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Writing quality: excellent. There are few mistakes, and I think a lot of those can be chalked up to Webnovel’s slipshod backend. Update stability: unstable. The author is writing two novels concurrently, both of which I follow, and both of which are suffering on this point. I think they were just too impatient and didn’t build up any stockpile at all, so they’re releasing chapters as they’re written. Story development: slow. I normally don’t review novels this early (as of the time I’m writing this, there are only 23 chapters available), but I really like the premise. Both of the author’s novels are really good, and - a rarity on Webnovel, where authors mostly copy and paste from each other in a neverending train of trend-following - best of all, they’re original. That said, the story is somewhat aimless right now and proceeding as if it’s in a three-way race with a glacier and a snail in a salt maze. In other words, it’s slow. However, I do expect it’ll pick up Soon(tm). Character design: inspired. While they aren’t perfect, or even great, by any means, the characters are at least unique. The author does an excellent job of making the main character feel weak and underpowered, forced to get by on his wits alone when thrown into a situation where virtually anyone he meets could accidentally kill him by frowning in his general direction. That alone is a breath of fresh air in a stale market that’s oversaturated by flavor-of-the-month overpowered Mary Sue MCs. In fact, most MCs on Webnovel are closer to the people Mary Sue wants to be when she grows up. World background: unexplored. The author hasn’t been focusing on any kind of worldbuilding so far outside of introducing two antagonistic factions. Other than that, and some very basic cultivation information (essentially just the name of the cultivation realms themselves), we know nothing about the world at large as of yet. Overall: I really enjoy what I’ve seen so far and hope that the author can pick up the pace, both in terms of story development and release rate. Those are the only two areas that it’s currently lacking in, but as far as story is concerned, you have to understand that the author has only written 23 chapters so far.
It's rough around the edges, some mistakes here and there but overall the story is pretty enjoyable. Its very light-hearted and MC seema to be heading towards and OP route. Definitely Recommend a try atleast.
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How should I say this your writing style is refreshing this concept of not having the same system and having a new system and new challanges after few chapters is like spring in desert I don't know if my comparison is good or not but you get the point I think so keep it up bro
Interesting concept to basically combine multiple/all cliches of your typical xianxia novel into one.
This is a breath-taking cultivation novel that reignites the genre with its enthralling ideas and vast world setting. The seamless integration of intricate systems and captivating characters creates an immersive experience that leaves readers craving for more. With its boundless potential, this novel has the potential to become one of the best cultivation genre, captivating readers with its limitless possibilities.
I have been reading your current main book i.e., that is Villainous Young Master Otherworldly Harem since when it's reached 17 chapters. I got it by a chance on WN. And it's indeed a good villain novel apart from few things. As you already know that there are not many good 'villain' novels out there. And as for me, I would definitely put it in top ten in my 'villain' novel list. And as for your new novel, the moment I read the synopsis, I liked it instantly. If you don't mess it up and keep it as it is supposed to be (like the title says), I'm sure it will definitely take the flight but for how long it stays in the air depends upon you. That's all. And do take care of your health as it is mutually essential.
This very good novel is funny and enjoyable great work author i recommend this novel
Writing quality: excellent. There are few mistakes, and I think a lot of those can be chalked up to Webnovel’s slipshod backend. Update stability: unstable. The author is writing two novels concurrently, both of which I follow, and both of which are suffering on this point. I think they were just too impatient and didn’t build up any stockpile at all, so they’re releasing chapters as they’re written. Story development: slow. I normally don’t review novels this early (as of the time I’m writing this, there are only 23 chapters available), but I really like the premise. Both of the author’s novels are really good, and - a rarity on Webnovel, where authors mostly copy and paste from each other in a neverending train of trend-following - best of all, they’re original. That said, the story is somewhat aimless right now and proceeding as if it’s in a three-way race with a glacier and a snail in a salt maze. In other words, it’s slow. However, I do expect it’ll pick up Soon(tm). Character design: inspired. While they aren’t perfect, or even great, by any means, the characters are at least unique. The author does an excellent job of making the main character feel weak and underpowered, forced to get by on his wits alone when thrown into a situation where virtually anyone he meets could accidentally kill him by frowning in his general direction. That alone is a breath of fresh air in a stale market that’s oversaturated by flavor-of-the-month overpowered Mary Sue MCs. In fact, most MCs on Webnovel are closer to the people Mary Sue wants to be when she grows up. World background: unexplored. The author hasn’t been focusing on any kind of worldbuilding so far outside of introducing two antagonistic factions. Other than that, and some very basic cultivation information (essentially just the name of the cultivation realms themselves), we know nothing about the world at large as of yet. Overall: I really enjoy what I’ve seen so far and hope that the author can pick up the pace, both in terms of story development and release rate. Those are the only two areas that it’s currently lacking in, but as far as story is concerned, you have to understand that the author has only written 23 chapters so far.
It's rough around the edges, some mistakes here and there but overall the story is pretty enjoyable. Its very light-hearted and MC seema to be heading towards and OP route. Definitely Recommend a try atleast.
на данный момент это действительно круто....................................................................,.....................................................................................................................,.
How should I say this your writing style is refreshing this concept of not having the same system and having a new system and new challanges after few chapters is like spring in desert I don't know if my comparison is good or not but you get the point I think so keep it up bro
Interesting concept to basically combine multiple/all cliches of your typical xianxia novel into one.
This is a breath-taking cultivation novel that reignites the genre with its enthralling ideas and vast world setting. The seamless integration of intricate systems and captivating characters creates an immersive experience that leaves readers craving for more. With its boundless potential, this novel has the potential to become one of the best cultivation genre, captivating readers with its limitless possibilities.
I have been reading your current main book i.e., that is Villainous Young Master Otherworldly Harem since when it's reached 17 chapters. I got it by a chance on WN. And it's indeed a good villain novel apart from few things. As you already know that there are not many good 'villain' novels out there. And as for me, I would definitely put it in top ten in my 'villain' novel list. And as for your new novel, the moment I read the synopsis, I liked it instantly. If you don't mess it up and keep it as it is supposed to be (like the title says), I'm sure it will definitely take the flight but for how long it stays in the air depends upon you. That's all. And do take care of your health as it is mutually essential.
This very good novel is funny and enjoyable great work author i recommend this novel