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This is starting to get annoying, so I wish the author success, and with that I say goodbye .
It is just another MHA fanfic. The author... how can I say it, a lot of times you will be able to notice that he doesn't put a lot of thought behind what he writes, which makes the whole story go down a few notes. This is a very dumbly written story and the author doesn shy away from it either.
Its quite good to usj incident chapter where iam reading. I haven't watched black clover so i don't know if the MC is too OP but i feel that he is OP. Author is trying to introduce romance slowly and fluently which i found great. Grammar is average at least it is fluent and readable.The starting chapters felt kinda rushed to me, Mc's life before reaching 15years was just briefly described and left which left a bad taste. Sometimes author doesn't writes something like infos,fights, conversation in canon which is both good and bad. All in all, this fanfic has great potential just the update time is very long.
Get ready for the often chuuni adventure of a guy with shadow powers. ________________________________________________________________________________
MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!VV
Its not that bad ngl kinda enjoy that .......................................................................................................................................,.......................
This is a pretty good MHA fanfic with a good premise and powers. I just pray that the author doesn’t drop & can keep a manageable update schedule, all in all good read
I really like MC's with shadow powers cuz they look cool i hope this wont be dropped cuz this is kinda interesting also i give 3 star because its on MHA i dont hate MHA but i just got bored of it and i already read a ton of it. thats all for me the novel is good. [img=recommend]
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This is starting to get annoying, so I wish the author success, and with that I say goodbye .
It is just another MHA fanfic. The author... how can I say it, a lot of times you will be able to notice that he doesn't put a lot of thought behind what he writes, which makes the whole story go down a few notes. This is a very dumbly written story and the author doesn shy away from it either.
Its quite good to usj incident chapter where iam reading. I haven't watched black clover so i don't know if the MC is too OP but i feel that he is OP. Author is trying to introduce romance slowly and fluently which i found great. Grammar is average at least it is fluent and readable.The starting chapters felt kinda rushed to me, Mc's life before reaching 15years was just briefly described and left which left a bad taste. Sometimes author doesn't writes something like infos,fights, conversation in canon which is both good and bad. All in all, this fanfic has great potential just the update time is very long.
Get ready for the often chuuni adventure of a guy with shadow powers. ________________________________________________________________________________
MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!MORE!!!!VV
Its not that bad ngl kinda enjoy that .......................................................................................................................................,.......................
This is a pretty good MHA fanfic with a good premise and powers. I just pray that the author doesn’t drop & can keep a manageable update schedule, all in all good read
I really like MC's with shadow powers cuz they look cool i hope this wont be dropped cuz this is kinda interesting also i give 3 star because its on MHA i dont hate MHA but i just got bored of it and i already read a ton of it. thats all for me the novel is good. [img=recommend]
gona need more to to have a opinion of this story[img=thinking][img=thinking]