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A must read novel with a gripping tale about f heartbreak and growth. One of the best books on this platform at portraying a good story growth and pathing. Finishing up chapter 22 right now and wanted to drop this early review before I forgot. Keep it up Mel!
This novel is FANTASTIC!!! The story keeps you on the edge of your seat with all the twist and turns. It's impeccable written and immersive. I just can't put it down!
This is a very good novel but I'm very and seriously disappointed in your female lead. Reason being that I see her as a failure as queen to her people and a very big disappointment as a daughter. I mean, how could she fall in love with a man that is responsible for the death of thousands of her people as well as her mom who was her only family just like that without making him work for it? Not to talk of Roshan who died for her making his sacrifice meaningless. After going through all that pain that Draco caused her, she would have at least continued hating him and made him work for her love not just fall like that without him doing anything. This has made me feel like she's selfish and cares about nothing but her self and her maid who's not even her family over her own mother; because from my understanding if Draco were to kill Malica she would hate him forever. Then what makes Malica so different from her own mother and her people Unless she didn't love her Mom and her people enough except for her title as queen.
give us a new synopsis your novel is very interested the words and syllabus are topnotch keep up the good work 👍,but we need more updating like three chapters a day 🙏🌹💋🎉
An intriguing book with an amazing story trope that will leave you hooked with every chapter, I never get bored I love it, great job author, all my votes go on here🥰🥰
Amazing book, the writing quality is superb, character personalization is top tier and the world building just makes it an even more fun read, I won't miss any bit of this amazing read till the end♥️♥️
The story is well written. And the female lead is strong which I really like. Because personally, I’m not into weak female lead unless they get later character development. Anyways, keep it up author. This book is very interesting already! <3
amazing book with great author who takes you to a whole new world, she has a great sense of writing and world building, keep up the great work author
Hats off, this was such an incredible read. I read until chapter 7, and I can already say it's worth reading (I'll be continuing). The lead is a strong woman, and who wouldn't like a strong fl? The writing can be a little improved, but I highly recommend. 5/5
A great book with a good premise and character design. Author's story telling is amazing and the world building is unique and interesting. I love the character of FL. She is strong, fierce and fearless. I'm enjoying reading this book. This is worth a read.
There's a lot to say, simply from having read even the slightest bit. I won't muddle my words and get straight into it. The pacing is amazing. Each paragraph carries a rythm that left me continuin to read it steadily. It felt very smooth in how it was written. The characters were well built up, particularly the Sultan who only got a few paragraphs of screentime. The reason that he was so prevalent is because of how he was inadvertantly described beforehand. His daughter was trained in his image at his command, to be strong, unmoving, and confident in her own skills. The image of that strong man was immediately shattered within his own scene, one of a man shrunken within the face of death. A great example of paralellism, it only served the tragedy that came of said scene. Her thoughts towards ascending to power were explained in the beginning, of how she herself would be left to face the danger presented by the Vampire King. She feels unready, and by allowing her to witness her Father's death, it ultimately shows that even despite her hesitance, she will have to take power within her own hands anyway. The feelings that are hidden in the background throughout the story are amazing, and whether it is by the author's own intention, or simply second nature, it has been incredible to read through. While it is not exactly my genre, I look forward to seeing what more comes of the storyline.
It's all good and had potential from my viewpoint. The way of addressing the vampire king rival feels a bit out of picture. How about something like 'adversary'? That's all I could see and great work so far. Keep it up ! Leaving a 4.8
Great start author, nice synopsis. Interesting story. I just can't get enough of reading a vampire story and this one would be one of my favorite, add it to my library. Good job author 🎉
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The story is interesting and the plot seems fun although it needs some revisions overall a great read, and recommended. Anyways, a further look into character design would be good.
Just finished reading this and wow! It is an amazing start for the story :) Excited to see more
Hey guy! Writing a new novel since I just couldn't keep my imagination to rest until I was done with the other two, tell me what you think about it in the review section😍
One of the better novels I read. The plot and structure of the novel are strong, and the immaculate choice of words take you for a ride. Keep up the good work, author!
