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Write a reviewYou can tell it was heavily inspired by reincarnated with the strongest system still a good read only problem is the story isn’t very linear
A very unique novel with good storyline and OP characters. Definitely a must read novel for readers looking for unique skills and system👍
I just got done with chapter 248 and this book is good so far but there r still problems with it!!!! It should take fucking convincing the MCs onw fucking beast!!!! If the MC wants to dit or do something on his own then he should do it!!! The neasts r beast they r not fucking humans and they dont deserve to make any decisions or think they can do whatever they want!!! And the beast attitude suck amd need to change except for the jellyfish witch is actually nice and better then then the stupid cat and stupid panda that think they can do whatever they want and its really really stupid that they can just come out of the taming space on there own!!!
I just got on chapter 72 an honestly this book is ok maybe good but the MC needs more beast!!!! And the panda is stupid!!! It was a decent beast in the beginning but now at rhis point in the book its a piece of shit!!! its attitude fucks up the hole book just like the first beast the MC got witch is that stupid fucking lazy cat!!! The attitudes of both characters need to change to make this book better and the MC needs to get more badass beast!!!
The first chapter is fantastic but after his rebirth(reincarnation whatever it is) is kinda lacking you know, in the start before he got the God's blessings I thought he's kinda prideful, arrogant, but nah he just got beaten and kinda acting like a child like bro you're not a child(maybe you are) but u have your past life memory act like it, maybe if your memory is fragments I would understand but not it's kinda disappointing
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bro do transmigration intead of birthing a new body it s disgusting :( hope you can adjust next time.
The narrator gives up too much information freely, every three paragraphs has information that the narrator is just telling the reader. There is no suspense, no lead in, just straight explanations or telling the reader things. Which diminishes the value of any information if all of it is being told rather than shown. Every character is also treated like a joke, it makes it difficult to want to develop a connection to the characters. This is my current opinion as of chapter 15, this may change.
Why do authors love making main characters so disappointing? The guy reincarnated but acts like a child. If he had forgotten his past life and only remembered fragments, that would be understandable, but here he is—a full-grown adult acting like a kid. Chapter 21 is especially frustrating. He, his five-year-old twin sister, and another girl go through a portal. This other girl is taken by a flying creature, and here’s what the author writes: > "Nox and Nyx remained rooted to the spot, trying to come up with a plan. Nyx stayed calm, but Nox's fingers trembled. Why wouldn’t he be restless? Coming into this dimension had been his idea, after all. If anything went wrong here, it would be his fault, and he would blame himself for the rest of his life. ‘Do you still have any tricks?’ Nyx had a bitter smile on her face, staring at her brother from the side of her eyes." Notice that the five-year-old girl, who was just born recently, is calmer than this clueless idiot. Plus, the fact that he calls his twin sister his "older sister"… A grown man calling his *twin* sister, who’s five, his "big sister"? That’s where I draw the line.
At first the story hooked me with its comedy but down the road the Mc is constantly being beaten to a pulp even though he has "ultimate skill" which should give him an edge but he never uses it
Book is good it’s just the sister that drives you up the wall. 5 years old and a complete control freak! Nasty mouth on her too. I’m only up to chapter 22 and ready to stop reading. 🤦♀️
The writing hooked me at first with its good pacing and nice mix of comedy, and I was genuinely excited about the potential of the story. But as I kept going, that excitement turned into frustration. The MC gets these insane OP talents, and you'd think he’s set up to be a game-changer, but instead, he turns out to be a total letdown. It’s not even about losing fights—that’s fine, it happens. But to have him constantly without any backbone, just getting walked all over, is beyond disappointing. It’s like he’s stuck in a loop of humiliation, and at some point, it stops being interesting and just gets painful to read. There are a few moments where you think, "Okay, maybe this is where he’ll turn it around," but no, it’s just more of the same cycle of cringe and torture. It’s like the author’s allergic to letting the MC have even a shred of dignity. He’s got all these talents, like that "Shadow Oblivion" thing that’s barely even used, and every time there’s a chance for him to show some actual growth or cleverness, it’s wasted. If anything, he just keeps getting stomped on, and the excuses for why he doesn’t fight back or use his abilities are paper-thin. I stuck it out through the paid chapters, hoping for some payoff, but all I got was regret. The author seems to think dragging the MC through endless misery is good character development, but it’s just the same tired trope of the hero who’s all promise and no delivery. Expect each new arc to be another round of him getting trampled by a stronger opponent, rinse and repeat. If that’s your thing, maybe you’ll enjoy it, but for me, it felt like a waste of potential. I kept hoping the author would throw us a bone—something to show that all this suffering was leading to a real transformation or a moment where the MC finally steps up. But it never happens, and by the time you realize that, you’re too deep in to feel anything but disappointment. I really wanted to like this, and you can see from my earlier comments that I was all in, but this one just doesn’t stick the landing. It's got a good premise and some solid writing, but the MC’s constant failures and the lack of any real progression just kill it for me. Hopefully, the author learns from this and comes back with something stronger in the future because, as it stands, I’m out. Thanks for the ride, but this isn’t what I signed up for.
Reveal SpoilerHey Can you check out my book “I BECAME SUPER RICH AFTER DISCOVERING A MINIWORLD IN MY BOOKCASE “ Thank You🙏🙏
Well it's my favorite genre and I like silly mc so it's five stars to me. Writing is also quite good.
Read a few chapters and i think it was cool.The part where he started running around with kids with his willy dangling together with the annoying cat threw me off.At least i enjoyed the first chapters a lot,i might come back depending on how the mc develops.thanks for the good read.
