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This is an excellent piece of work with distinctive characters, clear background. The way how the writer described everything from characters, and environments to actions and emotions makes the story feels real. The paragraph arrangement is very neat and easy to understand. Overall, it's good.
I thought this story would be an ordinary reincarnation story. But, oh boy, I was immediately presented with a reincarnation+tower-like system when I kept reading the next chapter. The author provides enough suspense in this story. I just wish he didn't let this annoying woman stay with him as the story progresses.
Okay, this is basically the first ML story based on reincarnation and system that I have read. And I'm tied to it with full interest. Looking forward to your updates Author. Your grammars are perfect, and you kept me hooked, I was intrigued at first because of the mafia-like beginning... But now this wants to keep me going. Thank you for creating this masterpiece. This is the ML book I've read that kept me hooked, I like the way you started the first chapter. Thank you once again.
Wow! bro what a story. Mostly perfect grammar and I love the way you write, the build up to the story. It's beautifully paced, making for totally an immersive reading. There are however a few errors of note. In your synopsis you mentioned, " ...the universe was not done with him and made him awaken in another world. You could have said instead, "...brought him back in another world. On to the chapter I you state that Aiden was perplexed by 'the lack of support from the police'. Regardless of how vicious or how much of a menace to society his victim was, the police will just consider anyone who kills this rotten apple as a criminal and not as a saviour. That's standard police rational, it's just black and white in their reasoning there are no grey areas. In that regard you might want to say instead, that Aiden was perplexed by the lack of impartiality by the police, as they had already convinced themselves that he was guilty of the crime without bothering to give him the benefit of the doubt. Otherwise... excellent writing bro. Keep up the very high standard.
Thanks for the chapter update. An isekai character to another world, killed by his own professor, seems good. Actually i just read you first chapter and due to several books that I have read, isekai is already a part of it. Im looking forward into your world building. Good luck..
This is an excellent piece of work with distinctive characters, clear background. The way how the writer described everything from characters, and environments to actions and emotions makes the story feels real. The paragraph arrangement is very neat and easy to understand. Overall, it's good.
I thought this story would be an ordinary reincarnation story. But, oh boy, I was immediately presented with a reincarnation+tower-like system when I kept reading the next chapter. The author provides enough suspense in this story. I just wish he didn't let this annoying woman stay with him as the story progresses.
Okay, this is basically the first ML story based on reincarnation and system that I have read. And I'm tied to it with full interest. Looking forward to your updates Author. Your grammars are perfect, and you kept me hooked, I was intrigued at first because of the mafia-like beginning... But now this wants to keep me going. Thank you for creating this masterpiece. This is the ML book I've read that kept me hooked, I like the way you started the first chapter. Thank you once again.
Wow! bro what a story. Mostly perfect grammar and I love the way you write, the build up to the story. It's beautifully paced, making for totally an immersive reading. There are however a few errors of note. In your synopsis you mentioned, " ...the universe was not done with him and made him awaken in another world. You could have said instead, "...brought him back in another world. On to the chapter I you state that Aiden was perplexed by 'the lack of support from the police'. Regardless of how vicious or how much of a menace to society his victim was, the police will just consider anyone who kills this rotten apple as a criminal and not as a saviour. That's standard police rational, it's just black and white in their reasoning there are no grey areas. In that regard you might want to say instead, that Aiden was perplexed by the lack of impartiality by the police, as they had already convinced themselves that he was guilty of the crime without bothering to give him the benefit of the doubt. Otherwise... excellent writing bro. Keep up the very high standard.
Thanks for the chapter update. An isekai character to another world, killed by his own professor, seems good. Actually i just read you first chapter and due to several books that I have read, isekai is already a part of it. Im looking forward into your world building. Good luck..