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Attention: I originally wrote this review in Spanish so you may find some inconsistencies and spelling mistakes. To be honest, it's a pretty good work, although it's true that the development of the protagonist can be a bit "emo" at the beginning, it's understandable because of the context/story of the MC, even so his personality develops and improves until he manages to open up to Irina for the first time. The development of the protagonist's power seems perfect to me, neither too slow nor too fast. I like how the author develops the emotions of the MC and the secondary characters, giving them a very pleasant and unforced touch. The power system is not the typical one so that's a plus. The secondary characters, despite not being perfect in development, have their history, traumas, tastes and personalities and we get to know more about them as the chapters go by. It is possible that some people find the beginning a bit tedious, but I totally recommend reading the work, it is much better than most of the works you can currently find on Webnovel. ps: Author, I beg you not to abandon the novel even if some liars and inexperienced people criticize the novel (I recommend you pin my message, it is a very good and realistic opinion).
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Waste of time it's another harem trash where 200 chapter is dedicated to one girl and then you never heard of her again and f you for not adding harem tag and I know you're father is unfaithful to your mother no need to make your character like him
Excellent novel, awesome MC and character development. my only wish is to be more fast pace, seem like there are many chapters could be condensed into a couple of chapters,
The single best novel I’ve read on this platform after Why Should I Stop Being a Villain (dropped). I look forward to a new chapter every day. It’s almost become an essential daily routine. Keep up the good work!
I had to read almost 600 chapters before dropping when the author decided to make a harem out of it. I don't see how this will work, considering how the characters of Irina and Maya were written. Please add the “harem” tag to not mislead people
I don’t understand the hate that this novel gets. I’ve read novels that were worse than this and gets love now I’m not saying this novel it bad it’s the opposite it’s VERY good. I just feel most reader don’t like when authors build up the plot as they have short attention spans witch I find funny 😂 Overall read it and give it your own opinion I really find my self enjoying it so far.
i just want To know when astron becomes respectfully strong? What's the highest stat in the world and how far is astron from reaching it?
goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooice
I saw the romance tag and there wasn't any harem tag so I started reading. After reading some chapters I thought it would be nice to see how the MC would change because of the FL. I picked up some signs but I ignored them. Then, when Sylvie hugged Astron I thought she must be the main FL but just right after that Maya turned into a vampire and the scene confirmed it. It's a harem. I stopped reading since I started because it had romance, I didn't want to read a harem one. The story and plot were great but... YOU SHOULD GIVE THE HAREM TAG IF IT IS A HAREM!!
The story is good so far, but I would suggest to improve on the writing section, its really cringey sometimes, and you don't always have to use the dialogue about killing demons every 5 chapters. it takes the interest away at times, just subtle reactions ML could make up for it. The characters and story development is Quite good actually but please improve the writing part from your side its already a hit considering the story.
i am at c185 the story is going really good so far but please tell me there not gonna be some cliches with irina and the mc i hope u can spoil
I like the story, I like the characters, I hate the romance. Isnt the main character supposed to be apathetic?
It's a great book in terms of world building and the structure of the combat system itself. A lot of things are laid out logically, so why is my heart now being punished by the MC's potential promiscuity in love. The guy literally moments before his date with his girlfriend kisses another.
now a days chapters are like author writes ten lines rest are written and expanded by AI. seriously it's starting to feel unpleasant to read chapters where u r just filling up with words that to using AI. You just need to read first line and ignore read something in middle and read at the end.believe me u won't miss anything in chapter.
