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The writing style is all narration and the development of the story is generic and its a cool concept but ruined by wish-fullfilment? You’ll get it if you read
Great Story Building Great Approach to each Character Recommended /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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It is a pretty decent novel, MC is okayish, Grammer is below average with some mistakes(use grammerly).I liked how you dealt with the cur. Keep it up. It is definitely a good read. Funny thing is I can pay you 4 times the price for parteon unfortunately my parents will not allow online transactions .
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this story is literally hook you up with its plot and i personally kind of wanted to read thousands of chapter of this ff..
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In general, in terms of story development, it's quite good, the character design and everything else is quite good, the only thing lacking is the stability of the updates and that's all, hopefully the stability of the updates will be further improved.
Tirando o fato que a história é mais uma narração, e não exatamente demonstra um desenvolvimento dos personagens e do mundo, pra mim é uma história excelente .— (Portuguese - Brazilian. My native language). With the exception of the fact that this story has a text focused on narration, and not exactly character development and story background, it is an excellent story, I really liked it. — (Text Translated by Google Translate).
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Puta merda, que delícia. Por favor, não pare de atualizar essa história. O Naruto pode ser um pouco duro as vezes, talvez você não saiba disso, mas o Naruto também cresceu sem pai. Na verdade ele nunca conheceu nenhum de seus pais, e nunca teve nenhum amigo em nossa aldeia. Mesmo assim eu nunca vi ele chorar, ficar zangado ou se dar por vencido, ele está sempre disposto a melhorar, ele quer ser respeitado, é o sonho dele e o Naruto daria a vida por isso sem hesitar. Meu palpite é que ele se cansou de chorar e decidiu fazer alguma coisa a respeito!
The author is piece of shit and hid over 150 chapters just so that people would buy them on his patreon. Do not support him here please, however the book is really good.
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The writing style is all narration and the development of the story is generic and its a cool concept but ruined by wish-fullfilment? You’ll get it if you read
Great Story Building Great Approach to each Character Recommended /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
quite a good novel .............................................................................................................................,.,.,.,.,.,,..,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,..,,.,.,..,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,
It is a pretty decent novel, MC is okayish, Grammer is below average with some mistakes(use grammerly).I liked how you dealt with the cur. Keep it up. It is definitely a good read. Funny thing is I can pay you 4 times the price for parteon unfortunately my parents will not allow online transactions .
keep going on good story 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 sar 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star
this story is literally hook you up with its plot and i personally kind of wanted to read thousands of chapter of this ff..
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In general, in terms of story development, it's quite good, the character design and everything else is quite good, the only thing lacking is the stability of the updates and that's all, hopefully the stability of the updates will be further improved.
Tirando o fato que a história é mais uma narração, e não exatamente demonstra um desenvolvimento dos personagens e do mundo, pra mim é uma história excelente .— (Portuguese - Brazilian. My native language). With the exception of the fact that this story has a text focused on narration, and not exactly character development and story background, it is an excellent story, I really liked it. — (Text Translated by Google Translate).
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Puta merda, que delícia. Por favor, não pare de atualizar essa história. O Naruto pode ser um pouco duro as vezes, talvez você não saiba disso, mas o Naruto também cresceu sem pai. Na verdade ele nunca conheceu nenhum de seus pais, e nunca teve nenhum amigo em nossa aldeia. Mesmo assim eu nunca vi ele chorar, ficar zangado ou se dar por vencido, ele está sempre disposto a melhorar, ele quer ser respeitado, é o sonho dele e o Naruto daria a vida por isso sem hesitar. Meu palpite é que ele se cansou de chorar e decidiu fazer alguma coisa a respeito!
The author is piece of shit and hid over 150 chapters just so that people would buy them on his patreon. Do not support him here please, however the book is really good.