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total garbage. dont know why so many people read this. your neurons must be burnt. bro's the admin son trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash
I really enjoyed it I started reading it along time ago but stoped dew to it being incomplete but I decided to re listen to it from the start The tags of this story that I would add #op mc #strong to stronger #gray mc #system
It's a pretty good story that is fun to read, spoiler but after a point the ring making portion of the story gets written out. Still a good story to read and pass the time 👍
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This book is the perfect combination of system talent date and blood line Yet without his hard work he would have nothing Live suffer learn ascend -ave vale vateque velvette
I really liked reading this fanfic and the author is really good to the point I was reading all his other fanfics without even realizing it lol
An enjoyable read that left me satisfied. While it has its share of grammatical errors, they werent't as detrimental as some fan fics I've read. If I could have asked for anything, it would have been less magical theory and more interpersonal interactions. The Author states that the end is rushed, but despite that the ending didnt't leave a bitter aftertaste in my mouth like so many others.
It was a very good story and that flowed very smoothly and the characters are very nice and almost complete.
Pretty decent read, also completed already so no wait time. But im honestly not a fan of the writing style. I found myself skipping several paragraphs, if not entire chapters at a time as i found a lot of the narration boring. For me the real interesting bits are usually the conversations and dialogues, and author skipping a lot of those felt rather disappointing. Regarding the plot, i felt near the end, it lost its essence by having all sorts of stuff like zanpaktou and nen. While i understood the idea, infelt the author could have maybe NOT go into too much detail about them and rather add them to the story as either a side plot or main focus. Lets just say the execution was rather lacking. Finally it kind of felt weird having chapters so short but at least the work was complete and ended
This was an amazing book and an amazing read. I hope more readers will read this book and enjoy it like I did.
What is L + ratio? L + ratio is used as a mocking insult on social media, often in reply to a post or opinion considered particularly bad. The letter L is used as a slang term for loss (as in the opposite of win). The word ratio is used in its social media sense referring to a situation in which a post has a high proportion of replies compared to likes or reposts, which usually indicates a barrage of negative replies criticizing and often mocking the post.
Bit slow and a slog to get trough but a great story that is almost completely worth it if you pace yourself instead of reading the entire thing in one go like myself, other than that a bit complicated to understand and a bit rushed ending compared to the rest, but again good. All in all I’d give it a 9.4/10.
Greta, wonderful just amazing. have dedicated my summer to reading this multiple times
One of the 2 best books I’ve read out of the THOUSANDS, I’ve read, that is not an exaggerated number and those are just the ones I could count, read it, seriously, don’t let this author leave. 11/5
125 chapters and it’s not even done with the 1st year and the story keeps getting derailed . I hope it get better but over 100 chapters and year one is not done? Horrible pacing
This was the best story that I have read on this app so far keep up the good work
A phenomenal book though the ending seemed rushed but considering the author's note at the end and the reason he gave for it made sense so it was understandable why It felt that way. The writing starts as good and only gets better the longer you read. A great story all in all.
Besides the rushed ending it was fantastic Although I’m still sad about steve and very curious about dusk and nazgul Overall this was a very good read
The story starts of really well and then just runs of the rails at some point. I think the stories main problem is that the power scaling is done properly. My reasoning for this is that the power eventually reaches a point were it just shouldn't be in the HP world anymore because we no longer have any interaction with the HP characters. That's only really a problem, at some point in the last 100 chapters.
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It's a great story, I didn't expect much because of the title and the system, but once I convinced myself of reading it, I feel it was worth it. The ending was a bit rushed, but the author does explain it in the end. Other than that, I have no complaints about this book.
