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Write a reviewHere we go... It a very good book with really intresting development. Too early to judge but I had fun till chapter 9. Acceptable writing with errors that can be ignored. Weird but fun MC and but the story got confusing at times so I suggest Author use [MC POV] [Flashback] etc to tell the traders exactly what they are reafing Question for author : Is shiraori the main girl?
Author you need to add few more characters, or develop the existing ones, other than that it's not bad.
Here we go... It a very good book with really intresting development. Too early to judge but I had fun till chapter 9. Acceptable writing with errors that can be ignored. Weird but fun MC and but the story got confusing at times so I suggest Author use [MC POV] [Flashback] etc to tell the traders exactly what they are reafing Question for author : Is shiraori the main girl?
Author you need to add few more characters, or develop the existing ones, other than that it's not bad.
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