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An absolute page-turning! each chapter keeps me craving for more! the story is paced very well, coupled with awesome characters, it will get you hooked!!highly recommended FL for all! not to mention, those r18s are.... spicy[img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move]
PLEASE REASSURE YOUR READER THAT CHAPTER 103 IS NOT GOING TO BE THE END❗❗❗ ( NOT yelling!!! Showing extreme angst & OCD NEED-TO-KNOW..., if that makes sense 🤪) . 15days (9.23.23) since the last chapter & I did them via Privalage!!! *I think that's what it's called* I'm going through withdrawal after being able to read a chapter every day 😭😱 Now that I've emptied my fried mental status, I hope that it & some praise will be enough motivation to slip us a couple of chapters soon...😜🤓😎😁🙄🤩I also pray that you are well & have not had personal crisis that have hindered your writing time!!! Your book is awesome!!! I love books that have a strong psychological element & this one is a gem!!! The world & characters that you have put together are difficult to write about, as well as, difficult to read..., but you have balanced the amount of anxiety very artfully!!! It's very evident that you thoroughly researched this world !!! I won't even mention pronouns, spelling, or punctuations..., other than to suggest you have each chapter proofread by someone who speaks English as their primary language..., my services are available if you want😊. I look forward to finding out how our girls are doing!!! Soon??? 😉
An absolute page-turning! each chapter keeps me craving for more! the story is paced very well, coupled with awesome characters, it will get you hooked!!highly recommended FL for all! not to mention, those r18s are.... spicy[img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move]
PLEASE REASSURE YOUR READER THAT CHAPTER 103 IS NOT GOING TO BE THE END❗❗❗ ( NOT yelling!!! Showing extreme angst & OCD NEED-TO-KNOW..., if that makes sense 🤪) . 15days (9.23.23) since the last chapter & I did them via Privalage!!! *I think that's what it's called* I'm going through withdrawal after being able to read a chapter every day 😭😱 Now that I've emptied my fried mental status, I hope that it & some praise will be enough motivation to slip us a couple of chapters soon...😜🤓😎😁🙄🤩I also pray that you are well & have not had personal crisis that have hindered your writing time!!! Your book is awesome!!! I love books that have a strong psychological element & this one is a gem!!! The world & characters that you have put together are difficult to write about, as well as, difficult to read..., but you have balanced the amount of anxiety very artfully!!! It's very evident that you thoroughly researched this world !!! I won't even mention pronouns, spelling, or punctuations..., other than to suggest you have each chapter proofread by someone who speaks English as their primary language..., my services are available if you want😊. I look forward to finding out how our girls are doing!!! Soon??? 😉