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This is a tough one. I was super hyped for this book based on the title. I really was looking forward to a mob character getting a harem of transcendent yanderes. That being said, our MC in the first 30 chapters is someone who just gets manipulated constantly like a puppet and is ok with it. You drug him? He forgives. Kill him, all cool. I know our character is supposed to have some screws lose, but he's basically a doll for anyone to play with. If it gets better from chapter 30, I won't be reading more to see it. Regardless, thanks for the hard work author :).
I understand that this is the author's first work, and it really shows with the absolutely horrid grammar and quality of the novel, which is something that shouldn't be overlooked since it can be fixed with a simple run-through with AI. The story itself is a disjointed mess with unlikeable, poorly written characters, and I couldn't stomach more than 15 chapters before dropping it. Not worth it even as a smut novel.
hey hey hey author dont stop updating this was going better way but i just wanna tell you that when will mc kill the villain ,it looks you are stretching the atory by not killing them
author could u read over the chapter and correct the paragraph and spelling cause it great but also confusing to read
Author San I have read more than 200 chapters, could you please tell me what mistake Alex committed so that MC is still alive?
I will give this 5 stars all around except for writing quality. I feel like the story is wonderful, good plot, it takes awhile for things to get explained but gets there eventually. For the people who have a problem with not knowing who the man character is there’s a simple solution read the free chapters and you will figure it out. I actually love the idea of a different take on the genre. It makes the other harems I read feel the same, this is definitely not generic. With all of my enthusiasm for this book brings me to the only, but big, problem with this novel. The writing is atrocious almost like it was never proofread, not one single time. If you have a basic level of literature you can make it through. Though, it will cause some headaches even for advanced readers. Almost every paragraph is riddled with mistakes having me smh.
keep up the good work author after the long work the day this story is the one thats keep my day going and when the f$%3 will this alex hero dies and gets exposed in front of everyone waiting for upcoming chapters......
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Hello Author,The story is really great but can you please explain how did his first died and was raped or something and can she be resurrected with some ultra op methods. Please clarify this I know you are new to this but there are some things you didn't explain correctly so I am losing my excitement to read.
Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know how many girls are currently in the harem, and if there are any yanderes... please answer me.
Right now, this is as much as i can give.I have a few questions after reading 16 chaps, since i am getting a really bad feeling for some reason from this novel. I won't continue reading unless some things are clarified.1. Did MC get NTR'ed in the past, and will he get NTR'ed in the future?2. That Wife of his, with the black ring, is she still alive? Did she get NTR'ed? or R4ped? Will he ever meet her again?I am asking because i feel a tragic past for some cliche character building, centered around that wife of his, and that would ruin the novel for me.I get seriously bad feelings from this novel so far, and i am usually right, so please answer what you can to set my mind at ease.
Buah I am a lover of this type of novels, I sincerely hope to see more of this work, keep up the good work you have my support :D I don't want to do spoilers so I will say that I recommend it.
How many Isekai stories with the same premise exist? A guy gets killed (majority of the time by Truck-sama) and reincarnated or transported to a different world. There he will be the hero who's going to save the day and get the girl(s). Yeah there's a lot of those stories... But here a little bit different. Why? Well the Isekai "hero" had metaknowledge and used it to start earlier on his destined glorious heroic path which creates a tiny butterfly effect without realizing. That butterfly effect allow a nameless background character who I presume supposed to be dead in the canon story to live and be the actual protagonist. Like Konosuba is a parody to the isekai genre and like Moriarty The Patriot the narrative isn't focused on the "hero". I love it.
it's not a extremely deep story or amazing written its quite evident from the title, but it is enjoyable and personally I'm here for the yandere, and i hope the author continues it until the end
This novel is original and interesting, I haven’t seen something like this for a long time, except in Korean novels you can meet such a main character, in general the novel is cool
10/10, or 5/5 i guess. PS: really good, just read my people [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is good author i have no problem in the characters personality. Also can you update faster? Its okay if you can't. It's just the story is good that much, that i want to read it as soon as i saw your update notification in my phone. Haha joke aside it's okay if you can't; don't be pressured. Also i like the mc mysterious past just dont exaggerate it too much cause it will ruin the story. #YandereCult!
Hey, author, will there be an increase in the life span of MC in the future. Advise: try to keep the novel less complex as you are a new author it will become harder to continue the novel in the future and you may have to drop it in the future which I don't want you to do as you become experienced you can start writing complex novel
This is My first time writing a Web novel. It's mine so I'm giving it 5 stars, First 5 chapters will be info dump so hang on there and after that story started to move. MC will sometimes be naive but that doesn't mean he is a good guy and not an overpowered character but soon will be. If you have any questions regarding this novel, ask me right away...OK.. 😉 Most important thing is, 'HAREM', it is definitely Harem, hope you enjoy it.