A must read novel with a gripping tale about f heartbreak and growth. One of the best books on this platform at portraying a good story growth and pathing. Finishing up chapter 22 right now and wanted to drop this early review before I forgot. Keep it up Mel!
This novel is FANTASTIC!!! The story keeps you on the edge of your seat with all the twist and turns. It's impeccable written and immersive. I just can't put it down!
This is a very good novel but I'm very and seriously disappointed in your female lead. Reason being that I see her as a failure as queen to her people and a very big disappointment as a daughter. I mean, how could she fall in love with a man that is responsible for the death of thousands of her people as well as her mom who was her only family just like that without making him work for it? Not to talk of Roshan who died for her making his sacrifice meaningless. After going through all that pain that Draco caused her, she would have at least continued hating him and made him work for her love not just fall like that without him doing anything. This has made me feel like she's selfish and cares about nothing but her self and her maid who's not even her family over her own mother; because from my understanding if Draco were to kill Malica she would hate him forever. Then what makes Malica so different from her own mother and her people Unless she didn't love her Mom and her people enough except for her title as queen.
give us a new synopsis your novel is very interested the words and syllabus are topnotch keep up the good work 👍,but we need more updating like three chapters a day 🙏🌹💋🎉
An intriguing book with an amazing story trope that will leave you hooked with every chapter, I never get bored I love it, great job author, all my votes go on here🥰🥰
Amazing book, the writing quality is superb, character personalization is top tier and the world building just makes it an even more fun read, I won't miss any bit of this amazing read till the end♥️♥️
The story is well written. And the female lead is strong which I really like. Because personally, I’m not into weak female lead unless they get later character development. Anyways, keep it up author. This book is very interesting already! <3
amazing book with great author who takes you to a whole new world, she has a great sense of writing and world building, keep up the great work author
Hats off, this was such an incredible read. I read until chapter 7, and I can already say it's worth reading (I'll be continuing). The lead is a strong woman, and who wouldn't like a strong fl? The writing can be a little improved, but I highly recommend. 5/5
A great book with a good premise and character design. Author's story telling is amazing and the world building is unique and interesting. I love the character of FL. She is strong, fierce and fearless. I'm enjoying reading this book. This is worth a read.
There's a lot to say, simply from having read even the slightest bit. I won't muddle my words and get straight into it. The pacing is amazing. Each paragraph carries a rythm that left me continuin to read it steadily. It felt very smooth in how it was written. The characters were well built up, particularly the Sultan who only got a few paragraphs of screentime. The reason that he was so prevalent is because of how he was inadvertantly described beforehand. His daughter was trained in his image at his command, to be strong, unmoving, and confident in her own skills. The image of that strong man was immediately shattered within his own scene, one of a man shrunken within the face of death. A great example of paralellism, it only served the tragedy that came of said scene. Her thoughts towards ascending to power were explained in the beginning, of how she herself would be left to face the danger presented by the Vampire King. She feels unready, and by allowing her to witness her Father's death, it ultimately shows that even despite her hesitance, she will have to take power within her own hands anyway. The feelings that are hidden in the background throughout the story are amazing, and whether it is by the author's own intention, or simply second nature, it has been incredible to read through. While it is not exactly my genre, I look forward to seeing what more comes of the storyline.
It's all good and had potential from my viewpoint. The way of addressing the vampire king rival feels a bit out of picture. How about something like 'adversary'? That's all I could see and great work so far. Keep it up ! Leaving a 4.8
Great start author, nice synopsis. Interesting story. I just can't get enough of reading a vampire story and this one would be one of my favorite, add it to my library. Good job author 🎉
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The story is interesting and the plot seems fun although it needs some revisions overall a great read, and recommended. Anyways, a further look into character design would be good.
Just finished reading this and wow! It is an amazing start for the story :) Excited to see more
Hey guy! Writing a new novel since I just couldn't keep my imagination to rest until I was done with the other two, tell me what you think about it in the review section😍
One of the better novels I read. The plot and structure of the novel are strong, and the immaculate choice of words take you for a ride. Keep up the good work, author!