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I only have one question will there be lemons? I ask why it says harem and in these stories lemons cannot be missing, and if there are lemons I hope they are not one of those boring r18s to read that last about 5 or more chapters
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نظرا لأنك صديقي وأنني شخص كريم ، فإليك 5 نجوم هدية مني . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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I like this book but it kind of messy works.I can understand what the author want to write but you will feel the way story develop is like chasing something you know like the way wishs been use and mc like slightly wise but his mind is kinda dumb to use the wish effiencely.It like the mc not view the world like real also please hope there's no 4 wall break it bring down the quality workcause the development is good but unstable like his use of power is uneffecient in way for mc become stronger.But I like this work cause it about travel around worlds and sorry to say something rude about your work author.Still stay strong for future adventure.
Reveal Spoiler I only have one question will there be lemons? I ask why it says harem and in these stories lemons cannot be missing, and if there are lemons I hope they are not one of those boring r18s to read that last about 5 or more chapters
Very cool..Very cool..Very cool...Very cool..Very cool..Very cool...Very cool..Very cool..Very cool...Very cool..Very cool..Very cool...Very cool..Very cool..Very cool...Very cool..Very cool..Very cool...Very cool..Very cool..Very cool...Very cool..Very cool..Very cool...Very cool..Very cool..Very cool...Very cool..Very cool..Very cool...Very cool..Very cool..Very cool...Very cool..Very cool..Very cool...Very cool..Very cool..Very cool...Very cool..Very cool..Very cool...Very cool..Very cool..Very cool...
Reveal Spoiler نظرا لأنك صديقي وأنني شخص كريم ، فإليك 5 نجوم هدية مني . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
......hmmmmm.............,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,.......................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,.......................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..........
I like this book but it kind of messy works.I can understand what the author want to write but you will feel the way story develop is like chasing something you know like the way wishs been use and mc like slightly wise but his mind is kinda dumb to use the wish effiencely.It like the mc not view the world like real also please hope there's no 4 wall break it bring down the quality workcause the development is good but unstable like his use of power is uneffecient in way for mc become stronger.But I like this work cause it about travel around worlds and sorry to say something rude about your work author.Still stay strong for future adventure.
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