Reveal Spoilerthat's all to be reviewed, by reading the other review it's say in the novel MC is an adult but author say is 16 years old, and still act like child well maybe he is a child
You can tell it was heavily inspired by reincarnated with the strongest system still a good read only problem is the story isn’t very linear
A very unique novel with good storyline and OP characters. Definitely a must read novel for readers looking for unique skills and system👍
I just got done with chapter 248 and this book is good so far but there r still problems with it!!!! It should take fucking convincing the MCs onw fucking beast!!!! If the MC wants to dit or do something on his own then he should do it!!! The neasts r beast they r not fucking humans and they dont deserve to make any decisions or think they can do whatever they want!!! And the beast attitude suck amd need to change except for the jellyfish witch is actually nice and better then then the stupid cat and stupid panda that think they can do whatever they want and its really really stupid that they can just come out of the taming space on there own!!!
I just got on chapter 72 an honestly this book is ok maybe good but the MC needs more beast!!!! And the panda is stupid!!! It was a decent beast in the beginning but now at rhis point in the book its a piece of shit!!! its attitude fucks up the hole book just like the first beast the MC got witch is that stupid fucking lazy cat!!! The attitudes of both characters need to change to make this book better and the MC needs to get more badass beast!!!
The first chapter is fantastic but after his rebirth(reincarnation whatever it is) is kinda lacking you know, in the start before he got the God's blessings I thought he's kinda prideful, arrogant, but nah he just got beaten and kinda acting like a child like bro you're not a child(maybe you are) but u have your past life memory act like it, maybe if your memory is fragments I would understand but not it's kinda disappointing
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bro do transmigration intead of birthing a new body it s disgusting :( hope you can adjust next time.
The narrator gives up too much information freely, every three paragraphs has information that the narrator is just telling the reader. There is no suspense, no lead in, just straight explanations or telling the reader things. Which diminishes the value of any information if all of it is being told rather than shown. Every character is also treated like a joke, it makes it difficult to want to develop a connection to the characters. This is my current opinion as of chapter 15, this may change.
Why do authors love making main characters so disappointing? The guy reincarnated but acts like a child. If he had forgotten his past life and only remembered fragments, that would be understandable, but here he is—a full-grown adult acting like a kid. Chapter 21 is especially frustrating. He, his five-year-old twin sister, and another girl go through a portal. This other girl is taken by a flying creature, and here’s what the author writes: > "Nox and Nyx remained rooted to the spot, trying to come up with a plan. Nyx stayed calm, but Nox's fingers trembled. Why wouldn’t he be restless? Coming into this dimension had been his idea, after all. If anything went wrong here, it would be his fault, and he would blame himself for the rest of his life. ‘Do you still have any tricks?’ Nyx had a bitter smile on her face, staring at her brother from the side of her eyes." Notice that the five-year-old girl, who was just born recently, is calmer than this clueless idiot. Plus, the fact that he calls his twin sister his "older sister"… A grown man calling his *twin* sister, who’s five, his "big sister"? That’s where I draw the line.
At first the story hooked me with its comedy but down the road the Mc is constantly being beaten to a pulp even though he has "ultimate skill" which should give him an edge but he never uses it
Book is good it’s just the sister that drives you up the wall. 5 years old and a complete control freak! Nasty mouth on her too. I’m only up to chapter 22 and ready to stop reading. 🤦♀️
The writing hooked me at first with its good pacing and nice mix of comedy, and I was genuinely excited about the potential of the story. But as I kept going, that excitement turned into frustration. The MC gets these insane OP talents, and you'd think he’s set up to be a game-changer, but instead, he turns out to be a total letdown. It’s not even about losing fights—that’s fine, it happens. But to have him constantly without any backbone, just getting walked all over, is beyond disappointing. It’s like he’s stuck in a loop of humiliation, and at some point, it stops being interesting and just gets painful to read. There are a few moments where you think, "Okay, maybe this is where he’ll turn it around," but no, it’s just more of the same cycle of cringe and torture. It’s like the author’s allergic to letting the MC have even a shred of dignity. He’s got all these talents, like that "Shadow Oblivion" thing that’s barely even used, and every time there’s a chance for him to show some actual growth or cleverness, it’s wasted. If anything, he just keeps getting stomped on, and the excuses for why he doesn’t fight back or use his abilities are paper-thin. I stuck it out through the paid chapters, hoping for some payoff, but all I got was regret. The author seems to think dragging the MC through endless misery is good character development, but it’s just the same tired trope of the hero who’s all promise and no delivery. Expect each new arc to be another round of him getting trampled by a stronger opponent, rinse and repeat. If that’s your thing, maybe you’ll enjoy it, but for me, it felt like a waste of potential. I kept hoping the author would throw us a bone—something to show that all this suffering was leading to a real transformation or a moment where the MC finally steps up. But it never happens, and by the time you realize that, you’re too deep in to feel anything but disappointment. I really wanted to like this, and you can see from my earlier comments that I was all in, but this one just doesn’t stick the landing. It's got a good premise and some solid writing, but the MC’s constant failures and the lack of any real progression just kill it for me. Hopefully, the author learns from this and comes back with something stronger in the future because, as it stands, I’m out. Thanks for the ride, but this isn’t what I signed up for.
Reveal SpoilerHey Can you check out my book “I BECAME SUPER RICH AFTER DISCOVERING A MINIWORLD IN MY BOOKCASE “ Thank You🙏🙏
Well it's my favorite genre and I like silly mc so it's five stars to me. Writing is also quite good.
Read a few chapters and i think it was cool.The part where he started running around with kids with his willy dangling together with the annoying cat threw me off.At least i enjoyed the first chapters a lot,i might come back depending on how the mc develops.thanks for the good read.
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that's all to be reviewed, by reading the other review it's say in the novel MC is an adult but author say is 16 years old, and still act like child well maybe he is a child