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honestly, it's like really mid, if your into it, cool, but in my opinion it jumps from scene to scene way too abruptly, the characters aren't thought out the best and their dialogue is confusing at most times, too many times the facial expressions or emotions are expressed like this (calm down) or (pouts), I mean good try to the author atleast you tried but it's just not really my cup of tea so peace out
honestly, it's like really mid, if your into it, cool, but in my opinion it jumps from scene to scene way too abruptly, the characters aren't thought out the best and their dialogue is confusing at most times, too many times the facial expressions or emotions are expressed like this (calm down) or (pouts), I mean good try to the author atleast you tried but it's just not really my cup of tea so peace out