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great read. from beginning to end, I never really was distracted or disinterested. Sure, I was expecting some ultimate battle at the end, but that's just how I like things to go. You showed that Cale was the strongest being in existence and made him dominate the power ranks until the end. I thank you for writing this book. have a good day.
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it was a fun read. It may not be a perfect story but it was a good story overall.
Let me get straight to the point, at the beginning of the series there were 2 people close to MC, but in the middle of the series after a certain event he cut off communication with the girl who was in love with MC and then there was a time skip and you ruined this topic like this, I hated it, since you are not going to use him for the story then introduce him as a side character and don't say that he likes MC, it's that simple. Let's come to the emergence of the characters and their emotions. The emergence of the characters is very sudden and sometimes forgotten and not shown after they appear. In my opinion, the emotions and behaviors are handled without much detail and could have been better. There are so many glaring points. If you are not interested in the review for the final part, do not continue. -------------------------------------------------- First of all, it ends with a happy ending, but I think the author is aware of the mistake he made, MC was very strong and the final battle was like a normal battle, it wasn't even bothered, but I think it would have been great if it had dealt with the emotions in a little more detail, it was explained implicitly, but I believe the author will fix this.
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La historia estuvo fabulosa, fue unos los fanfic mas completos que introducΓa un isekai con los poderes del monarca de las sombras. buena suerte en tu prΓ³xima historia.[img=recommend]
overall, it's a great read. somewhat sporadic development. I would've appreciated the 300-year arc to be more flushed out. But otherwise, I appreciated the adventure 7/10
I have finished reading it all and I have to say I was thoroughly impressed. Even the reason why he had all the knowledge was explained and that tid bit was great foresight. The passing could have been better but that is my only complaint. Very good story
Too much cringe. Writing whatever u want. Most of the stuff doesn't make sense according to plot. Author just want to finish quickly so he write whatever he want.. Plus Mc skill system and how it work is ... I don't know what to comment on this.. Plus this Mc is not qualified to became shadow monarch based on his personality. There is no character development at all. Power scaling is pure nonsense..
it was good, you ammased all the important characters to create no so long but good story
A great read that takes you to an interesting journey and hilarious scenes by the MC..πππ
I am not good at writing and 140 signs are to many so I show with smileys how I liked the story. ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
I liked this fanfic. While it was a bit rushed in many aspects, it was worth the read imo.
Awesome story dude keep up good work my man and I enjoyed your story thanks do more stories related slime story[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
nah this is dissapointment... It's seems their is no logic behind the plot and author wrote whatever he want.. It starts with verry unrealistic sad story(you typical cliche human evil but very unrealistic) and mc is just mehhh.. other character's are also mehhh...
Good read, no real red flag that'd kill my enjoyment.Though, the development of some relationships were kinda lackluster. No real tension in the story, and a lot of missed opportunities in that department as well.Also, the 300 year time skip was a missed opportunity to add some more details into the world.The MC also gained power waay too easily.
ΠΡΠΎ Π΄Π΅ΠΉΡΡΠ²ΠΈΡΠ΅Π»ΡΠ½ΠΎ ΠΊΠ»Π°ΡΡΠ½Π°Ρ ΠΈ Π·Π°ΠΊΠΎΠ½ΡΠ΅Π½Π½Π°Ρ ΠΈΡΡΠΎΡΠΈΡ
I recommend giving this fanfic a try, it's one of the best fanfics I've read in a while and although I can't say for certain that it's a story for you, I can say that it's worth it to at least give it a read.
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great read. from beginning to end, I never really was distracted or disinterested. Sure, I was expecting some ultimate battle at the end, but that's just how I like things to go. You showed that Cale was the strongest being in existence and made him dominate the power ranks until the end. I thank you for writing this book. have a good day.
Reveal Spoiler it was a fun read. It may not be a perfect story but it was a good story overall.
Let me get straight to the point, at the beginning of the series there were 2 people close to MC, but in the middle of the series after a certain event he cut off communication with the girl who was in love with MC and then there was a time skip and you ruined this topic like this, I hated it, since you are not going to use him for the story then introduce him as a side character and don't say that he likes MC, it's that simple. Let's come to the emergence of the characters and their emotions. The emergence of the characters is very sudden and sometimes forgotten and not shown after they appear. In my opinion, the emotions and behaviors are handled without much detail and could have been better. There are so many glaring points. If you are not interested in the review for the final part, do not continue. -------------------------------------------------- First of all, it ends with a happy ending, but I think the author is aware of the mistake he made, MC was very strong and the final battle was like a normal battle, it wasn't even bothered, but I think it would have been great if it had dealt with the emotions in a little more detail, it was explained implicitly, but I believe the author will fix this.
Reveal Spoiler La historia estuvo fabulosa, fue unos los fanfic mas completos que introducΓa un isekai con los poderes del monarca de las sombras. buena suerte en tu prΓ³xima historia.[img=recommend]
overall, it's a great read. somewhat sporadic development. I would've appreciated the 300-year arc to be more flushed out. But otherwise, I appreciated the adventure 7/10
I have finished reading it all and I have to say I was thoroughly impressed. Even the reason why he had all the knowledge was explained and that tid bit was great foresight. The passing could have been better but that is my only complaint. Very good story
Too much cringe. Writing whatever u want. Most of the stuff doesn't make sense according to plot. Author just want to finish quickly so he write whatever he want.. Plus Mc skill system and how it work is ... I don't know what to comment on this.. Plus this Mc is not qualified to became shadow monarch based on his personality. There is no character development at all. Power scaling is pure nonsense..
it was good, you ammased all the important characters to create no so long but good story
A great read that takes you to an interesting journey and hilarious scenes by the MC..πππ
I am not good at writing and 140 signs are to many so I show with smileys how I liked the story. ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
I liked this fanfic. While it was a bit rushed in many aspects, it was worth the read imo.
Awesome story dude keep up good work my man and I enjoyed your story thanks do more stories related slime story[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
nah this is dissapointment... It's seems their is no logic behind the plot and author wrote whatever he want.. It starts with verry unrealistic sad story(you typical cliche human evil but very unrealistic) and mc is just mehhh.. other character's are also mehhh...
Good read, no real red flag that'd kill my enjoyment.Though, the development of some relationships were kinda lackluster. No real tension in the story, and a lot of missed opportunities in that department as well.Also, the 300 year time skip was a missed opportunity to add some more details into the world.The MC also gained power waay too easily.
ΠΡΠΎ Π΄Π΅ΠΉΡΡΠ²ΠΈΡΠ΅Π»ΡΠ½ΠΎ ΠΊΠ»Π°ΡΡΠ½Π°Ρ ΠΈ Π·Π°ΠΊΠΎΠ½ΡΠ΅Π½Π½Π°Ρ ΠΈΡΡΠΎΡΠΈΡ
I recommend giving this fanfic a try, it's one of the best fanfics I've read in a while and although I can't say for certain that it's a story for you, I can say that it's worth it to at least give it a read.
Phenomenal fan-fic, with a wonderfully beautiful ending.