88Reviews
4.25
- Writing Quality
- Stability of Updates
- Story Development
- Character Design
- World Background
Share your thoughts with others
Write a review
the story was promising, also the character and world background is great imo. too bad the updating stability is horrible. dont waste your coins or ticket guys
this story is actually very good if one wants a break from continuous action novels but I don't think the plot is that good as only one thing keeps on repeating that some people look down on him and then get slapped it gets boring after some time pls don't criticise me this is just my op inion
the story is good but I am leaving this story because the author doesn't update regularly
great novel, but the author hardly updates. Sadly,hate privilege chapters can author remove privilege chapters š„²
Love this bookš The only thing Iām afraid of, is that author dropping this. Iāll die from sadness š¤§ I really want to purchase the privilege chuchu, unfortunately, Iām poor from head to toe charot š„ŗšµ The update is slow but every chapter is long [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] (Sorry for my english. Been reading MTL novels for months now, very damagingš¤£)
just update regularly .the ongoing story has potential but the author need to update regularly
Love the story so far. Great world building and character development. Love the family dynamic and his relationship with FL is adorable. 10/10 would recommend. I just wish it was updated faster.
While the story itself is really enjoyable there are some things that you should know. The update stability is really bad (if you read more reviews your gonna see), there was an update chapter where author made you spent coins for just to tell you that there is real life too and the story is now on Kindle Vella...., not a nice move and the chapter after that are apparently 60 coins (i only know of the one after the update chapter since i didnt continue at that point). So if you want all that with some enjoyment (if you like this kinda story your gonna like it i guess) go on but i would say its not worth it. sadly š«
dear author please dont be greedy by puting the chapters in the privilages . please update more or the readers maybe unintrested soon.
Is this in hiatus or dropped? It's the third week of no chapter updates... .
good fun, long quality chapters with the down side of slower uploads, with chapters being 2-3x longer than other novels the word count is probably similar to others. recommended.
Hello dear Author! First I would like to say, that you have created an amazing story. I am exceedingly thrilled, thinking of where you will take this in the future. I gave every category 5 stars, except update stability. Now, I am not one to complain without first considering a solution. May I propose doing a release one day of the month, and you could drop four big chapters. Heck maybe even five, if it was a good month lol. This way we as readers could receive more stability. Thank you again for this wonderful story! Keep up the great work. Respectfully, A Big Fan
Iām reposting a review bc the first time I read til chapter 38 or so if I remember correc and now Iām at chapter 70 and again the same stuff: the story is very good and I really like it very muchā¦ there are just some minor grammar errors and some wrong name here and there but still is very good but the update stability is the only downside of this novel as there are too few chapters and the updates are not consistent :( Oh btw there is an extra āchapterā after 70+ with some message stuff from the author and I think I read something of ākindleāā¦ what does the author mean? There is a kindle version of this novel? If so, where?
English, grammer, and writing all top notch. The story has clichƩs but sometimes subverts them slightly, keeping things interesting. My only complaint is that the author does not update more often.
I really, really loved this book. The way the author lets the story flow. Amazing work.
The story is pretty original and good and I like it very much. There are some minor grammatical error here and there but nothing much (there are novels out there that canāt even be read but here there are only some minor issue, nothing important). The only problem here is the update stabilityā¦ the release is random? I hope that the author can release more chapters and more frequently because the story is very unique and good! Thank you author for this good and new story :)
it's really good but the updates are so random sometimes up to three weeks nothing it's a pain
Only 70 chapters and you want to spend my money on you? Come back with this trash novel when it's ready, I hate to wait years for this trash. 140 characters llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll
great book, but yet again updating is horrible. I've purchased privileged chapters for what ,2 chapters only?!!!!!