Author please make it harem every female lead is amazing and has good character development so if you make it a single fml the story will lose a lot of potential. And as I have personally read all the chapters uptil now i think harem route is the best option. And if it's not then sorry but I am dropping it. Thanks for the novel author keep up the good work. 👍
it's a good story I'd recommend to anyone. A solid 4/5 to me with my only gripe being how incompetent everyone is portrayed I'll give 2 examples 1) During mid terms, mc got attacked and almost died. The academy came to the conclusion that demon people are behind it and they are most likely students. After this they did nothing at all. They didn't ask mc who attacked him or were shown to be looking for them. Even then when they found 3 demon students dead after a while nothing was done, no real investigation or anything like that. 2) When Sylvie was kidnapped, she's very important so the academy will protect her. Yet she was easily kidnapped, by demons at the MC's level and it was hastily set up kidnapping. I tried making excuses for this but at the root of it all the characters are shown as incompetent. Those are the examples I can think of at the top of my head but there's definitely more. As for what I liked the most would be the MC's backstory, it's pretty well done imo
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Just want to ask, is this a harem novel? If yes then why is there no tag for it? and if it is then what a shame . .......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The main reason i came to read this novel because it's harem and I had enough of romance novels with mc being an extra trope and trust me when I say this. This novels is a masterpiece that I've come across this is one of the best novels I've read till today Good character development and keeping readers on their toes as to what gonna happen next and how the mc gonna overcome the next chalenge. The reason i came to read this novel because i was sick of only reading romance novel in which the male lead was an extra. one more thing i hope mc gets more character development with other female leads to like Julia and lilia because until now these two had very interactions and character development with our mc. most people say that there are many harem novel with mc being an extra trope but trust me most of the novels i found on this app are only romance with a single female lead and i had enough of that and needed some change of pace that's why i came to read this novel because it's harem and I hope that it remains that way Mr. author. I rarely give novels reviews but seriously this novel is a gem i am really glad found this novel. I just hope the author never drops this masterpiece and keep updating more chapters daily. Thanks for the novel author and keep up the good work. 👍
two thumbs up!! I love this story.. The MC.. The chicks.. The Storyline.. Before i started with quite number of novel.. but i drop some of it along the way.. this is among a few novel i still read until this day.. keep up the good work
I really enjoyed the story, the author brings logic to the story that I really like, what is different i feel from other novels is character actions, speaking everything align with the purpose, this align you can see multiple support characters also, In Some other novels you see naive, face slapping, arrogant, non logical, suicidal villains in this novel you might feel there is villains also have definite purpose. You will not see face slapping to arrogant young masters. There is not much overpowering your peers. I got similar feeling i get when I read "kill the sun", "shadow slave" etc.
this is peak, if you are looking for a fulfilling novel about a main character and in-depth side characters. the path of the MC learning about himself through the eyes of others. his character progression is slow accounting the amount of chapters it took but very rewarding. i’m a terrible reviewer but I highly recommend this novel
The character design needs work tbh. It's quite a contrast how the extras in a school that's supposedly the best for hunters with them being from top families are quite the idiots. They hear a rumour and then without verification believes it like it's the gospel. How sad. I'd understand the bullying because life is inherently unfair. I understand it doesn't mean I like it. In a world with power and strong abilities the weak are pitiful The teacher that's supposed to meet the MC at the academy to make sure he stays okay ended up being the most useless character of all. She was told by the seer how to best act for them to stand a chance against the demons. And yet she joins in subtly bullying astron even though she's aware of how scrappy every student treats him. Ptui. In the recent chapters she's only good to him now because he's shown his ability. I understand her not investing in him initially, he was truly useless. But a more positive-neutral approach to him and the other students would have been better. She's supposed to lad the chosen one to the light . But she ends up being part of the darkness Tsk. Anyway, enough ranting from me. Author. Aides Irene, there is Maya and the other girl with the authority. Would there be a harem? I truly hope so because I'm all for Maya as well. She was the only truly sensible character. Childish, sure... But sensible.
I was enjoying the story. But after first semester exam, the author flip mc personality. More like he is trying to become simple and people pleaser.
Honestly, this is a great novel. Other than some tendencies to over explain and also a little too skewed in the MC’s thinking, most MC’s are like that - while these guy’s is just annoying. Once you get past that, you’ll learn to love the novel. Good MC , good Character , good world building. Some inconsistencies in fighting strength and all BUT - not a big issue. Just surprised it’s not rank higher - IMO should be top 10 with some of the other books on going right now. Give it a chance - it gets better.
chefs kiss absolutely amazing the development of astron and irena just can’t it was so good. Haven’t read a good story like this in a minute
I just don't understand. The novels you write, the world building and everything is so awesome. but then the storytelling and character development ruins the fun. It's just that much more frustrating because I was anticipating you would eventually milk all the hints you have put here and there one by one but instead what i get is forced interactions and logic to make the mc look good and in control. I am in chapter 400s and i still don't understand how Irina likes him. There are times when I just want to get into the novel just to punch the mc in face for his edgy behaviours. And what I am really not able to understand is how these thought processes are aligned: 1) I need to maintain a low profile to keep the villains and demons unaware of my existence. 2) I don't care what others think and want. I just need to train and work for my vengeance. So I will act edgy and offend anyone and everyone who tries to talk to me. 3) I need to keep at least a reasonable relationship with the main characters so that i can be involved in the story, but i will still act edgy and let them adjust to my behaviour because the author will change their perspectives to match me.
