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Congratulations on winning in the WPC contest! Good luck and happy writing! *****************************************************************
So, I read the first two chapters and I can already tell that this book will be interesting. Calla's and Davis's dynamic is so cute. From enemies in school, to arranged husband and wife and eventually potential lovers is an amazing dynamic. My favorite chapter so far is the second one because of how it ended with the teasing from Davis and the response from Calla. I can't wait to read more
The writing itself is fantastic, makes one wonder if they’re reading a wn or a traditionally published book. The author’s story telling is vivid, giving the reader the maximum immersion. Another thing which I really like about the writing is the transition, it’s flawless.
I took an overview but I really loved it. This is one of a kind, you don't have to define the characters cause every line will tell you the depth of a character and what makes it different from other characters. Even the ones who don't have a big role are given beautiful dialogues....Best Wishes!
A bold premise with a decent execution. The novel is fast paced enough to keep you on tenterhooks throughtout every chapter. It definitely wouldn't hurt anyone to read through half a dozen chapters and see if they vibe with it. It's good stuff in the genre. There are some oversights with punctuation, dialogue formatting and capitalization, but they can be glossed over by the average reader. Things I can't gloss over, though perhaps may be explored later, is the character inconsistency. The hatred is meant to be palpable, but all I see is tsundere energy. On the male side, he seems to have awfully low self-esteem, despite being a god in man's skin. While it is a novel, those rather unrealistic back and forth flops threw me off. Overall, it is decent read. For fans of the modern romance / marriage genre, it's 100% worth a click. It's not my cup of tea, but even I don't regret reading it. Good luck on the contest.
Enemies to lovers...Oh" am so following this book💝Davis what a cute name😘I love the book but add more efforts [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It is a good book. I was so into it that I almost got drowned. The characters were well designed and built. The author is just talented, I hope that this book gets the exposure that it deserves.
Good read, I’m not really into the marriage aspect of web novel, but it was well written, and did you know there’s a story with the same title lol— I was looking for it and found two so I’m not sure if this is the right one, but anyways— great job! Release more! Much love, S.T <3
I really like this story and I absolutely love the enemies to lovers trope! I’m definitely looking forward to this one! Keep up the great work author!
to be honest, it was a good start despite the simple storyline. Which makes me wonder of Calla's past relationship with the male lead so I'll be looking forwards to that
The writing is ok so As The plot and scenery...it's absolutely too good. Enemy to lovers[img=Loving it] I love it and I recommend it
Great novel love the idea behind it, you can explorer so much with that type of premise. keep it up. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
The first 4 chapter I really enjoy reading them. The writing is in simple tone and the plot is straightforward but enjoyable. Overall, The story is pretty solid and I have high expection on it. Keep up the good work!
Cool, I really love your writing skills, especially this enemies to lover book. it want me keep reading but please try to upload more later in the future
The first two chapters are enough to spike the reader's interest. Loved it and would be waiting for more chapters. Keep releasing ❤
I love it!Enemies to lovers? Is this competing for WPC this month? Then count me in me, I will support you with some votes.👍I would like to recommend you use a different book cover with a little more attractiveness.Like some cool couple...Well, that's your book so it's your decision. But readers still look at the cover first before reading. I feel your book cover should change into something elseI am sorry if it offended you. I just told my idea as a reader wandering around the cover and the synopsis before thinking if I should read this. I guess there are more like me.I love the story I am not gonna tell anything else.Since it's only been 2 chaps, I will post another review one day when I got to read more. Thank u author for working hard on this. Keep going.
Its nice to see another author for Nigeria here good luck, and if you don't mind rate my book 5★ too
Congratulations on winning in the WPC contest! Good luck and happy writing! *****************************************************************
So, I read the first two chapters and I can already tell that this book will be interesting. Calla's and Davis's dynamic is so cute. From enemies in school, to arranged husband and wife and eventually potential lovers is an amazing dynamic. My favorite chapter so far is the second one because of how it ended with the teasing from Davis and the response from Calla. I can't wait to read more
The writing itself is fantastic, makes one wonder if they’re reading a wn or a traditionally published book. The author’s story telling is vivid, giving the reader the maximum immersion. Another thing which I really like about the writing is the transition, it’s flawless.
I took an overview but I really loved it. This is one of a kind, you don't have to define the characters cause every line will tell you the depth of a character and what makes it different from other characters. Even the ones who don't have a big role are given beautiful dialogues....Best Wishes!
A bold premise with a decent execution. The novel is fast paced enough to keep you on tenterhooks throughtout every chapter. It definitely wouldn't hurt anyone to read through half a dozen chapters and see if they vibe with it. It's good stuff in the genre. There are some oversights with punctuation, dialogue formatting and capitalization, but they can be glossed over by the average reader. Things I can't gloss over, though perhaps may be explored later, is the character inconsistency. The hatred is meant to be palpable, but all I see is tsundere energy. On the male side, he seems to have awfully low self-esteem, despite being a god in man's skin. While it is a novel, those rather unrealistic back and forth flops threw me off. Overall, it is decent read. For fans of the modern romance / marriage genre, it's 100% worth a click. It's not my cup of tea, but even I don't regret reading it. Good luck on the contest.
Enemies to lovers...Oh" am so following this book💝Davis what a cute name😘I love the book but add more efforts [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It is a good book. I was so into it that I almost got drowned. The characters were well designed and built. The author is just talented, I hope that this book gets the exposure that it deserves.
Good read, I’m not really into the marriage aspect of web novel, but it was well written, and did you know there’s a story with the same title lol— I was looking for it and found two so I’m not sure if this is the right one, but anyways— great job! Release more! Much love, S.T <3
I really like this story and I absolutely love the enemies to lovers trope! I’m definitely looking forward to this one! Keep up the great work author!
to be honest, it was a good start despite the simple storyline. Which makes me wonder of Calla's past relationship with the male lead so I'll be looking forwards to that
The writing is ok so As The plot and scenery...it's absolutely too good. Enemy to lovers[img=Loving it] I love it and I recommend it
Great novel love the idea behind it, you can explorer so much with that type of premise. keep it up. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
The first 4 chapter I really enjoy reading them. The writing is in simple tone and the plot is straightforward but enjoyable. Overall, The story is pretty solid and I have high expection on it. Keep up the good work!
Cool, I really love your writing skills, especially this enemies to lover book. it want me keep reading but please try to upload more later in the future
The first two chapters are enough to spike the reader's interest. Loved it and would be waiting for more chapters. Keep releasing ❤
I love it!Enemies to lovers? Is this competing for WPC this month? Then count me in me, I will support you with some votes.👍I would like to recommend you use a different book cover with a little more attractiveness.Like some cool couple...Well, that's your book so it's your decision. But readers still look at the cover first before reading. I feel your book cover should change into something elseI am sorry if it offended you. I just told my idea as a reader wandering around the cover and the synopsis before thinking if I should read this. I guess there are more like me.I love the story I am not gonna tell anything else.Since it's only been 2 chaps, I will post another review one day when I got to read more. Thank u author for working hard on this. Keep going.
Its nice to see another author for Nigeria here good luck, and if you don't mind rate my book 5★ too