Reviews of Tensura: Broken Heart by GodOfPeacefulDeath - Webnovel

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GodOfPeacefulDeath

Right now, I'm very mad at some people, I will not take their names, but after reading this review, they'll understand, So first of all, a person told me that my use of tenses is bad, I agree since English is my second language, and, you know that the grammar is going to be bad if you "read" the synopsis, and the author stated that English is their second language. However, that is a minor issue, the SAME person commented that MY FANFIC is a copy n paste of the Webnovel, just at a faster pace, NOW you tell ME that can you criticize a novel without READING IT COMPLETELY!? As of now there are 36 or 37 chapters, and they said this 'Your fic is complete copy n paste of the Webnovel, I'm disappointed' at chapter 9! Honestly, I'm more disappointed in readers like these. But I don't care anymore, This fic only has like, 58 or 59 chapters. And I'm gonna complete it in 2 days.

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somberr
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i really like it, although as far as i'm at (chapter 11) not much has changed except that rimuru got much stronger before, he became a true dragon in chapter 10.but i appreciate the mc and how the story could develop.

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Rose_BloodKill

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GodOfPeacefulDeath

Right now, I'm very mad at some people, I will not take their names, but after reading this review, they'll understand, So first of all, a person told me that my use of tenses is bad, I agree since English is my second language, and, you know that the grammar is going to be bad if you "read" the synopsis, and the author stated that English is their second language. However, that is a minor issue, the SAME person commented that MY FANFIC is a copy n paste of the Webnovel, just at a faster pace, NOW you tell ME that can you criticize a novel without READING IT COMPLETELY!? As of now there are 36 or 37 chapters, and they said this 'Your fic is complete copy n paste of the Webnovel, I'm disappointed' at chapter 9! Honestly, I'm more disappointed in readers like these. But I don't care anymore, This fic only has like, 58 or 59 chapters. And I'm gonna complete it in 2 days.

1yr
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somberr
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i really like it, although as far as i'm at (chapter 11) not much has changed except that rimuru got much stronger before, he became a true dragon in chapter 10.but i appreciate the mc and how the story could develop.

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1yr
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Rose_BloodKill

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