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Write a reviewYou need to change a little the sinopsys as it gives the impression that he killed all the immortals with him in the explosion and in chapter 1 he was the only one who died. Makes the chapter a little anticlimatic. He was like, I will kill all of you with me, and then it was just him who died.
Reveal SpoilerMeowkingly— I, as the author of this fanfic give a 5-star review, it may be shameless of me even though the ff is just a so-so. I, as the Grand Author at the Peak of Mortal Ascension Realm, give you my reader's advice, I have no updated schedule as I'm busy nurturing my apprentices, I dove over the cosmic to find love but i couldn't... (PS: This is a Manhua Fanfucs mixed with some...—)
You need to change a little the sinopsys as it gives the impression that he killed all the immortals with him in the explosion and in chapter 1 he was the only one who died. Makes the chapter a little anticlimatic. He was like, I will kill all of you with me, and then it was just him who died.
Reveal Spoiler
Meowkingly— I, as the author of this fanfic give a 5-star review, it may be shameless of me even though the ff is just a so-so. I, as the Grand Author at the Peak of Mortal Ascension Realm, give you my reader's advice, I have no updated schedule as I'm busy nurturing my apprentices, I dove over the cosmic to find love but i couldn't... (PS: This is a Manhua Fanfucs mixed with some...—)