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The concept is pretty interesting but the author has some questionable plot points like mc doing or not doing something that anyone with mcu knowledge or common sense would do or not do. Mc sometimes tries to alter canon events yet other times its like his brain goes out the window and allows people to dieor event to take place. Also the author seems to be too obsessed with details and how things work that sometimes it becomes extra jargon. Sometimes we get walls of text of useless info and very little content
Okay, so far the story is just Okay. It has way too much unnecessary information. So expect a lot of chapters for no real reason. Because the stuff in those chapters could have been summarised into 1 chapter and it would have felt the same. Now, it's a bit weird that the MC is always in the chapters but he feels like he doesn't exist. Or should I say, it feels like he doesn't exist for anyone but Tony and Pepper. Becuase he as a character is relatively ignored by everyone else. He makes Baymax and everyone just acts like it's normal. There is no overall shock by the people around him. It's almost like "Oh, cool! A futuristic robot that can heal you! And it was made by a 14 year old kid! Anyways, so what are you doing Tony?". Even what I just said feels like more of a reaction then the people gave in the story. Because of that it just feels like the MC is a background character while Tony is the main character. The Author seems to be wanting to push the MCU story forward but by doing so the MC's story in this fanfic is suffering. Now, I am only 44 ish chapters in, and I will continue to read it. But so far it is a 3.5-star story. Nothing more, and nothing less. I would only recommend it if you have no other stories to read.
Hi love lithos work could you please tell us why you haven’t updated in awhile.
Não importa o que o MC faça. Quase nada mudanças no enredo. Àaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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it's so long winded. basically a lot of unnecessary explanation of things the mc does. ngl that's the only downfall for this book. story is interesting enough.
The rest of the Marvel: Little Genius chapters will only be available on Patreon, right? '_' //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
this is an amazing story and I love it but please update it. has been 18 days now. if you have writer's block just send the mc to a different universe
It was good at the beginning, but towards the end (300...) it started to get boring. The main character finds many inventions and strengthens himself, but either he does not use any of them or they remain powerless. The events are the same as the movies, only there is a MC in the environment, nothing else. I guess the reason why the main character doesn't use his powers is because the writer isn't smart enough to get it out of the movies. Since the writer's talent is limited, all the events are just a cheap copy of the movies. If you are going to read this series for the inventions, go for it, but if you want to read novels, this is not for you. The characters are soulless. We mostly see the MC so the side characters are stale and unnecessary.
Got to chapter 108 before dropping it. Honestly well translated especially with the fact that this translator is posting multiple and probably doesn’t have much time to proof read everything. [SPOILERS BELOW] Mark is a decently well written character with a clear background that explains his obsessive love for money and his intellect is proven numerous times as he creates new inventions. Sadly that’s where my praise for the story ends. The original author refuses to divert from canon even once. He continuously makes Mark and Tony “stronger” just for the same canon events to happen because the author can’t seem to create their own plot. I finally dropped the story at 108 because Mark had just quite literally nuked a small town to defeat The Destroyer; just for it to do no damage and have to instead be defeated by Thor’s return to might.
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Muito legal,foi uma das melhores novel da Marvel que li Principalmente com tecnologia etc Top Top Top Kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkmkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
will mark have a love interest? maybe Wanda or MJ(just give Peter to liz or an OC Gwen Stacy)
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Both the original novel and the translation can be summed up in one word, lazy.
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I'm dying by how funny the comments is whenever Chinese culture and idioms inexplicably appears😂😂
The translator did great, sadly the source is just badly written. Basically we have an American story with dialogues that written for low brow Chinese readers. An apt analogy would be if an American writer wrote about a local American who Isekai'd in China, then write a whole dialogue revolving around the "pull my finger" joke.
one of the greatest marvel fanfictions I've ever read,,,has a fresh outlook on the MCU but still keeping the major timeline events.....just dont'tlike that the updating speed has been delayed and reduced the number of chapters updated💔💔
Começa a se tornar chato quando o protagonista não tem personalidade e tudo é extremamente facilitado.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
its basically the original MCU, the MC doesn't change anything story relevant genius MC forgets plot so the author doesn't need to actually creat a new story characters don't act like the original
it is great and has a good story but the chapters are a bit short and the story closely follows marvel with out large changes. still a great story.
It was good at first but what bothered me was how everyone seemed to look to the MC to solve their problems. The characters were written as though they didn't know what to do with something and could only turn to the MC for help. It was just annoying because while the MC is smart, he is still a teenage boy and it's unrealistic how much authority and trust he is given right off the bat.
best character in Marvel fanfiction I have read so far I hope you make mc more than tecno man and give him some useful abilities that he can have without using nanobots or other armors
Sorry if it's written crookedly I'm a Russian who doesn't speak English well, but I'll say this: your translation is so high-quality that I get great pleasure from this work reading through Yandex translator =)
It is a fascinating story that somewhat contains Asian undertone which makes it funny and annoying at the same time. Just reduce the Asian grammar in the story and it will be a masterpiece.
It's light reaper so you already know the translation is a banger, very good. Novel is amazing so far, Interaction between mark and tony is really well done, especially tony's personality here. A lot of potential for this novel, I definitely recommend this, no reason to not give it a try.
