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The story is nice. I do enjoy people creating manga in an anime world. The update stability seems to lean towards the weaker edge though. And the chakra issue, related to creating manga, is a bit weird in my opinion. Though all in all, very nice story. Especially the characters personality and interactions.
too bad you discontinued it,it could have made a good story, i hope you can get interest in it once more
5 stars because I can. :-P A very good story, it has its problems but there is always something to improve, it's always worth listening to the opinions and ideas of others, but don't let them destroy what you want to create.
Замечательное начало истории, с нетерпением жду продолжения. Хотя любопытно, будет ли любовная линия? В любом случае спасибо автору за труд.
In the past, when the broadcast of Boruto had just started, I was very annoyed by the fact that Boruto's behavior towards Naruto was very annoying, so that it crossed my mind "if someone told him about his father's story"... Gradually, I stopped watching the anime, interest in anime and its stories disappeared. many years later or it could also be called today, May 18 2024, I am here, interested in reading Boruto fanfiction because of this book... I am very interested in the reactions of people from the Boruto era to the Naruto story, even though today the MC of this book has not yet drawn manga Naruto, but looking at the system panel which provides the Naruto storyline script is a show of the author... the implementation of the character is good, so you don't mistake it for someone else... I hope you don't stop and disappear the author
You should do Hunter x Hunter for the next manga because it’s have things in comment with HxH like the technology level for Naruto world and like Hunter exam for chunin exams with Naruto world.
It was a fun and good read, chapters are kind of short and some parts require you to not think and just enjoy. Overall enjoyed it and hope for more chapters.
It's a very good story. It does not stray away from the world background of Naruto and its protagonist and other characters seem to have a consistent personality. With clear and understandable flow of thought. The author is good. I have read only 10 chapters.
Im already hooked. Excited to see more of this novel, especially liked the collectibles system the author did [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Keep going. The quality is great. The grammar is good. The best thing is a sign, no harem. So you get five stars. ............................................
I like your idea for this fanfiction and hope you keep writing this because it’s a solid and good story if you keep doing this how about you use jujutsu kaisen for your next manga that you use for the story
At of all these entertainment systems novels, I'm going to have to say, this is my top favorite one, the other ones aren't bad, but the grammar and vocabulary always end up deteriorating over time and then the novel just ends up being repeative and then dragged along, so your doing better then those people, so I hope you'll be able to come back and make more chapters.
The story is nice. I do enjoy people creating manga in an anime world. The update stability seems to lean towards the weaker edge though. And the chakra issue, related to creating manga, is a bit weird in my opinion. Though all in all, very nice story. Especially the characters personality and interactions.
too bad you discontinued it,it could have made a good story, i hope you can get interest in it once more
5 stars because I can. :-P A very good story, it has its problems but there is always something to improve, it's always worth listening to the opinions and ideas of others, but don't let them destroy what you want to create.
Замечательное начало истории, с нетерпением жду продолжения. Хотя любопытно, будет ли любовная линия? В любом случае спасибо автору за труд.
In the past, when the broadcast of Boruto had just started, I was very annoyed by the fact that Boruto's behavior towards Naruto was very annoying, so that it crossed my mind "if someone told him about his father's story"... Gradually, I stopped watching the anime, interest in anime and its stories disappeared. many years later or it could also be called today, May 18 2024, I am here, interested in reading Boruto fanfiction because of this book... I am very interested in the reactions of people from the Boruto era to the Naruto story, even though today the MC of this book has not yet drawn manga Naruto, but looking at the system panel which provides the Naruto storyline script is a show of the author... the implementation of the character is good, so you don't mistake it for someone else... I hope you don't stop and disappear the author
You should do Hunter x Hunter for the next manga because it’s have things in comment with HxH like the technology level for Naruto world and like Hunter exam for chunin exams with Naruto world.
It was a fun and good read, chapters are kind of short and some parts require you to not think and just enjoy. Overall enjoyed it and hope for more chapters.
It's a very good story. It does not stray away from the world background of Naruto and its protagonist and other characters seem to have a consistent personality. With clear and understandable flow of thought. The author is good. I have read only 10 chapters.
Im already hooked. Excited to see more of this novel, especially liked the collectibles system the author did [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Keep going. The quality is great. The grammar is good. The best thing is a sign, no harem. So you get five stars. ............................................
I like your idea for this fanfiction and hope you keep writing this because it’s a solid and good story if you keep doing this how about you use jujutsu kaisen for your next manga that you use for the story
At of all these entertainment systems novels, I'm going to have to say, this is my top favorite one, the other ones aren't bad, but the grammar and vocabulary always end up deteriorating over time and then the novel just ends up being repeative and then dragged along, so your doing better then those people, so I hope you'll be able to come back and make more chapters.