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I believe the author's lean is 5 or 6. but realistically he's probably 10 years old. at least he has reached the intelligence capacity to read the full moon. Although he did not understand much more than that, we can understand that he can read and write. You can come and read when you are very down, people stupider than you write novels like this.
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Concept is new and strange but good so far everything is progressing in a good way, and I hope you don't drop as it has a lot of potential if you do it right
Fast plot does not make senseLogical coercion does not make senseThe author who didn't even understand the original story of douluo dalu, couldn't even distinguish Gu Yuena, Gu Yue and naer. MCs act like young masters
Ini novel fanfic douluo yang bagus karena memiliki konsep yang baru daripada novel fanfic douluo yang lainnya saya harap novel ini akan terus ter update
I believe the author's lean is 5 or 6. but realistically he's probably 10 years old. at least he has reached the intelligence capacity to read the full moon. Although he did not understand much more than that, we can understand that he can read and write. You can come and read when you are very down, people stupider than you write novels like this.
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Concept is new and strange but good so far everything is progressing in a good way, and I hope you don't drop as it has a lot of potential if you do it right
Fast plot does not make senseLogical coercion does not make senseThe author who didn't even understand the original story of douluo dalu, couldn't even distinguish Gu Yuena, Gu Yue and naer. MCs act like young masters