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i wasn't really expecting much for this fanfic as normal naruto reincarnating , a pleasant surprise , it is fantastic , naruto's developement , his relationships , his understanding of his powers , everything is great , well developed , the fanfic is ultimately fantastic honestly , if you hadn't dropped this yet author , please do continue , i like it very much
honestly one of the best fanfics of naruto I've read. I can't really find any fault with it that I'd change.
Probably the most well written Naruto Fanfic that I've read after "Goddess of Ice: Reborn as Naruto's Twin Sister"I sincerely hope that the author doesn't abandon this fanfic because there is so much potential ahead.
didn't like the thing with Sakura nor the constant platonic love with kushina and tsunami n all
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This story has a strong start, but by the late 20s the teasing of the relationship betweeen Naruto and the heroines starts to get annoying, there are a bunch of cliff hangers. Then we have the later issue of clones being a thing, them being a thing in this story quickly sapped all the interest I had in this story. Even after the author tries to rectify it with the clones not being used inintimately, they’re used in a way that cheapens the growing of relationships with other heroines.
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Adorei essa história alternativa de Naruto muito boa que realmente mostra outro ângulo das coisas. Em fim uma ótima novel e esperando por mais atualizações
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Unexpectedly a fine piece of work.. smooth read because of the fine writing, the flow is good and not boring.. its just, low on chapters so i cant binge read it til i drop 😅😅
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I need more of this. [Spoiler] Also probably in harem: Kushina, Hinata, Ino, Sakura, 'Sasuke' (basically Sarada)
this is one of the best wish fulfilment naruto story with no system and proper build up with characters.writing quality is good as it makes the story more enjoyable and different from those Chinese type ff.story development and world background seems very interesting as this is an alternate universe, which makes the world as a whole with a lot of potential.looking forward to his interaction with other characters. keep up the good work
Pacing fine, romance great, story so far not bad, I really like how naruto got Isekai'd to alternate universe and kushina and mikoto being alive makes me have goosebumps, although I thought the start of the story would be Naruto getting defeated by an otsutsuki based on the synopsis
I loved this fanfic, read it, I recommend it. moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore
I can't wait to continue this work. She's gorgeous in every sense. Every chapter makes me want more. The idea of the work is very interesting and distinguishes it from other works. I hope for regular output of chapters so that I can continue to enjoy this work.
Novela que presenta un cambio de ritmo en comparación con la mayoría de ff de naruto, además de presentar un concepto y una personalización del mundo bastante refrescante
need more please I need it 🥺[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Problaby the best Naruto fanfic that I have[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] read
Deleted my other review to try and give a more extensive breakdown on what I like in the story. First off, it’s a breath of fresh air reading something as well written as this, when you spend enough time on this app you start to get used to reading stories with tons of grammatical errors and other mistakes and this one has none that I could notice, the story is pretty solid and isn’t written in a way that feels like it’s rushing developments between characters, not to mention this story essentially gives Naruto a happy ending after going through the events of Shippuden, overall 10/10 in my book, keep it up
I like it, but can’t wonder. Will Hinata will also have romantic relationship with the MC?. Please keep it up.
Very good book. I wonder how the author will go about the Naruto x Kushina relationship when people find out that their mother and son.
As someone that never gives 5 stars and mostly give 4.8 at max, I can say this is a extremely well written and well thought out FF. I'm not saying it is perfect because I cannot speak for future chapter, but of today, I would say this is a MUST read for any Naruto fan that is looking for an au Narutoverse, that isn't overly simplified or trying too hard to get ho**ny readers
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee expecting a lot from this story, and the best thanks. Perfect and exelent. 😀😀😀😀
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Moree3eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrr. Nice story'... .....,...........,..,......,.....................,,....,,....,.,.,,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.z.z..zz..z.zz.z.z.z.z.z..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,...,,.,.,.,,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,....,.,.,.,.,...mm哭哭惱怒取ID
Can't wait to read more chapters. You are doing a grat work and even though it's a wish fulfilling ff it can be heartwarming
i wasn't really expecting much for this fanfic as normal naruto reincarnating , a pleasant surprise , it is fantastic , naruto's developement , his relationships , his understanding of his powers , everything is great , well developed , the fanfic is ultimately fantastic honestly , if you hadn't dropped this yet author , please do continue , i like it very much
honestly one of the best fanfics of naruto I've read. I can't really find any fault with it that I'd change.
