Reviews of Jester from Abyss by Bru_Blue_DoDo - Webnovel

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False_Sage

Honestly Brother, I had read it till chapter 4 and I must say that It's very hard. But, It doesn't mean that the story is bad or anything but your plot isn't that compactible with Naruto. Although, If you changed the novel from fan-fic to sci-fi male lead it would we very good. except that this doesn't bode well with Naruto World, Everything is pretty good or best... I guess? Anyways, Love your work!^^

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Bru_Blue_DoDo

Evil MC with a little slow story progression.

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False_Sage

Honestly Brother, I had read it till chapter 4 and I must say that It's very hard. But, It doesn't mean that the story is bad or anything but your plot isn't that compactible with Naruto. Although, If you changed the novel from fan-fic to sci-fi male lead it would we very good. except that this doesn't bode well with Naruto World, Everything is pretty good or best... I guess? Anyways, Love your work!^^

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Bru_Blue_DoDo

Evil MC with a little slow story progression.

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