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Ótima fanfic. Espero que vc não a abandone, seria interessante após o bebê nascer, que ele consiga domar Vermithor . Espero que venha uma menina
might as well not read seems like the author dropped it but is a great story overall
A masterpiece, omg i just love how speak like a nobel!! Hm but the lack of his dragon is quite saddening
Great story........................................................................................................................................
You should write about house valaryon because there's no exiting fanfic about house valaryon
Really loving the story, its one of the greatest fics ive read. Hopefully the story continues for a long time. ........................................
This is a good story. I hope mc will get cannibal as his dragon. ............... ................... .............. ................... .............. ................... .............. ................... ............. ................... .............. ................... .............. ................... .............. ................... ............. ................... .............. ................... .............. ................... .............. ...................
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I will give it full marks as far as ch. from 1 to 24 goes. One of the best GOT fics out there. The writing quality is great, although there are some minor stylistical mistakes such as repetitions in obe of the battle scenes overall the stylization is almost perfect. The plot is logical and realistic, MC's advantages come purely from political and economic situation and his rise makes sense from the world's inner logic. I almost wait for something ridiculous in the future, like successful expedition to the Old Valyria or some other pie from the sky, that's how smooth it is until now. Compared to other fics(especially kingdom building ones) it is pure gold, don't miss it.
very well done, a bit over the top at times, finding myself confused in between words or "respect" that characters give each othe, a very good read nonetheless. Can't wait to read more👌👍
amazing grammar and more realistic storytelling compared to most other GOT fanfictions
Great story. Mc is awesome. love the kingdom building. Give it a read and you shouldn't be disappointed.
This the one of the best fan fic I've ever read but the problem is the updates can you make 2 chapters a day thank you
Simply incredible. Keep up the good work author!!!! GOT is amazing.🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀
Finally some good realistic fanfic where the mc doesn ´t just get OP for no reason and where he auto get dragon. This is prove that you can write a fanfic with realistic mc and it will be 100 times better.
One of the best GOT fanfic, I got no issues. so keep it up Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler
Ótima fanfic. Espero que vc não a abandone, seria interessante após o bebê nascer, que ele consiga domar Vermithor . Espero que venha uma menina
might as well not read seems like the author dropped it but is a great story overall
A masterpiece, omg i just love how speak like a nobel!! Hm but the lack of his dragon is quite saddening
Great story........................................................................................................................................
You should write about house valaryon because there's no exiting fanfic about house valaryon
Really loving the story, its one of the greatest fics ive read. Hopefully the story continues for a long time. ........................................
This is a good story. I hope mc will get cannibal as his dragon. ............... ................... .............. ................... .............. ................... .............. ................... ............. ................... .............. ................... .............. ................... .............. ................... ............. ................... .............. ................... .............. ................... .............. ...................
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I will give it full marks as far as ch. from 1 to 24 goes. One of the best GOT fics out there. The writing quality is great, although there are some minor stylistical mistakes such as repetitions in obe of the battle scenes overall the stylization is almost perfect. The plot is logical and realistic, MC's advantages come purely from political and economic situation and his rise makes sense from the world's inner logic. I almost wait for something ridiculous in the future, like successful expedition to the Old Valyria or some other pie from the sky, that's how smooth it is until now. Compared to other fics(especially kingdom building ones) it is pure gold, don't miss it.
very well done, a bit over the top at times, finding myself confused in between words or "respect" that characters give each othe, a very good read nonetheless. Can't wait to read more👌👍
amazing grammar and more realistic storytelling compared to most other GOT fanfictions
Great story. Mc is awesome. love the kingdom building. Give it a read and you shouldn't be disappointed.
This the one of the best fan fic I've ever read but the problem is the updates can you make 2 chapters a day thank you
Simply incredible. Keep up the good work author!!!! GOT is amazing.🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀
Finally some good realistic fanfic where the mc doesn ´t just get OP for no reason and where he auto get dragon. This is prove that you can write a fanfic with realistic mc and it will be 100 times better.
One of the best GOT fanfic, I got no issues. so keep it up Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler
Bro. We’re waiting for you. Comeback bro. Comeback.