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It’s a great novel. Highly recommended. Please don’t drop it. It has such a good concept and good explanations. Hope you continue with it.
this is an absolute banger till now , i recommand it if you like mc developement to become op and if you like jjk
man this story is perfect But I admit I Laugh a bit at the names you given the oc hahah but yeah nice references Man I like this story hope continue it and finished this masterpiece
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the backstory is the typical story of regrets and dead parents then comes the new life but no surprise there the mom is dead the father is unknown and he gets adopted. then we have the messed up story that he doesn't train at all cause his mother doesn't let him which doesn't make sense since she knows about the monsters yet she doesn't allow him to train so he goes to school and yet he seems to be able to match Sugeru with only his foresight plus apparently his cursed power is sealed by his guilt of previous life and in the whole story the character doesn't give the feel of someone who has lived over 35 years I think anyway check out if you like this type
All good for like the STORY OF THIS FF. Will give a proper review after the completion of the story!
lanjut ceritanya thor. ini salah satu ff JJK yang aku nikmati, mulai dari perkembangan karakter dan kekuatannya sampai cerita slice of life yang ada pada mc. semangat terus thor buat ceritanya.
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Simplesmente nem nexo os pais são idiotas o protagonista e idiota nunca vi alguém tão idiota como os pais eo protagonista pais que não deixam o protagonista treinar mesmo sabendo do perigo do mundo e tem a mãe idiota dele eo protagonista que acha que só porque o nome dele é madara ele eo fodao o autor não tem criatividade em nomes e sem criatividade de desenvolvimento Simplesmente o protagonista diz que nunca aprendeu a lutar e luto cara a cara contra uma pessoa bem mais forte que ele sem usar energia amaldiçoada ele disse que nunca aprendeu arte marciais mais o autor esqueceu desse detalhe e fez o protagonista usar vários ataques de artes marcias Simplesmente horrivel
I want to see how you make Madara stronger than Gojo. infinity it self represent time and space.So with out plot armour u can't see any way to suppress gojo.
From the start the protagonist has the worst, most unnecessary and sad backstory. The protagonist's parents die and then he is reincarnated and they die again. He has the power of foresight, instead of using this ability smart or strategically he reveals his predictions to his friend that was never introduced before. Then he gets adopted, then there's family arguments and then he joins the academy. He never trained before, and after serveral years still doesn't train or learn martial arts, and instead is a crippled third grade sorcerer that can't use cursed energy with a powerful seal. And then he goes to classes but he knows everything, he still acts like a child, and the interactions are bad. So after several chapters there's no progress or anything interesting.
A different version of Jujutsu kaisen where there would be someone that can rival gojo satoru. with gojo that carries the power over space, our mc has the power over time. Read how having 2 Sorcerer supreme in 1 era affects things.
From my point of view, this is one of the best ff about KJ. Even it has its own drawbacks such as an uncreative approach to choosing the name of new characters and their abilities, a not very well described range of emotions of the characters, but despite of this, in general, it's really nice story.I will hope that authors do not drop it in half way. All the best!
Good story. The only thing is that I found MCs character annoying. Emo, and somewhat self deprecating, there's even a point that he began acting like 'I'm a psychopath' which is lame in my opinion. His name is Madara and throughout the entire show, I can see the shadow of 'him' but because of some unnecessary actions, it felt more like a failed copycat of Madara's character. He's boring and too dramatic.
the story seemed ok, but it just has a lot of small details which I dont like. First of al the powers, the mc has an amazing power which involves time, it'll grow stronger as time goes on and starts with a few abilities of which one is time stop. What i dont like about this is how he doesnt use this to its full potential. Why enter fights with dangerous opponents head first when you can stop time and do a double tap. There are also some oc's which are based on other animes and have their powers. It also seemed like the class was full of people which shouldnt be possible since even kyoto and tokyo, the hot spots for curses, have classes of ~4 people. Then the dialogues, I dont really like most of em, the way they refer to each others irks me a bit with the whole "senpai" while they know each other well enough to move past it (thats just a small thing tho). Dialogues and character building are also pretty lacking and then suddenly the mc gets angry cus dad almost gets killed and enters a "berserk mode" where he starts laughing like a maniac and killing people. Idk i just don't really like how the story was written. Perhaps if things were rewritten and the edgy/cringe things were removed it could be fun
Honestly I am loving the story, the abilities take a direction that is rarely seen, and I have just binge read all the 33 chapters currently available. The only thing I would say is to maybe have so more screen time of the character by himself so we can learn more about how time has affected him and how he meditates. Very similar advice to a comment. But really I am LOVING the story.
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Its pretty good hut the something about the way the author writes seem off. The quality is good and there are barely any grammar mistakes and even if there is one its very hard to notice.
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I just love the concept & story of the FF. Therefore- 5☆ all in all. Hopefully THE AUTHOR doesn't drop it, complete the story gracefully. And, for MC just wanna read he become omnipotent of the particular concept he emobies and a "master of all/Omnicompetence character" That's all 🙏!
one of the best jujutsu fanfic and dont drop this fanfic, read this fanfic Jujutsu Kaisen: Unlock The Eight Secret Arts at the Start, you might get an idea from this fanfic
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Shameless Author reveiw. Thanks for the support guys. Stay tuned for more chapters
The story is going great and the mc has a technique with great potential. if the story is written correctly it would be a great story.
thank you for the novel, I'm very sad, because of stupid people like them, your novel almost stopped, I'm very annoyed with them, those who have only read a few chapters have already determined the ending,
I guess you are a hypocrite now? I guess you are a hypocrite now? I guess you are a hypocrite now? I guess you are a hypocrite now? I guess you are a hypocrite now?
