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Almost daily Almost Good beginning, have to get into the story to read further. But nice, names are weird , story gets better with time Ummmm idk what more
Beggining is meh, probably starting author. It slowly and slowly gets better. But slowly. and short chapters and dividing chapters is problem But quotes tho,
Daily updates, nice pace of developement , not unecessary dialouge or over explaining everything Some minor mistakes in writing but still pretty nice. except the beginning, that can be skipped.
Not the best writing style but still can get into the story. still nothing happened though
Still waiting for the bad guy If any is there I hope But still kinda good. Kinda, cause there are better on the platform But out of the new ones ist pretty good
Almost daily Almost Good beginning, have to get into the story to read further. But nice, names are weird , story gets better with time Ummmm idk what more
Beggining is meh, probably starting author. It slowly and slowly gets better. But slowly. and short chapters and dividing chapters is problem But quotes tho,
Daily updates, nice pace of developement , not unecessary dialouge or over explaining everything Some minor mistakes in writing but still pretty nice. except the beginning, that can be skipped.
Not the best writing style but still can get into the story. still nothing happened though
Still waiting for the bad guy If any is there I hope But still kinda good. Kinda, cause there are better on the platform But out of the new ones ist pretty good