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My first novel. Forbidden bloodline is a quality novel that mixes mages, bloodlines, and weapons. Although the bloodline uses in battle for some people might come later, you're going to love it. As for world-building, it looks ancient but the presence of mages increased technological advancement. So, in any modern technology, blame the mages and not the author✌️✌️✌️.Talking about the character design, I try to develop them with the plot. Excess dumping of information might slow the plot.
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] interesting story, keep update author!!!![img=update][img=coins][img=recommend]
My first novel. Forbidden bloodline is a quality novel that mixes mages, bloodlines, and weapons. Although the bloodline uses in battle for some people might come later, you're going to love it. As for world-building, it looks ancient but the presence of mages increased technological advancement. So, in any modern technology, blame the mages and not the author✌️✌️✌️.Talking about the character design, I try to develop them with the plot. Excess dumping of information might slow the plot.
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] interesting story, keep update author!!!![img=update][img=coins][img=recommend]