The concept is pretty interesting but the author has some questionable plot points like mc doing or not doing something that anyone with mcu knowledge or common sense would do or not do. Mc sometimes tries to alter canon events yet other times its like his brain goes out the window and allows people to dieor event to take place. Also the author seems to be too obsessed with details and how things work that sometimes it becomes extra jargon. Sometimes we get walls of text of useless info and very little content
Okay, so far the story is just Okay. It has way too much unnecessary information. So expect a lot of chapters for no real reason. Because the stuff in those chapters could have been summarised into 1 chapter and it would have felt the same. Now, it's a bit weird that the MC is always in the chapters but he feels like he doesn't exist. Or should I say, it feels like he doesn't exist for anyone but Tony and Pepper. Becuase he as a character is relatively ignored by everyone else. He makes Baymax and everyone just acts like it's normal. There is no overall shock by the people around him. It's almost like "Oh, cool! A futuristic robot that can heal you! And it was made by a 14 year old kid! Anyways, so what are you doing Tony?". Even what I just said feels like more of a reaction then the people gave in the story. Because of that it just feels like the MC is a background character while Tony is the main character. The Author seems to be wanting to push the MCU story forward but by doing so the MC's story in this fanfic is suffering. Now, I am only 44 ish chapters in, and I will continue to read it. But so far it is a 3.5-star story. Nothing more, and nothing less. I would only recommend it if you have no other stories to read.
Hi love lithos work could you please tell us why you haven’t updated in awhile.
Não importa o que o MC faça. Quase nada mudanças no enredo. Àaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Reveal Spoiler ................,...........................................,................................................,..............................................................
it's so long winded. basically a lot of unnecessary explanation of things the mc does. ngl that's the only downfall for this book. story is interesting enough.
The rest of the Marvel: Little Genius chapters will only be available on Patreon, right? '_' //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
this is an amazing story and I love it but please update it. has been 18 days now. if you have writer's block just send the mc to a different universe
It was good at the beginning, but towards the end (300...) it started to get boring. The main character finds many inventions and strengthens himself, but either he does not use any of them or they remain powerless. The events are the same as the movies, only there is a MC in the environment, nothing else. I guess the reason why the main character doesn't use his powers is because the writer isn't smart enough to get it out of the movies. Since the writer's talent is limited, all the events are just a cheap copy of the movies. If you are going to read this series for the inventions, go for it, but if you want to read novels, this is not for you. The characters are soulless. We mostly see the MC so the side characters are stale and unnecessary.
Got to chapter 108 before dropping it. Honestly well translated especially with the fact that this translator is posting multiple and probably doesn’t have much time to proof read everything. [SPOILERS BELOW] Mark is a decently well written character with a clear background that explains his obsessive love for money and his intellect is proven numerous times as he creates new inventions. Sadly that’s where my praise for the story ends. The original author refuses to divert from canon even once. He continuously makes Mark and Tony “stronger” just for the same canon events to happen because the author can’t seem to create their own plot. I finally dropped the story at 108 because Mark had just quite literally nuked a small town to defeat The Destroyer; just for it to do no damage and have to instead be defeated by Thor’s return to might.
Reveal Spoiler Muito legal,foi uma das melhores novel da Marvel que li Principalmente com tecnologia etc Top Top Top Kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkmkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
will mark have a love interest? maybe Wanda or MJ(just give Peter to liz or an OC Gwen Stacy)
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Both the original novel and the translation can be summed up in one word, lazy.
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I'm dying by how funny the comments is whenever Chinese culture and idioms inexplicably appears😂😂
The translator did great, sadly the source is just badly written. Basically we have an American story with dialogues that written for low brow Chinese readers. An apt analogy would be if an American writer wrote about a local American who Isekai'd in China, then write a whole dialogue revolving around the "pull my finger" joke.
one of the greatest marvel fanfictions I've ever read,,,has a fresh outlook on the MCU but still keeping the major timeline events.....just dont'tlike that the updating speed has been delayed and reduced the number of chapters updated💔💔
Começa a se tornar chato quando o protagonista não tem personalidade e tudo é extremamente facilitado.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
its basically the original MCU, the MC doesn't change anything story relevant genius MC forgets plot so the author doesn't need to actually creat a new story characters don't act like the original
it is great and has a good story but the chapters are a bit short and the story closely follows marvel with out large changes. still a great story.
It was good at first but what bothered me was how everyone seemed to look to the MC to solve their problems. The characters were written as though they didn't know what to do with something and could only turn to the MC for help. It was just annoying because while the MC is smart, he is still a teenage boy and it's unrealistic how much authority and trust he is given right off the bat.
best character in Marvel fanfiction I have read so far I hope you make mc more than tecno man and give him some useful abilities that he can have without using nanobots or other armors
Sorry if it's written crookedly I'm a Russian who doesn't speak English well, but I'll say this: your translation is so high-quality that I get great pleasure from this work reading through Yandex translator =)
It is a fascinating story that somewhat contains Asian undertone which makes it funny and annoying at the same time. Just reduce the Asian grammar in the story and it will be a masterpiece.
It's light reaper so you already know the translation is a banger, very good. Novel is amazing so far, Interaction between mark and tony is really well done, especially tony's personality here. A lot of potential for this novel, I definitely recommend this, no reason to not give it a try.