This is a tough one. I was super hyped for this book based on the title. I really was looking forward to a mob character getting a harem of transcendent yanderes. That being said, our MC in the first 30 chapters is someone who just gets manipulated constantly like a puppet and is ok with it. You drug him? He forgives. Kill him, all cool. I know our character is supposed to have some screws lose, but he's basically a doll for anyone to play with. If it gets better from chapter 30, I won't be reading more to see it. Regardless, thanks for the hard work author :).
I understand that this is the author's first work, and it really shows with the absolutely horrid grammar and quality of the novel, which is something that shouldn't be overlooked since it can be fixed with a simple run-through with AI. The story itself is a disjointed mess with unlikeable, poorly written characters, and I couldn't stomach more than 15 chapters before dropping it. Not worth it even as a smut novel.
hey hey hey author dont stop updating this was going better way but i just wanna tell you that when will mc kill the villain ,it looks you are stretching the atory by not killing them
author could u read over the chapter and correct the paragraph and spelling cause it great but also confusing to read
Author San I have read more than 200 chapters, could you please tell me what mistake Alex committed so that MC is still alive?
I will give this 5 stars all around except for writing quality. I feel like the story is wonderful, good plot, it takes awhile for things to get explained but gets there eventually. For the people who have a problem with not knowing who the man character is there’s a simple solution read the free chapters and you will figure it out. I actually love the idea of a different take on the genre. It makes the other harems I read feel the same, this is definitely not generic. With all of my enthusiasm for this book brings me to the only, but big, problem with this novel. The writing is atrocious almost like it was never proofread, not one single time. If you have a basic level of literature you can make it through. Though, it will cause some headaches even for advanced readers. Almost every paragraph is riddled with mistakes having me smh.
keep up the good work author after the long work the day this story is the one thats keep my day going and when the f$%3 will this alex hero dies and gets exposed in front of everyone waiting for upcoming chapters......
Update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update
Hello Author,The story is really great but can you please explain how did his first died and was raped or something and can she be resurrected with some ultra op methods. Please clarify this I know you are new to this but there are some things you didn't explain correctly so I am losing my excitement to read.
Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know how many girls are currently in the harem, and if there are any yanderes... please answer me.
Right now, this is as much as i can give.I have a few questions after reading 16 chaps, since i am getting a really bad feeling for some reason from this novel. I won't continue reading unless some things are clarified.1. Did MC get NTR'ed in the past, and will he get NTR'ed in the future?2. That Wife of his, with the black ring, is she still alive? Did she get NTR'ed? or R4ped? Will he ever meet her again?I am asking because i feel a tragic past for some cliche character building, centered around that wife of his, and that would ruin the novel for me.I get seriously bad feelings from this novel so far, and i am usually right, so please answer what you can to set my mind at ease.
Buah I am a lover of this type of novels, I sincerely hope to see more of this work, keep up the good work you have my support :D I don't want to do spoilers so I will say that I recommend it.
How many Isekai stories with the same premise exist? A guy gets killed (majority of the time by Truck-sama) and reincarnated or transported to a different world. There he will be the hero who's going to save the day and get the girl(s). Yeah there's a lot of those stories... But here a little bit different. Why? Well the Isekai "hero" had metaknowledge and used it to start earlier on his destined glorious heroic path which creates a tiny butterfly effect without realizing. That butterfly effect allow a nameless background character who I presume supposed to be dead in the canon story to live and be the actual protagonist. Like Konosuba is a parody to the isekai genre and like Moriarty The Patriot the narrative isn't focused on the "hero". I love it.
it's not a extremely deep story or amazing written its quite evident from the title, but it is enjoyable and personally I'm here for the yandere, and i hope the author continues it until the end
This novel is original and interesting, I haven’t seen something like this for a long time, except in Korean novels you can meet such a main character, in general the novel is cool
10/10, or 5/5 i guess. PS: really good, just read my people [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is good author i have no problem in the characters personality. Also can you update faster? Its okay if you can't. It's just the story is good that much, that i want to read it as soon as i saw your update notification in my phone. Haha joke aside it's okay if you can't; don't be pressured. Also i like the mc mysterious past just dont exaggerate it too much cause it will ruin the story. #YandereCult!
Hey, author, will there be an increase in the life span of MC in the future. Advise: try to keep the novel less complex as you are a new author it will become harder to continue the novel in the future and you may have to drop it in the future which I don't want you to do as you become experienced you can start writing complex novel
This is My first time writing a Web novel. It's mine so I'm giving it 5 stars, First 5 chapters will be info dump so hang on there and after that story started to move. MC will sometimes be naive but that doesn't mean he is a good guy and not an overpowered character but soon will be. If you have any questions regarding this novel, ask me right away...OK.. 😉 Most important thing is, 'HAREM', it is definitely Harem, hope you enjoy it.