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The novel shows great potential with an interesting plot and an engaging storytelling style. However, the reading experience may be hindered by certain grammatical errors and sentence structures. We understand that English may not be the author's first language and commend them for persevering despite the language barrier. Nonetheless, it's important to acknowledge that these writing issues could pose challenges for some readers. Therefore, we kindly recommend that the author seek assistance with editing or consider utilizing software that can assist with grammar.
A very good story! I like it so much Author! I will definitely read more to see out it goes.
I love everything about the book, ‘the opening chapter, child birth and how awesome the boy is’. You are really talented and I most say “this novel is wonderfully written”. My favourite character is Kiara*bold woman* Can't wait to know more of Zairo
well it's great how you described the story. Your are a great storyteller. you know how to tell a story. btw tje story is just great. I enjoyed it very much. I would recommend it to everyone
Nice plot and a good storyline, you are a great story teller, nice keep up the good work. [img=recommend]
This story is Overall so great! I'm in love with all the characters and I hope the author will give us a mass update QoQ
I want to start by expressing my appreciation for your incredible novel. The way you crafted the beginning of the story left a lasting impact on me, and I found myself immediately drawn into the world you created. Your writing style is captivating and your creative imagination is truly impressive. The characters you've introduced are intriguing and I am eager to see how their stories unfold. Your attention to detail in describing their emotions, motivations, and interactions is remarkable, and it has made me deeply invested in their journeys. Good luck.👍
keep it up Author, I really love the novel!! Great job with the characters and story.
The novel shows great potential with an interesting plot and an engaging storytelling style. However, the reading experience may be hindered by certain grammatical errors and sentence structures. We understand that English may not be the author's first language and commend them for persevering despite the language barrier. Nonetheless, it's important to acknowledge that these writing issues could pose challenges for some readers. Therefore, we kindly recommend that the author seek assistance with editing or consider utilizing software that can assist with grammar.
A very good story! I like it so much Author! I will definitely read more to see out it goes.
I love everything about the book, ‘the opening chapter, child birth and how awesome the boy is’. You are really talented and I most say “this novel is wonderfully written”. My favourite character is Kiara*bold woman* Can't wait to know more of Zairo
well it's great how you described the story. Your are a great storyteller. you know how to tell a story. btw tje story is just great. I enjoyed it very much. I would recommend it to everyone
Nice plot and a good storyline, you are a great story teller, nice keep up the good work. [img=recommend]
This story is Overall so great! I'm in love with all the characters and I hope the author will give us a mass update QoQ
I want to start by expressing my appreciation for your incredible novel. The way you crafted the beginning of the story left a lasting impact on me, and I found myself immediately drawn into the world you created. Your writing style is captivating and your creative imagination is truly impressive. The characters you've introduced are intriguing and I am eager to see how their stories unfold. Your attention to detail in describing their emotions, motivations, and interactions is remarkable, and it has made me deeply invested in their journeys. Good luck.👍
keep it up Author, I really love the novel!! Great job with the characters and story.