I liked this novel very much since I am reading More than 2 Weeks of contents in some story in 2 or 3 Days here. Since I read many novels I know the basics and even Characters in My Mind so it is good for me. But Bro if you need to get more Coins and subscribers then add little bit more sentiments and half page praising and Astonishment how MC did it. Add more inner feelings also and little bit more detailing for Characters also so that we will be connected with them. We need to feel the pain of MC and you need to add memories of his sister in Dream or as in some novel as a test of his Soul strength or as illusion tests. I am not a writer so what I mentioned above may be wrong
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the story is the typical weak to strong attempt, keyword attempt, because this genre usually tries to add in a sense of realness to it, thus the story either ends being really good or the lowest form of trash possible that makes it unreadable. The mc at the start is weaker than an average normal human on basically all parameters and he doesnt even have mana, yet despite being weaker than you and I he somehow managed to get in a school for super humans... how you may ask? no reason lol, he doesnt even have any sort of connection, money or academic ability, but its not like this author cares about logic, thus this story fails right at chapter 1. Anyways I didnt start reading this expecting a masterpiece so I preserved and turned a blind eye to all the stupidity and cliches right till (spoiler) the classic girl turned into a vampire arc cus vampires are cool and edgy, this arc was just too stupid and braindead to the point that I cant endure this torture anymore -_- in this arc the author went way out of his way to break the already almost non existent logic in this story, from mc letting villains injure him because a demon is seeing through them? although this was not an issue with the other villains who are even ranked higher, but if he didnt get injured the random vampire wouldnt have found his blood on the street to get a power up for by licking the blood that is somehow still fresh and get the power to turn magical girl into a vampire -_- summary: typical trash story that pretends to not be a trash story, so it doesnt offer any sort of enjoyment. And to the author if youre reading this please find another career this is really not it -_-
Attention: I originally wrote this review in Spanish so you may find some inconsistencies and spelling mistakes. To be honest, it's a pretty good work, although it's true that the development of the protagonist can be a bit "emo" at the beginning, it's understandable because of the context/story of the MC, even so his personality develops and improves until he manages to open up to Irina for the first time. The development of the protagonist's power seems perfect to me, neither too slow nor too fast. I like how the author develops the emotions of the MC and the secondary characters, giving them a very pleasant and unforced touch. The power system is not the typical one so that's a plus. The secondary characters, despite not being perfect in development, have their history, traumas, tastes and personalities and we get to know more about them as the chapters go by. It is possible that some people find the beginning a bit tedious, but I totally recommend reading the work, it is much better than most of the works you can currently find on Webnovel. ps: Author, I beg you not to abandon the novel even if some liars and inexperienced people criticize the novel (I recommend you pin my message, it is a very good and realistic opinion).
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Waste of time it's another harem trash where 200 chapter is dedicated to one girl and then you never heard of her again and f you for not adding harem tag and I know you're father is unfaithful to your mother no need to make your character like him
Excellent novel, awesome MC and character development. my only wish is to be more fast pace, seem like there are many chapters could be condensed into a couple of chapters,
The single best novel I’ve read on this platform after Why Should I Stop Being a Villain (dropped). I look forward to a new chapter every day. It’s almost become an essential daily routine. Keep up the good work!
I had to read almost 600 chapters before dropping when the author decided to make a harem out of it. I don't see how this will work, considering how the characters of Irina and Maya were written. Please add the “harem” tag to not mislead people
I don’t understand the hate that this novel gets. I’ve read novels that were worse than this and gets love now I’m not saying this novel it bad it’s the opposite it’s VERY good. I just feel most reader don’t like when authors build up the plot as they have short attention spans witch I find funny 😂 Overall read it and give it your own opinion I really find my self enjoying it so far.
i just want To know when astron becomes respectfully strong? What's the highest stat in the world and how far is astron from reaching it?
goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooice
I saw the romance tag and there wasn't any harem tag so I started reading. After reading some chapters I thought it would be nice to see how the MC would change because of the FL. I picked up some signs but I ignored them. Then, when Sylvie hugged Astron I thought she must be the main FL but just right after that Maya turned into a vampire and the scene confirmed it. It's a harem. I stopped reading since I started because it had romance, I didn't want to read a harem one. The story and plot were great but... YOU SHOULD GIVE THE HAREM TAG IF IT IS A HAREM!!
