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jungkooks_luna

This book was an intriguing story and I found it to be a great read. It had secret and thrilling twists and turns that kept my interest throughout. I liked how the story was about a powerful mafia boss and a young woman who was desperate to survive. I also have to mention how compelling the characters were. Nico and his chocolate croissants and his nickname for Cat as ''snow'' was interesting. Looking forward to reading more about William and Cat.

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Micaol

Its truly breathtaking like a thriller, when I was reading it I could feel my imagination coming alive. Its got good grammar, world buildup and the characters are introduced very well. I'd recommend this to my friends for sure.

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Pinkyprincess

Oh my God! The first chapter itself is enough to give you goosebumps! I mean, how could I have missed this jewel?! I rarely read first pov novels, but this one's a gem! Good luck, author!

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Googies2006

I love this book so much, but I feel like the pictures don't do justice to them. I feel like the look better describe then the pictures. hopefully, we'll get some that does justice to them. I also feel like Nico secretly like cat not as a friend or sister

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Googies2006

I really love this book.. I pray it finishes until the end. no offense, some authors get us hooked to bam leave us hanging. you're a good writer keep up the good work

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THE_WORDSMITH

This is an initial review. I like the way the author has written the story. Flips in POVs are interesting and funny. Another thing that I like is how both the characters are so different, yet they carry a subtle similarity in their natures. The flow is good and connected. I look forward to reading more, just a few tiny corrections; please re-read and correct the typos.

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mimioff1cial

First chapter is enough to have me hooked up, how come I missed such a gem!

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Mirelle_21

This is one of my favorite books. I love the storyline, how there are secrets to be revealed ,the character development it's just so perfect.

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Pretty_Kora

This is an interesting book I just hope author-san has not dropped it

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PrettyDaydream

I can't believe it only took chocolate cake to make William jealous [img=More pls][img=More pls] no seriously, we need more chapters

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Forgetful30

I need more more more chapters. I am enjoying this a lil too much

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TwoTwelve

Everything about this book is great. Now if the author would publish more chapters please

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La_meilleure

I have fallen in love with this book. I love Will and Nico the most.

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Homebody12456

The beginning is intense. I hope the rest of the book is just a good

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jungkooks_luna

This book was an intriguing story and I found it to be a great read. It had secret and thrilling twists and turns that kept my interest throughout. I liked how the story was about a powerful mafia boss and a young woman who was desperate to survive. I also have to mention how compelling the characters were. Nico and his chocolate croissants and his nickname for Cat as ''snow'' was interesting. Looking forward to reading more about William and Cat.

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1yr
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Micaol

Its truly breathtaking like a thriller, when I was reading it I could feel my imagination coming alive. Its got good grammar, world buildup and the characters are introduced very well. I'd recommend this to my friends for sure.

1yr
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Pinkyprincess

Oh my God! The first chapter itself is enough to give you goosebumps! I mean, how could I have missed this jewel?! I rarely read first pov novels, but this one's a gem! Good luck, author!

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1yr
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Googies2006

I love this book so much, but I feel like the pictures don't do justice to them. I feel like the look better describe then the pictures. hopefully, we'll get some that does justice to them. I also feel like Nico secretly like cat not as a friend or sister

8mth
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Googies2006

I really love this book.. I pray it finishes until the end. no offense, some authors get us hooked to bam leave us hanging. you're a good writer keep up the good work

8mth
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THE_WORDSMITH

This is an initial review. I like the way the author has written the story. Flips in POVs are interesting and funny. Another thing that I like is how both the characters are so different, yet they carry a subtle similarity in their natures. The flow is good and connected. I look forward to reading more, just a few tiny corrections; please re-read and correct the typos.

10mth
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mimioff1cial

First chapter is enough to have me hooked up, how come I missed such a gem!

1yr
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Mirelle_21

This is one of my favorite books. I love the storyline, how there are secrets to be revealed ,the character development it's just so perfect.

1yr
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Pretty_Kora

This is an interesting book I just hope author-san has not dropped it

1yr
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PrettyDaydream

I can't believe it only took chocolate cake to make William jealous [img=More pls][img=More pls] no seriously, we need more chapters

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1yr
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Forgetful30

I need more more more chapters. I am enjoying this a lil too much

1yr
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TwoTwelve

Everything about this book is great. Now if the author would publish more chapters please

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La_meilleure

I have fallen in love with this book. I love Will and Nico the most.

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Homebody12456

The beginning is intense. I hope the rest of the book is just a good

1yr
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