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Write a reviewI have to say I didn't expect this kind of quality from the story with no reviews. There are minimum grammatical errors and your writing is easy to understand. I also like interactions between your characters as they seem genuine compared to descriptions of events that other authors often use. All the small little talks give the reader clues about the character's personalities and desires is something I enjoy quite a bit. The story is only in the beginning but I already can't wait for what comes next, so I hope you will continue.
I have to say I didn't expect this kind of quality from the story with no reviews. There are minimum grammatical errors and your writing is easy to understand. I also like interactions between your characters as they seem genuine compared to descriptions of events that other authors often use. All the small little talks give the reader clues about the character's personalities and desires is something I enjoy quite a bit. The story is only in the beginning but I already can't wait for what comes next, so I hope you will continue.