The story is good so far, but I would suggest to improve on the writing section, its really cringey sometimes, and you don't always have to use the dialogue about killing demons every 5 chapters. it takes the interest away at times, just subtle reactions ML could make up for it. The characters and story development is Quite good actually but please improve the writing part from your side its already a hit considering the story.
i am at c185 the story is going really good so far but please tell me there not gonna be some cliches with irina and the mc i hope u can spoil
I like the story, I like the characters, I hate the romance. Isnt the main character supposed to be apathetic?
It's a great book in terms of world building and the structure of the combat system itself. A lot of things are laid out logically, so why is my heart now being punished by the MC's potential promiscuity in love. The guy literally moments before his date with his girlfriend kisses another.
now a days chapters are like author writes ten lines rest are written and expanded by AI. seriously it's starting to feel unpleasant to read chapters where u r just filling up with words that to using AI. You just need to read first line and ignore read something in middle and read at the end.believe me u won't miss anything in chapter.
Author please make it harem every female lead is amazing and has good character development so if you make it a single fml the story will lose a lot of potential. And as I have personally read all the chapters uptil now i think harem route is the best option. And if it's not then sorry but I am dropping it. Thanks for the novel author keep up the good work. 👍
it's a good story I'd recommend to anyone. A solid 4/5 to me with my only gripe being how incompetent everyone is portrayed I'll give 2 examples 1) During mid terms, mc got attacked and almost died. The academy came to the conclusion that demon people are behind it and they are most likely students. After this they did nothing at all. They didn't ask mc who attacked him or were shown to be looking for them. Even then when they found 3 demon students dead after a while nothing was done, no real investigation or anything like that. 2) When Sylvie was kidnapped, she's very important so the academy will protect her. Yet she was easily kidnapped, by demons at the MC's level and it was hastily set up kidnapping. I tried making excuses for this but at the root of it all the characters are shown as incompetent. Those are the examples I can think of at the top of my head but there's definitely more. As for what I liked the most would be the MC's backstory, it's pretty well done imo
Reveal Spoiler Just want to ask, is this a harem novel? If yes then why is there no tag for it? and if it is then what a shame . .......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The main reason i came to read this novel because it's harem and I had enough of romance novels with mc being an extra trope and trust me when I say this. This novels is a masterpiece that I've come across this is one of the best novels I've read till today Good character development and keeping readers on their toes as to what gonna happen next and how the mc gonna overcome the next chalenge. The reason i came to read this novel because i was sick of only reading romance novel in which the male lead was an extra. one more thing i hope mc gets more character development with other female leads to like Julia and lilia because until now these two had very interactions and character development with our mc. most people say that there are many harem novel with mc being an extra trope but trust me most of the novels i found on this app are only romance with a single female lead and i had enough of that and needed some change of pace that's why i came to read this novel because it's harem and I hope that it remains that way Mr. author. I rarely give novels reviews but seriously this novel is a gem i am really glad found this novel. I just hope the author never drops this masterpiece and keep updating more chapters daily. Thanks for the novel author and keep up the good work. 👍
two thumbs up!! I love this story.. The MC.. The chicks.. The Storyline.. Before i started with quite number of novel.. but i drop some of it along the way.. this is among a few novel i still read until this day.. keep up the good work
I really enjoyed the story, the author brings logic to the story that I really like, what is different i feel from other novels is character actions, speaking everything align with the purpose, this align you can see multiple support characters also, In Some other novels you see naive, face slapping, arrogant, non logical, suicidal villains in this novel you might feel there is villains also have definite purpose. You will not see face slapping to arrogant young masters. There is not much overpowering your peers. I got similar feeling i get when I read "kill the sun", "shadow slave" etc.