Probably the most well written Naruto Fanfic that I've read after "Goddess of Ice: Reborn as Naruto's Twin Sister"I sincerely hope that the author doesn't abandon this fanfic because there is so much potential ahead.
didn't like the thing with Sakura nor the constant platonic love with kushina and tsunami n all
Reveal Spoiler This story has a strong start, but by the late 20s the teasing of the relationship betweeen Naruto and the heroines starts to get annoying, there are a bunch of cliff hangers. Then we have the later issue of clones being a thing, them being a thing in this story quickly sapped all the interest I had in this story. Even after the author tries to rectify it with the clones not being used inintimately, they’re used in a way that cheapens the growing of relationships with other heroines.
Reveal Spoiler Adorei essa história alternativa de Naruto muito boa que realmente mostra outro ângulo das coisas. Em fim uma ótima novel e esperando por mais atualizações
Reveal Spoiler Unexpectedly a fine piece of work.. smooth read because of the fine writing, the flow is good and not boring.. its just, low on chapters so i cant binge read it til i drop 😅😅
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I need more of this. [Spoiler] Also probably in harem: Kushina, Hinata, Ino, Sakura, 'Sasuke' (basically Sarada)
this is one of the best wish fulfilment naruto story with no system and proper build up with characters.writing quality is good as it makes the story more enjoyable and different from those Chinese type ff.story development and world background seems very interesting as this is an alternate universe, which makes the world as a whole with a lot of potential.looking forward to his interaction with other characters. keep up the good work
Pacing fine, romance great, story so far not bad, I really like how naruto got Isekai'd to alternate universe and kushina and mikoto being alive makes me have goosebumps, although I thought the start of the story would be Naruto getting defeated by an otsutsuki based on the synopsis
I loved this fanfic, read it, I recommend it. moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore
I can't wait to continue this work. She's gorgeous in every sense. Every chapter makes me want more. The idea of the work is very interesting and distinguishes it from other works. I hope for regular output of chapters so that I can continue to enjoy this work.
Novela que presenta un cambio de ritmo en comparación con la mayoría de ff de naruto, además de presentar un concepto y una personalización del mundo bastante refrescante
need more please I need it 🥺[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Problaby the best Naruto fanfic that I have[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] read
Deleted my other review to try and give a more extensive breakdown on what I like in the story. First off, it’s a breath of fresh air reading something as well written as this, when you spend enough time on this app you start to get used to reading stories with tons of grammatical errors and other mistakes and this one has none that I could notice, the story is pretty solid and isn’t written in a way that feels like it’s rushing developments between characters, not to mention this story essentially gives Naruto a happy ending after going through the events of Shippuden, overall 10/10 in my book, keep it up
I like it, but can’t wonder. Will Hinata will also have romantic relationship with the MC?. Please keep it up.
Very good book. I wonder how the author will go about the Naruto x Kushina relationship when people find out that their mother and son.
As someone that never gives 5 stars and mostly give 4.8 at max, I can say this is a extremely well written and well thought out FF. I'm not saying it is perfect because I cannot speak for future chapter, but of today, I would say this is a MUST read for any Naruto fan that is looking for an au Narutoverse, that isn't overly simplified or trying too hard to get ho**ny readers
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee expecting a lot from this story, and the best thanks. Perfect and exelent. 😀😀😀😀
Reveal Spoiler Moree3eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrr. Nice story'... .....,...........,..,......,.....................,,....,,....,.,.,,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.z.z..zz..z.zz.z.z.z.z.z..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,...,,.,.,.,,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,....,.,.,.,.,...mm哭哭惱怒取ID
Can't wait to read more chapters. You are doing a grat work and even though it's a wish fulfilling ff it can be heartwarming