Serenity. he failed 2 is the trips to other worlds you have a big world with several animes and history and he wastes it with the trips, you would have expected after 70 or 100 chapters to develop your world. If you like big harems, 6 or more girls, and trips to other worlds, it's for you, but it's not for me.
La verdad aunque no capt贸 la mayor铆a de los personajes de la trama puedo captar el esfuerzo descriptivo de las situaciones con mucha claridad, me gust贸 el giro situacional del mundo as铆 como la inclusi贸n de los otros personajes de anime as铆 como el avance lento para mejorar al protagonista eres un buen novelista de fanfic ojal谩 sigas as铆 de bien en actualizaci贸n solo recuerda informar tus descansos
Please stop adding these nonsense emojis... Everything fine but these emojis make the story cringey... Don't like it! It make you feel like you are reading a story of a beginner author who doesn't know how to write... Author-san this is a request from me please edit the story by removing out those emojis.
Well this is interesting, It's a shame it's still new. I have to wait for a while to read a new chapter but besides that good job author
I'm disappointed. I'm disappointed in everything. I don't want to write more than that................................................................................................... ...................................................................... ..............................