3Reviews
- Writing Quality
- Stability of Updates
- Story Development
- Character Design
- World Background
Share your thoughts with others
Write a review
I've read 6 chapters so far and I can't make heads or tails of what's happening, it tells so much but at the same time tells us nothing about other things, grammar is phenomenal tho
this is a curious little novel, although it's difficult to understand the power system in the beginning and we don't exactly understand what's going on as well for the first few chapters. Though it does manage to incite curiosity and keeps the reader going. unfortunately, a lot of readers on webnovel don't have that patience and might end up just dropping it. I suggest the author creates an auxiloiary chapter with a character list to and an indepth into how exactly abilities work, so confused readers might use it for reference.All in all, this is a unique work, and i look forward to reading more
I had thought this book was perfect till I wore the shoes of a reader and started reading it myself recently. And although few, it still has misspelt words in some parts and in some others, words that didn't really seem necessary. The early chapters are bulky, having 2.3k words in just one chapter, so this often led me to feeling like I'm not making progress in scrutinizing it because of the time I spend reading it.But then again, for a first book with a lot of thinking behind it, each chapter is an exciting experience; the abilities of the characters are really unusual and unique; and the MC is still building up into a peculiar one, being a soul-sucking vampire who likes scaring people as a hobby and having detachable body parts lol.I acknowledge the flaws but... I'm still giving my book 5 dang stars. I know how much I worked on it, so I'm giving myself praise. Let's all deal with it... And read it, please. (~‾▿‾)~
I've read 6 chapters so far and I can't make heads or tails of what's happening, it tells so much but at the same time tells us nothing about other things, grammar is phenomenal tho
this is a curious little novel, although it's difficult to understand the power system in the beginning and we don't exactly understand what's going on as well for the first few chapters. Though it does manage to incite curiosity and keeps the reader going. unfortunately, a lot of readers on webnovel don't have that patience and might end up just dropping it. I suggest the author creates an auxiloiary chapter with a character list to and an indepth into how exactly abilities work, so confused readers might use it for reference.All in all, this is a unique work, and i look forward to reading more
I had thought this book was perfect till I wore the shoes of a reader and started reading it myself recently. And although few, it still has misspelt words in some parts and in some others, words that didn't really seem necessary. The early chapters are bulky, having 2.3k words in just one chapter, so this often led me to feeling like I'm not making progress in scrutinizing it because of the time I spend reading it.But then again, for a first book with a lot of thinking behind it, each chapter is an exciting experience; the abilities of the characters are really unusual and unique; and the MC is still building up into a peculiar one, being a soul-sucking vampire who likes scaring people as a hobby and having detachable body parts lol.I acknowledge the flaws but... I'm still giving my book 5 dang stars. I know how much I worked on it, so I'm giving myself praise. Let's all deal with it... And read it, please. (~‾▿‾)~