this is peak, if you are looking for a fulfilling novel about a main character and in-depth side characters. the path of the MC learning about himself through the eyes of others. his character progression is slow accounting the amount of chapters it took but very rewarding. i’m a terrible reviewer but I highly recommend this novel
The character design needs work tbh. It's quite a contrast how the extras in a school that's supposedly the best for hunters with them being from top families are quite the idiots. They hear a rumour and then without verification believes it like it's the gospel. How sad. I'd understand the bullying because life is inherently unfair. I understand it doesn't mean I like it. In a world with power and strong abilities the weak are pitiful The teacher that's supposed to meet the MC at the academy to make sure he stays okay ended up being the most useless character of all. She was told by the seer how to best act for them to stand a chance against the demons. And yet she joins in subtly bullying astron even though she's aware of how scrappy every student treats him. Ptui. In the recent chapters she's only good to him now because he's shown his ability. I understand her not investing in him initially, he was truly useless. But a more positive-neutral approach to him and the other students would have been better. She's supposed to lad the chosen one to the light . But she ends up being part of the darkness Tsk. Anyway, enough ranting from me. Author. Aides Irene, there is Maya and the other girl with the authority. Would there be a harem? I truly hope so because I'm all for Maya as well. She was the only truly sensible character. Childish, sure... But sensible.
I was enjoying the story. But after first semester exam, the author flip mc personality. More like he is trying to become simple and people pleaser.
Honestly, this is a great novel. Other than some tendencies to over explain and also a little too skewed in the MC’s thinking, most MC’s are like that - while these guy’s is just annoying. Once you get past that, you’ll learn to love the novel. Good MC , good Character , good world building. Some inconsistencies in fighting strength and all BUT - not a big issue. Just surprised it’s not rank higher - IMO should be top 10 with some of the other books on going right now. Give it a chance - it gets better.
chefs kiss absolutely amazing the development of astron and irena just can’t it was so good. Haven’t read a good story like this in a minute
I just don't understand. The novels you write, the world building and everything is so awesome. but then the storytelling and character development ruins the fun. It's just that much more frustrating because I was anticipating you would eventually milk all the hints you have put here and there one by one but instead what i get is forced interactions and logic to make the mc look good and in control. I am in chapter 400s and i still don't understand how Irina likes him. There are times when I just want to get into the novel just to punch the mc in face for his edgy behaviours. And what I am really not able to understand is how these thought processes are aligned: 1) I need to maintain a low profile to keep the villains and demons unaware of my existence. 2) I don't care what others think and want. I just need to train and work for my vengeance. So I will act edgy and offend anyone and everyone who tries to talk to me. 3) I need to keep at least a reasonable relationship with the main characters so that i can be involved in the story, but i will still act edgy and let them adjust to my behaviour because the author will change their perspectives to match me.
I liked this novel very much since I am reading More than 2 Weeks of contents in some story in 2 or 3 Days here. Since I read many novels I know the basics and even Characters in My Mind so it is good for me. But Bro if you need to get more Coins and subscribers then add little bit more sentiments and half page praising and Astonishment how MC did it. Add more inner feelings also and little bit more detailing for Characters also so that we will be connected with them. We need to feel the pain of MC and you need to add memories of his sister in Dream or as in some novel as a test of his Soul strength or as illusion tests. I am not a writer so what I mentioned above may be wrong
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the story is the typical weak to strong attempt, keyword attempt, because this genre usually tries to add in a sense of realness to it, thus the story either ends being really good or the lowest form of trash possible that makes it unreadable. The mc at the start is weaker than an average normal human on basically all parameters and he doesnt even have mana, yet despite being weaker than you and I he somehow managed to get in a school for super humans... how you may ask? no reason lol, he doesnt even have any sort of connection, money or academic ability, but its not like this author cares about logic, thus this story fails right at chapter 1. Anyways I didnt start reading this expecting a masterpiece so I preserved and turned a blind eye to all the stupidity and cliches right till (spoiler) the classic girl turned into a vampire arc cus vampires are cool and edgy, this arc was just too stupid and braindead to the point that I cant endure this torture anymore -_- in this arc the author went way out of his way to break the already almost non existent logic in this story, from mc letting villains injure him because a demon is seeing through them? although this was not an issue with the other villains who are even ranked higher, but if he didnt get injured the random vampire wouldnt have found his blood on the street to get a power up for by licking the blood that is somehow still fresh and get the power to turn magical girl into a vampire -_- summary: typical trash story that pretends to not be a trash story, so it doesnt offer any sort of enjoyment. And to the author if youre reading this please find another career this is really not it -_-