AAAAAAAUUUUUUUU [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
It’s a great novel. Highly recommended. Please don’t drop it. It has such a good concept and good explanations. Hope you continue with it.
this is an absolute banger till now , i recommand it if you like mc developement to become op and if you like jjk
man this story is perfect But I admit I Laugh a bit at the names you given the oc hahah but yeah nice references Man I like this story hope continue it and finished this masterpiece
Reveal Spoiler the backstory is the typical story of regrets and dead parents then comes the new life but no surprise there the mom is dead the father is unknown and he gets adopted. then we have the messed up story that he doesn't train at all cause his mother doesn't let him which doesn't make sense since she knows about the monsters yet she doesn't allow him to train so he goes to school and yet he seems to be able to match Sugeru with only his foresight plus apparently his cursed power is sealed by his guilt of previous life and in the whole story the character doesn't give the feel of someone who has lived over 35 years I think anyway check out if you like this type
All good for like the STORY OF THIS FF. Will give a proper review after the completion of the story!
lanjut ceritanya thor. ini salah satu ff JJK yang aku nikmati, mulai dari perkembangan karakter dan kekuatannya sampai cerita slice of life yang ada pada mc. semangat terus thor buat ceritanya.
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Simplesmente nem nexo os pais são idiotas o protagonista e idiota nunca vi alguém tão idiota como os pais eo protagonista pais que não deixam o protagonista treinar mesmo sabendo do perigo do mundo e tem a mãe idiota dele eo protagonista que acha que só porque o nome dele é madara ele eo fodao o autor não tem criatividade em nomes e sem criatividade de desenvolvimento Simplesmente o protagonista diz que nunca aprendeu a lutar e luto cara a cara contra uma pessoa bem mais forte que ele sem usar energia amaldiçoada ele disse que nunca aprendeu arte marciais mais o autor esqueceu desse detalhe e fez o protagonista usar vários ataques de artes marcias Simplesmente horrivel
I want to see how you make Madara stronger than Gojo. infinity it self represent time and space.So with out plot armour u can't see any way to suppress gojo.
From the start the protagonist has the worst, most unnecessary and sad backstory. The protagonist's parents die and then he is reincarnated and they die again. He has the power of foresight, instead of using this ability smart or strategically he reveals his predictions to his friend that was never introduced before. Then he gets adopted, then there's family arguments and then he joins the academy. He never trained before, and after serveral years still doesn't train or learn martial arts, and instead is a crippled third grade sorcerer that can't use cursed energy with a powerful seal. And then he goes to classes but he knows everything, he still acts like a child, and the interactions are bad. So after several chapters there's no progress or anything interesting.
A different version of Jujutsu kaisen where there would be someone that can rival gojo satoru. with gojo that carries the power over space, our mc has the power over time. Read how having 2 Sorcerer supreme in 1 era affects things.
From my point of view, this is one of the best ff about KJ. Even it has its own drawbacks such as an uncreative approach to choosing the name of new characters and their abilities, a not very well described range of emotions of the characters, but despite of this, in general, it's really nice story.I will hope that authors do not drop it in half way. All the best!
Good story. The only thing is that I found MCs character annoying. Emo, and somewhat self deprecating, there's even a point that he began acting like 'I'm a psychopath' which is lame in my opinion. His name is Madara and throughout the entire show, I can see the shadow of 'him' but because of some unnecessary actions, it felt more like a failed copycat of Madara's character. He's boring and too dramatic.
the story seemed ok, but it just has a lot of small details which I dont like. First of al the powers, the mc has an amazing power which involves time, it'll grow stronger as time goes on and starts with a few abilities of which one is time stop. What i dont like about this is how he doesnt use this to its full potential. Why enter fights with dangerous opponents head first when you can stop time and do a double tap. There are also some oc's which are based on other animes and have their powers. It also seemed like the class was full of people which shouldnt be possible since even kyoto and tokyo, the hot spots for curses, have classes of ~4 people. Then the dialogues, I dont really like most of em, the way they refer to each others irks me a bit with the whole "senpai" while they know each other well enough to move past it (thats just a small thing tho). Dialogues and character building are also pretty lacking and then suddenly the mc gets angry cus dad almost gets killed and enters a "berserk mode" where he starts laughing like a maniac and killing people. Idk i just don't really like how the story was written. Perhaps if things were rewritten and the edgy/cringe things were removed it could be fun
Honestly I am loving the story, the abilities take a direction that is rarely seen, and I have just binge read all the 33 chapters currently available. The only thing I would say is to maybe have so more screen time of the character by himself so we can learn more about how time has affected him and how he meditates. Very similar advice to a comment. But really I am LOVING the story.
Reveal Spoiler Its pretty good hut the something about the way the author writes seem off. The quality is good and there are barely any grammar mistakes and even if there is one its very hard to notice.
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I just love the concept & story of the FF. Therefore- 5☆ all in all. Hopefully THE AUTHOR doesn't drop it, complete the story gracefully. And, for MC just wanna read he become omnipotent of the particular concept he emobies and a "master of all/Omnicompetence character" That's all 🙏!
one of the best jujutsu fanfic and dont drop this fanfic, read this fanfic Jujutsu Kaisen: Unlock The Eight Secret Arts at the Start, you might get an idea from this fanfic
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Reveal Spoiler Shameless Author reveiw. Thanks for the support guys. Stay tuned for more chapters
The story is going great and the mc has a technique with great potential. if the story is written correctly it would be a great story.
thank you for the novel, I'm very sad, because of stupid people like them, your novel almost stopped, I'm very annoyed with them, those who have only read a few chapters have already determined the ending,