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Very good author. It has some little problems, but in general the novel is good. I look forward to more in the future.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
5 stars because of the harem. Haters can go suck a lemon. ............................................... ...............................................
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10/10 would recommend. It's always nice to have a Mc with no cheats become op with only his intelligence, wit, and hard work.
Is good but the mc contradicts himself all the time, although I guess it's his anxious personality. mmmm keep writing, try to improve the descriptions between characters and conversations. successes
Pretty interesting concept. I'll add it to my library. Just giving 5 star to offset the one star review. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Muito bom, não drope! O fato dele não ter nenhuma trapaça apenas me atrai para ler. Gosto de ver os protagonista treinando e se dedicando mais que qualquer um para ficar mais forte porque não tem nenhum chegar.
I'm really enjoying this Naruto fanfic. The author has done a great job with the main character's story. But, I'm worried about the author turning the story into a harem, as they mentioned in a reply. I think it might take away from the story's quality. The idea of adding Karin and other girls to the mix also seems off to me. I'm sure with Karin that it'll turn the plot into a rescue story but I hope you make her just grateful, no need to turn her into a complete love interest beside Hinata. Having the MC and Hinata as a love interest is really enough, we don't want this to turn into a cliché story with an MC that goes around getting girls like he's hunting for Pokémon's, and forget about the actual story that we the readers are interested in. A lot of times authors just forget about the actual story, and start fantasizing about other girls which is just lame honestly. Even though I'm not into the harem idea, I know it's the author's story to write. I'm curious to see how they will handle it. So far, this fanfic is a fun ride. Keep it up, author!
Is great story but I hope he doesn't always getting what him want like getting best Jonin trainer or someone give him scrolls of something or he somehow make op jutsu. So overall I am satisfied with this fanfic and looking forward to new chapters.
this is good but honestly, I dislike the harem aspect. I'm fine with it but I honestly think there should be an equivalent strength necessary for it. Because harems won't actually work in that world unless you're a daimyo or someone with a huge position of power. Honestly, I don't see how he can catch up to Sasuke or Naruto. I think he could reach Kakashi's level though.
Sorry, for the fact that this is harem i have to decline , and give it a bad review beacose i hate harem ..............................................
story is good you should give more chapters....................................................................................................................................................................................................
this sounds like an interesting story so I have high hopes for it, also I love harem. I mean why not harem, books to me are meant to entertain and explore with your imagination so why not. also please put a harem tag.
Very good author. It has some little problems, but in general the novel is good. I look forward to more in the future.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
5 stars because of the harem. Haters can go suck a lemon. ............................................... ...............................................
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10/10 would recommend. It's always nice to have a Mc with no cheats become op with only his intelligence, wit, and hard work.
Is good but the mc contradicts himself all the time, although I guess it's his anxious personality. mmmm keep writing, try to improve the descriptions between characters and conversations. successes
Pretty interesting concept. I'll add it to my library. Just giving 5 star to offset the one star review. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Muito bom, não drope! O fato dele não ter nenhuma trapaça apenas me atrai para ler. Gosto de ver os protagonista treinando e se dedicando mais que qualquer um para ficar mais forte porque não tem nenhum chegar.
I'm really enjoying this Naruto fanfic. The author has done a great job with the main character's story. But, I'm worried about the author turning the story into a harem, as they mentioned in a reply. I think it might take away from the story's quality. The idea of adding Karin and other girls to the mix also seems off to me. I'm sure with Karin that it'll turn the plot into a rescue story but I hope you make her just grateful, no need to turn her into a complete love interest beside Hinata. Having the MC and Hinata as a love interest is really enough, we don't want this to turn into a cliché story with an MC that goes around getting girls like he's hunting for Pokémon's, and forget about the actual story that we the readers are interested in. A lot of times authors just forget about the actual story, and start fantasizing about other girls which is just lame honestly. Even though I'm not into the harem idea, I know it's the author's story to write. I'm curious to see how they will handle it. So far, this fanfic is a fun ride. Keep it up, author!
Is great story but I hope he doesn't always getting what him want like getting best Jonin trainer or someone give him scrolls of something or he somehow make op jutsu. So overall I am satisfied with this fanfic and looking forward to new chapters.
this is good but honestly, I dislike the harem aspect. I'm fine with it but I honestly think there should be an equivalent strength necessary for it. Because harems won't actually work in that world unless you're a daimyo or someone with a huge position of power. Honestly, I don't see how he can catch up to Sasuke or Naruto. I think he could reach Kakashi's level though.
Sorry, for the fact that this is harem i have to decline , and give it a bad review beacose i hate harem ..............................................
story is good you should give more chapters....................................................................................................................................................................................................
this sounds like an interesting story so I have high hopes for it, also I love harem. I mean why not harem, books to me are meant to entertain and explore with your imagination so why not. also please put a harem tag.