Great story and read, only issue is the update stability and paid chapters. By the time new chapters are updated and you already bought into the paid chapters their gonna expire. The Author doesnāt release like 5 new chapters to replace the 4 already read under paid chapters so your essentially paying 200+ coins to unlock 1 chapter. Iām fine with the slow releases but it doesnāt work in the Authors case with the slow updates as heās now putting up barriers that only a idiot who doesnāt care would buy into
The only thing preventing this novel from topping the charts is authors willingness. [img=Speechless]
Trash face slapping Mc that is either a pushover or plays strong type of Novel only warning
i love the story, this is going to be one of my favorites but i hope there more updates in chapter because its more than a week their no new chapter.
the story was promising, also the character and world background is great imo. too bad the updating stability is horrible. dont waste your coins or ticket guys
this story is actually very good if one wants a break from continuous action novels but I don't think the plot is that good as only one thing keeps on repeating that some people look down on him and then get slapped it gets boring after some time pls don't criticise me this is just my op inion
the story is good but I am leaving this story because the author doesn't update regularly
great novel, but the author hardly updates. Sadly,hate privilege chapters can author remove privilege chapters š„²
Love this bookš The only thing Iām afraid of, is that author dropping this. Iāll die from sadness š¤§ I really want to purchase the privilege chuchu, unfortunately, Iām poor from head to toe charot š„ŗšµ The update is slow but every chapter is long [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] (Sorry for my english. Been reading MTL novels for months now, very damagingš¤£)
just update regularly .the ongoing story has potential but the author need to update regularly
Love the story so far. Great world building and character development. Love the family dynamic and his relationship with FL is adorable. 10/10 would recommend. I just wish it was updated faster.
While the story itself is really enjoyable there are some things that you should know. The update stability is really bad (if you read more reviews your gonna see), there was an update chapter where author made you spent coins for just to tell you that there is real life too and the story is now on Kindle Vella...., not a nice move and the chapter after that are apparently 60 coins (i only know of the one after the update chapter since i didnt continue at that point). So if you want all that with some enjoyment (if you like this kinda story your gonna like it i guess) go on but i would say its not worth it. sadly š«
dear author please dont be greedy by puting the chapters in the privilages . please update more or the readers maybe unintrested soon.
Is this in hiatus or dropped? It's the third week of no chapter updates... .
good fun, long quality chapters with the down side of slower uploads, with chapters being 2-3x longer than other novels the word count is probably similar to others. recommended.
Hello dear Author! First I would like to say, that you have created an amazing story. I am exceedingly thrilled, thinking of where you will take this in the future. I gave every category 5 stars, except update stability. Now, I am not one to complain without first considering a solution. May I propose doing a release one day of the month, and you could drop four big chapters. Heck maybe even five, if it was a good month lol. This way we as readers could receive more stability. Thank you again for this wonderful story! Keep up the great work. Respectfully, A Big Fan
Iām reposting a review bc the first time I read til chapter 38 or so if I remember correc and now Iām at chapter 70 and again the same stuff: the story is very good and I really like it very muchā¦ there are just some minor grammar errors and some wrong name here and there but still is very good but the update stability is the only downside of this novel as there are too few chapters and the updates are not consistent :( Oh btw there is an extra āchapterā after 70+ with some message stuff from the author and I think I read something of ākindleāā¦ what does the author mean? There is a kindle version of this novel? If so, where?
English, grammer, and writing all top notch. The story has clichƩs but sometimes subverts them slightly, keeping things interesting. My only complaint is that the author does not update more often.
I really, really loved this book. The way the author lets the story flow. Amazing work.
The story is pretty original and good and I like it very much. There are some minor grammatical error here and there but nothing much (there are novels out there that canāt even be read but here there are only some minor issue, nothing important). The only problem here is the update stabilityā¦ the release is random? I hope that the author can release more chapters and more frequently because the story is very unique and good! Thank you author for this good and new story :)
it's really good but the updates are so random sometimes up to three weeks nothing it's a pain
Only 70 chapters and you want to spend my money on you? Come back with this trash novel when it's ready, I hate to wait years for this trash. 140 characters llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll
great book, but yet again updating is horrible. I've purchased privileged chapters for what ,2 chapters only?!!!!!
Great story and read, only issue is the update stability and paid chapters. By the time new chapters are updated and you already bought into the paid chapters their gonna expire. The Author doesnāt release like 5 new chapters to replace the 4 already read under paid chapters so your essentially paying 200+ coins to unlock 1 chapter. Iām fine with the slow releases but it doesnāt work in the Authors case with the slow updates as heās now putting up barriers that only a idiot who doesnāt care would buy into
The only thing preventing this novel from topping the charts is authors willingness. [img=Speechless]
Trash face slapping Mc that is either a pushover or plays strong type of Novel only warning
i love the story, this is going to be one of my favorites but i hope there more updates in chapter because its more than a week their no new chapter.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~