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Honestly it was absolutely incredible, great execution good plot twists, the romance, all in general was great; although there was a stretch around the middle where it seemed liked it was a raw translation of a Chinese novel but it only lasted a few chapters.
probably one of the best fics ive seen. a top tier read, although i have some small nitpicks on how rushed the ending is, the redundancy part more than made up for it
It's actually amazing, i enjoy reading mushoku tensei and the classroom of the elite, but u made a story of it.
Amazing story. To anyone wondering who ends up with who look through chapter 65
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This is a good fic and I really enjoyed it. I would've put a perfect 5 stars rating if not for the many potholes.
this is terrible, mostly because it is a retelling of the original, and sometimes it seems that the author is simply copying the text from the original, mc is as boring as possible, I give a low rating because this fanfic is too overrated
Yeah this isn't for me. Tho a really hardcore Ayanokoji fans gonna like this fic. I like Ayanokoji, but not to this degree I guess.
comedy and magic nice atleast is it a comedy? cause it kinda sounds like it it is fun to read and its worth your time!
A very good fan fic with a powerful mc bit not too op and smart mc which is obvious because it's kiyotaka. Although changes have been made to the original kiyotaka ,those were good. Overall it's a masterpiece.[img=recommend]
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I know I'm supa nitpickey in my comments but I do actually like this book lol. COTE crossover is a great idea ππ
Well, what more can I say. This right here is a masterpiece, from the beginning all the way to the end. I wasn't disappointed with any chapter this fanfic had. I'm truly glad I got to be a bare witness to this gem of a novel. Truly thank you Author for creating this.
I like the story and all but my only question is the mc rudeus or not? Like bro rudeus got more screentime then the mc like tfw?
If you see this congrats you found the a hidden treasure fully recommend it
no seguΓ este libro en emisiΓ³n lei cuando ya estaba completo pero me encanto tanto que solo me dilate dos dΓas para leerlo no dormir una noche entera leyendo me gustΓ³ todo la escritura desarrollo hasta el final .
I don't have much to say... there wasn't much different than the original or I can say something out of expectations but still this was a good Fanfic... a great one even. Anyone looks for a 'smooth' or linear Fanfic should give this a try. Don't wanna compare but this was better than the other Mushoku Tensei fanfics I read. Maybe only Mushoku Impact might come close but still the conclusion is, Try it!
one of the best fanfics on webnovel, you'll miss out if you dont read this, bless the author for making this
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Thank you author, i really enjoyed this story. Truly a masterpiece. I genuinely cried a little after reading the end on Wattpad .Thank you.
I appreciate Mushoku Tensei fics. There are minor grammar/spelling errors. The story is basically done. It is great to read. I enjoyed reading.
mc is like a combination of muichiro tokito cluelessness and stoick face and a little bit of IQ of kiyotaka. but overall the story is good and well wrtitten[img=recommend][img=recommend]. (chp 79)
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Definitely a hidden gem great fanfic 5/5 takes one of my favorite light novels and adds one of my favorite MC's I liked the romance and the action the grammar is good there is a tendency to use overly complicated words but it doesn't take away from the reading experience. the character design is good as well no character is acting OOC imo. Story development is also good it doesn't have the problem that some fanfic have of strictly adhering to the og plot. I found the early Rudeus POV's sort of redundant but other than that I liked the way the story went I won't say much else because I don't want to spoil anything if you're on the fence definitely give it a read.
POV: You have come to reviews before you read this. So, let me clear a few things before you read this fanfic, yeah? First, the first volume - up until Turning Point 1 - have Rudy POV for 60% of the time because nothing much changes except minor changes in relationships. That is because there is another MC. Second, Julian AKA Kiyotaka is obviously better than Rudeus. Now if you have a problem with that, you might want to leave right now. BUT, BUT--- A big but, there is a huge twist at the end. If you are patient enough to read until the end, you will find out why Rudeus is trashed upon so much. It will all make sense in the end. That said, please be patient with progressions. I actually cooked this, lol. So, give it a try until the end, and even if it still doesn't satisfy your palette, feel free to roast me in the comments to this review. Another disclaimer I'd put in here is that I have used chatGPT for the extremely superfluous descriptions. The places where you think the descriptions were too much, yeah, I used the synonyms function of the AI to replace simple words with fancy ones. If that's a turn-off, sorry, not sorry. Personally, I think the writing overall is nice and plot is decent, so it's still worth a try, despite the few little descriptions I added to meet the word count, lol. π Cheers!
