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does he ever visit ashai? sothoryos is very interesting but since he's practicing higher mysteries then asshai should be one of his destination right?
has a good plot. easy to read not many errors that I've noticed and if they are there then it's not to the point of confusing the reader. could improve on the relationship and character interactions as some seam forced to proceed the story and I get that. all in all one of the better ff in this genre in my opinion keep up the good work and post more chapters as soon as possible. thanks
es una gran historia espero que lo sigas escribiendo la verdad es muy interesante la verdad muchas gracias por escribir esta y tu demas historias
I really like this GoT Fanfic, I hope author can finish the journey to the end of the story, And I hope Daenerys can be a part of the Harem too, zehahahahahahahahah
An excellent story, with a good amount of originality without straying completely from the source material, congratulations and I look forward to new chapters.
Haven't seen the story itself, but I will give you a review so you can finally have a rank of 0 to 5. Will read it from now on and change the review based on that.
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A solid story with good writing that explores the more magical and unexplored aspects of ASOIAF/GOT, the eldrich horror is great to see explored!
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the premise is good but I feel some things are just unrealistic and there are almost no mysteries. like Arthur knowing almost everything about sothoryos and magic, it's almost over explained. Might just be me but I don't like the 1st person pov. everything else is great though.
Honestly I came into this expecting to be disappointed since not much is even known of the place in canon. But boy was I wrong. Author has done a good job with what little has been given about the place. [img=faceslap]Truthfully this may have spoiled me in terms of GoT fanfics in terms of quality. Now I'll be going into GoT fics wondering if they'll match up to this one.
A really well written book with interesting plot and magic/supernatural background. Looking forward for the next chapter!
This is a really well written book, great grammar, characters are good and the way the author sets a scene to be creepy/scary is impressive. Definitely give this book a try.
Pretty good it has potential for a good story. Ive seen little to no grammar ir spelling mistakes. It seems to be an ff focused on the magic part of GOT with a bit of outer god presence in it. Interested on how will author cook it up
Reveal Spoiler Well, so far so so good, it was a nice and enjoyable reading. I wish you best of luck to continue your wonderful work. Thanks. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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does he ever visit ashai? sothoryos is very interesting but since he's practicing higher mysteries then asshai should be one of his destination right?
has a good plot. easy to read not many errors that I've noticed and if they are there then it's not to the point of confusing the reader. could improve on the relationship and character interactions as some seam forced to proceed the story and I get that. all in all one of the better ff in this genre in my opinion keep up the good work and post more chapters as soon as possible. thanks
es una gran historia espero que lo sigas escribiendo la verdad es muy interesante la verdad muchas gracias por escribir esta y tu demas historias
I really like this GoT Fanfic, I hope author can finish the journey to the end of the story, And I hope Daenerys can be a part of the Harem too, zehahahahahahahahah
An excellent story, with a good amount of originality without straying completely from the source material, congratulations and I look forward to new chapters.
Haven't seen the story itself, but I will give you a review so you can finally have a rank of 0 to 5. Will read it from now on and change the review based on that.
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Reveal Spoiler A solid story with good writing that explores the more magical and unexplored aspects of ASOIAF/GOT, the eldrich horror is great to see explored!
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Reveal Spoiler the premise is good but I feel some things are just unrealistic and there are almost no mysteries. like Arthur knowing almost everything about sothoryos and magic, it's almost over explained. Might just be me but I don't like the 1st person pov. everything else is great though.
Honestly I came into this expecting to be disappointed since not much is even known of the place in canon. But boy was I wrong. Author has done a good job with what little has been given about the place. [img=faceslap]Truthfully this may have spoiled me in terms of GoT fanfics in terms of quality. Now I'll be going into GoT fics wondering if they'll match up to this one.
A really well written book with interesting plot and magic/supernatural background. Looking forward for the next chapter!
This is a really well written book, great grammar, characters are good and the way the author sets a scene to be creepy/scary is impressive. Definitely give this book a try.
Pretty good it has potential for a good story. Ive seen little to no grammar ir spelling mistakes. It seems to be an ff focused on the magic part of GOT with a bit of outer god presence in it. Interested on how will author cook it up
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Well, so far so so good, it was a nice and enjoyable reading. I wish you best of luck to continue your wonderful work. Thanks. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]