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From what I've read so far, this is a good story; I'm just not a fan of the MC's personality. I like the premise where he seeks a life of thrill leading to stepping outside the bounds of the law, but for what he's aspiring MC is too young and inexperienced so it all reads bravado. If your cup of tea is reading about an incredibly realistic depiction of a kid getting in over his head, give this novel a shot.
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Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?
Really entertaining started reading it around 9 pm didn’t even know what time it was until I saw the window and the sun was coming out I was like what the f### Read until chapter 10 and if you don’t like it your probably on drugs Just to let you guys know this novel is not for the weak
Great story, great character development, interesting plot development, and most of all a great villain MC that makes me disguste couldn’t recommend enough.
good job author. first of all, I would like to thank you, author. Recently, my days have been filled with monotonousness and boredom. Every single day felt like it was a faded, lesser copy of the previous day. Your novel brought me some amount of amusement when I read it and has inspired me to be more productive. I am inspired by Dionis's greed, although not influenced by his venomous nature, haha. I like that he hates wasting time and always thinks of something productive to do to improve his business. I am currently merely a student and have no plans on becoming some drug lord lol but I can understand that wasting time is foolish and not good in the long run. Thanks to you, now I have a little more appreciation for the privileges I am getting in life and are working hard on starting a business of my own (game developing). Thanks once again, author and keep up the good work. (rewritten review. I used slurs in my previous one, so it got buried by Webnovel lol.)
Now this is a great work with one of the best character development arcs I have read in recent times.I was searching for kingdom building and before this one I found a novel with a simp feminist mc who wants to spread feminism in mediaeval setting like a true SJW.lol it was pathetic and spoilt my mood.Your novel just brightened my day.So Thanks mate.
This novels legit amazing, the passion you put in as a young writer really makes me feel hopeful for your future books and future chapters of this book, personally I love realistic genres focused on dark aspects of life so this really does it for me, the main character is really to my liking as well.
Honestly, wow, i didnt expect this novel to be this good considering the mc was such a weakling in the beginning, considering he developed so much it makes me want more of the story, keep up with the good work author!
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Interesting book, as a good potential but I, personnaly, would have loved to have a more detailed transformation arc. I wait to see what the author as in store for us. My tought are that it would be great to add a romance in the much later stage, when he became a big boss, in the storie to push him to change again for better or worse. That's what I think, author, you can take it and make it wathever you want, surprise us, or trow my tought in the trash bin, your book after all.
This story is very entertaining, despite being a young author I can feel a lot of passion going into this book. The gangster genre remains for the most part untapped and this was the first story of the genre to hold my attention. I will watch your career with great interest.
This is one of the best kingdom building and evil mc stories I've read so far. It reminds me of the GTA and Peaky Blinders.
I've got to say this story has improved alot, in the first version Dionis just jumped into being a gangster, but in this new version the story shows him slowly getting to the point where he wants be one. Dionis also is fit to the point where I can believe that he can be a gangster and hold up in a fight. Great Job! can't wait to read more.
(Shamelessly rating my book 5 stars since I wrote it, and I'm biased) Are you looking for a story with a truly maniacal MC that will do anything even the most horrendous act of humanity to become a massive figure in the underworld industry? If yes, then, this story's for you!
From what I've read so far, this is a good story; I'm just not a fan of the MC's personality. I like the premise where he seeks a life of thrill leading to stepping outside the bounds of the law, but for what he's aspiring MC is too young and inexperienced so it all reads bravado. If your cup of tea is reading about an incredibly realistic depiction of a kid getting in over his head, give this novel a shot.
Reveal Spoiler Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?
Really entertaining started reading it around 9 pm didn’t even know what time it was until I saw the window and the sun was coming out I was like what the f### Read until chapter 10 and if you don’t like it your probably on drugs Just to let you guys know this novel is not for the weak
Great story, great character development, interesting plot development, and most of all a great villain MC that makes me disguste couldn’t recommend enough.
good job author. first of all, I would like to thank you, author. Recently, my days have been filled with monotonousness and boredom. Every single day felt like it was a faded, lesser copy of the previous day. Your novel brought me some amount of amusement when I read it and has inspired me to be more productive. I am inspired by Dionis's greed, although not influenced by his venomous nature, haha. I like that he hates wasting time and always thinks of something productive to do to improve his business. I am currently merely a student and have no plans on becoming some drug lord lol but I can understand that wasting time is foolish and not good in the long run. Thanks to you, now I have a little more appreciation for the privileges I am getting in life and are working hard on starting a business of my own (game developing). Thanks once again, author and keep up the good work. (rewritten review. I used slurs in my previous one, so it got buried by Webnovel lol.)
Now this is a great work with one of the best character development arcs I have read in recent times.I was searching for kingdom building and before this one I found a novel with a simp feminist mc who wants to spread feminism in mediaeval setting like a true SJW.lol it was pathetic and spoilt my mood.Your novel just brightened my day.So Thanks mate.
This novels legit amazing, the passion you put in as a young writer really makes me feel hopeful for your future books and future chapters of this book, personally I love realistic genres focused on dark aspects of life so this really does it for me, the main character is really to my liking as well.
Honestly, wow, i didnt expect this novel to be this good considering the mc was such a weakling in the beginning, considering he developed so much it makes me want more of the story, keep up with the good work author!
xp xp xp xp xpxp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp
Interesting book, as a good potential but I, personnaly, would have loved to have a more detailed transformation arc. I wait to see what the author as in store for us. My tought are that it would be great to add a romance in the much later stage, when he became a big boss, in the storie to push him to change again for better or worse. That's what I think, author, you can take it and make it wathever you want, surprise us, or trow my tought in the trash bin, your book after all.
This story is very entertaining, despite being a young author I can feel a lot of passion going into this book. The gangster genre remains for the most part untapped and this was the first story of the genre to hold my attention. I will watch your career with great interest.
This is one of the best kingdom building and evil mc stories I've read so far. It reminds me of the GTA and Peaky Blinders.
I've got to say this story has improved alot, in the first version Dionis just jumped into being a gangster, but in this new version the story shows him slowly getting to the point where he wants be one. Dionis also is fit to the point where I can believe that he can be a gangster and hold up in a fight. Great Job! can't wait to read more.
(Shamelessly rating my book 5 stars since I wrote it, and I'm biased) Are you looking for a story with a truly maniacal MC that will do anything even the most horrendous act of humanity to become a massive figure in the underworld industry? If yes, then, this story's for you!