I read every single chapter. Quite the interesting twist as far as a Harry Potter fanfic is concerned. Without spoiling the story too much, it was a rather gripping story with its lows and highs. The ending was rather... mundane, to say the least. However I don't regret reading it one bit.
total garbage. dont know why so many people read this. your neurons must be burnt. bro's the admin son trash trash trash trash trash trash trash trash
I really enjoyed it I started reading it along time ago but stoped dew to it being incomplete but I decided to re listen to it from the start The tags of this story that I would add #op mc #strong to stronger #gray mc #system
It's a pretty good story that is fun to read, spoiler but after a point the ring making portion of the story gets written out. Still a good story to read and pass the time 👍
Reveal Spoiler This book is the perfect combination of system talent date and blood line Yet without his hard work he would have nothing Live suffer learn ascend -ave vale vateque velvette
I really liked reading this fanfic and the author is really good to the point I was reading all his other fanfics without even realizing it lol
An enjoyable read that left me satisfied. While it has its share of grammatical errors, they werent't as detrimental as some fan fics I've read. If I could have asked for anything, it would have been less magical theory and more interpersonal interactions. The Author states that the end is rushed, but despite that the ending didnt't leave a bitter aftertaste in my mouth like so many others.
It was a very good story and that flowed very smoothly and the characters are very nice and almost complete.
Pretty decent read, also completed already so no wait time. But im honestly not a fan of the writing style. I found myself skipping several paragraphs, if not entire chapters at a time as i found a lot of the narration boring. For me the real interesting bits are usually the conversations and dialogues, and author skipping a lot of those felt rather disappointing. Regarding the plot, i felt near the end, it lost its essence by having all sorts of stuff like zanpaktou and nen. While i understood the idea, infelt the author could have maybe NOT go into too much detail about them and rather add them to the story as either a side plot or main focus. Lets just say the execution was rather lacking. Finally it kind of felt weird having chapters so short but at least the work was complete and ended
This was an amazing book and an amazing read. I hope more readers will read this book and enjoy it like I did.
What is L + ratio? L + ratio is used as a mocking insult on social media, often in reply to a post or opinion considered particularly bad. The letter L is used as a slang term for loss (as in the opposite of win). The word ratio is used in its social media sense referring to a situation in which a post has a high proportion of replies compared to likes or reposts, which usually indicates a barrage of negative replies criticizing and often mocking the post.
Bit slow and a slog to get trough but a great story that is almost completely worth it if you pace yourself instead of reading the entire thing in one go like myself, other than that a bit complicated to understand and a bit rushed ending compared to the rest, but again good. All in all I’d give it a 9.4/10.
Greta, wonderful just amazing. have dedicated my summer to reading this multiple times
One of the 2 best books I’ve read out of the THOUSANDS, I’ve read, that is not an exaggerated number and those are just the ones I could count, read it, seriously, don’t let this author leave. 11/5
125 chapters and it’s not even done with the 1st year and the story keeps getting derailed . I hope it get better but over 100 chapters and year one is not done? Horrible pacing
This was the best story that I have read on this app so far keep up the good work
A phenomenal book though the ending seemed rushed but considering the author's note at the end and the reason he gave for it made sense so it was understandable why It felt that way. The writing starts as good and only gets better the longer you read. A great story all in all.
Besides the rushed ending it was fantastic Although I’m still sad about steve and very curious about dusk and nazgul Overall this was a very good read
The story starts of really well and then just runs of the rails at some point. I think the stories main problem is that the power scaling is done properly. My reasoning for this is that the power eventually reaches a point were it just shouldn't be in the HP world anymore because we no longer have any interaction with the HP characters. That's only really a problem, at some point in the last 100 chapters.
Reveal Spoiler It's a great story, I didn't expect much because of the title and the system, but once I convinced myself of reading it, I feel it was worth it. The ending was a bit rushed, but the author does explain it in the end. Other than that, I have no complaints about this book.
I read every single chapter. Quite the interesting twist as far as a Harry Potter fanfic is concerned. Without spoiling the story too much, it was a rather gripping story with its lows and highs. The ending was rather... mundane, to say the least. However I don't regret reading it one bit.