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this one is also really good and I hope you continue I do think it has more potential than the first one but I hope you continue both of them
For having good expections from the author. Pray that he won't drop the fic & complete it with gracefulness. Will give a proper review after the completion of the story.
This version is already way better than the first. The MC is not immediately OP. The power he got is just good enough to let him survive vampires and the knowledge he asked for is good for making money without being able to take over the world with it.
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Pixies are the cutest ya cant Prove me wrong, so here is another version of Alice
This work is something you can read even with cursory knowledge of Twilight and still enjoy it. I enjoy your work and would love to see more from you if the muse gives you more to work with.
this one is also really good and I hope you continue I do think it has more potential than the first one but I hope you continue both of them
For having good expections from the author. Pray that he won't drop the fic & complete it with gracefulness. Will give a proper review after the completion of the story.
This version is already way better than the first. The MC is not immediately OP. The power he got is just good enough to let him survive vampires and the knowledge he asked for is good for making money without being able to take over the world with it.
Reveal Spoiler Pixies are the cutest ya cant Prove me wrong, so here is another version of Alice
This work is something you can read even with cursory knowledge of Twilight and still enjoy it. I enjoy your work and would love to see more from you if the muse gives you more to work with.