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Write a reviewNovel looks quite good. So far i like all characters(i am at 39 chapter) . World background is quite big and give author a lot of options to make long grand story. So far i only found 1 mistake of switching names. And overall translation looks very good for someone like me(english not my m. language). Pace is quite slow as was told in synopsis. Only 1 problem i have this novel. Propably for word count there is a lot of over explaining about some stuff...most about thoughts of characters. You can read almost whole chapter describing what mc think about something in 6 different ways that are in the end similar and sometimes even repeating some thoughts in different chapters. That is not slow pace its just there to make more chapters with more words. But other than that, novel looks great and i look forward to read more.
Novel looks quite good. So far i like all characters(i am at 39 chapter) . World background is quite big and give author a lot of options to make long grand story. So far i only found 1 mistake of switching names. And overall translation looks very good for someone like me(english not my m. language). Pace is quite slow as was told in synopsis. Only 1 problem i have this novel. Propably for word count there is a lot of over explaining about some stuff...most about thoughts of characters. You can read almost whole chapter describing what mc think about something in 6 different ways that are in the end similar and sometimes even repeating some thoughts in different chapters. That is not slow pace its just there to make more chapters with more words. But other than that, novel looks great and i look forward to read more.
Have only read till end of free section but seems very well written and refreshing.