Honestly it was absolutely incredible, great execution good plot twists, the romance, all in general was great; although there was a stretch around the middle where it seemed liked it was a raw translation of a Chinese novel but it only lasted a few chapters.
probably one of the best fics ive seen. a top tier read, although i have some small nitpicks on how rushed the ending is, the redundancy part more than made up for it
It's actually amazing, i enjoy reading mushoku tensei and the classroom of the elite, but u made a story of it.
Amazing story. To anyone wondering who ends up with who look through chapter 65
Reveal Spoiler This is a good fic and I really enjoyed it. I would've put a perfect 5 stars rating if not for the many potholes.
this is terrible, mostly because it is a retelling of the original, and sometimes it seems that the author is simply copying the text from the original, mc is as boring as possible, I give a low rating because this fanfic is too overrated
Yeah this isn't for me. Tho a really hardcore Ayanokoji fans gonna like this fic. I like Ayanokoji, but not to this degree I guess.
comedy and magic nice atleast is it a comedy? cause it kinda sounds like it it is fun to read and its worth your time!
A very good fan fic with a powerful mc bit not too op and smart mc which is obvious because it's kiyotaka. Although changes have been made to the original kiyotaka ,those were good. Overall it's a masterpiece.[img=recommend]
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I know I'm supa nitpickey in my comments but I do actually like this book lol. COTE crossover is a great idea ππ
Well, what more can I say. This right here is a masterpiece, from the beginning all the way to the end. I wasn't disappointed with any chapter this fanfic had. I'm truly glad I got to be a bare witness to this gem of a novel. Truly thank you Author for creating this.
I like the story and all but my only question is the mc rudeus or not? Like bro rudeus got more screentime then the mc like tfw?
If you see this congrats you found the a hidden treasure fully recommend it
no seguΓ este libro en emisiΓ³n lei cuando ya estaba completo pero me encanto tanto que solo me dilate dos dΓas para leerlo no dormir una noche entera leyendo me gustΓ³ todo la escritura desarrollo hasta el final .
I don't have much to say... there wasn't much different than the original or I can say something out of expectations but still this was a good Fanfic... a great one even. Anyone looks for a 'smooth' or linear Fanfic should give this a try. Don't wanna compare but this was better than the other Mushoku Tensei fanfics I read. Maybe only Mushoku Impact might come close but still the conclusion is, Try it!
one of the best fanfics on webnovel, you'll miss out if you dont read this, bless the author for making this
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Thank you author, i really enjoyed this story. Truly a masterpiece. I genuinely cried a little after reading the end on Wattpad .Thank you.
I appreciate Mushoku Tensei fics. There are minor grammar/spelling errors. The story is basically done. It is great to read. I enjoyed reading.
mc is like a combination of muichiro tokito cluelessness and stoick face and a little bit of IQ of kiyotaka. but overall the story is good and well wrtitten[img=recommend][img=recommend]. (chp 79)
Reveal Spoiler Definitely a hidden gem great fanfic 5/5 takes one of my favorite light novels and adds one of my favorite MC's I liked the romance and the action the grammar is good there is a tendency to use overly complicated words but it doesn't take away from the reading experience. the character design is good as well no character is acting OOC imo. Story development is also good it doesn't have the problem that some fanfic have of strictly adhering to the og plot. I found the early Rudeus POV's sort of redundant but other than that I liked the way the story went I won't say much else because I don't want to spoil anything if you're on the fence definitely give it a read.
POV: You have come to reviews before you read this. So, let me clear a few things before you read this fanfic, yeah? First, the first volume - up until Turning Point 1 - have Rudy POV for 60% of the time because nothing much changes except minor changes in relationships. That is because there is another MC. Second, Julian AKA Kiyotaka is obviously better than Rudeus. Now if you have a problem with that, you might want to leave right now. BUT, BUT--- A big but, there is a huge twist at the end. If you are patient enough to read until the end, you will find out why Rudeus is trashed upon so much. It will all make sense in the end. That said, please be patient with progressions. I actually cooked this, lol. So, give it a try until the end, and even if it still doesn't satisfy your palette, feel free to roast me in the comments to this review. Another disclaimer I'd put in here is that I have used chatGPT for the extremely superfluous descriptions. The places where you think the descriptions were too much, yeah, I used the synonyms function of the AI to replace simple words with fancy ones. If that's a turn-off, sorry, not sorry. Personally, I think the writing overall is nice and plot is decent, so it's still worth a try, despite the few little descriptions I added to meet the word count, lol. π Cheers!