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I like this story. The only issue I have is the relationship between mc and his aunt.
Good for me. Plot is ok and grammar is readable. What i really like the Mc is op. You should focust character development and world building. Keep writing author, your book has the potential!
the story is really good and unique and special i love it so much already i hope there will be more chapter and long chapter too not like now also i don't like nerfEd mc most novel who have op mc or mc who have a lot of potential tend to weaken the mc so that the story can continue i hope it will not happen here there is no problems with having to face more powerful enemies than to let the mc be weakened also there is a sign of possible future incect relationship and i don't mind at all it would be more exciting that way and the world is a fantasy world its would definitely not be like our really world so even if some fan don't like it i don't mind and i also encourage it in the end i have to say that i hate tragedy so much so if there will be a future tragedies i will be dropping the novel early and thank you for your hard work its really a wonderful novel and i enjoy it dearly 💕
I like this story. The only issue I have is the relationship between mc and his aunt.
Good for me. Plot is ok and grammar is readable. What i really like the Mc is op. You should focust character development and world building. Keep writing author, your book has the potential!
the story is really good and unique and special i love it so much already i hope there will be more chapter and long chapter too not like now also i don't like nerfEd mc most novel who have op mc or mc who have a lot of potential tend to weaken the mc so that the story can continue i hope it will not happen here there is no problems with having to face more powerful enemies than to let the mc be weakened also there is a sign of possible future incect relationship and i don't mind at all it would be more exciting that way and the world is a fantasy world its would definitely not be like our really world so even if some fan don't like it i don't mind and i also encourage it in the end i have to say that i hate tragedy so much so if there will be a future tragedies i will be dropping the novel early and thank you for your hard work its really a wonderful novel and i enjoy it dearly 💕