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Really liking the novel so far, but I am having a hard time imagining some of the characters. I tried to use the discord link. However, it said it was expired, any way you could post a new one?
this is the one of best novel ever hope you create such more amazing novels
A really well writen novel. I'd say one of the best novels on webnovel, Just my opinion tho. The world building is great but could be a little better but who cares🤷🏽♂️ its already so good🤠 Just hope to see anna blake meet jayden soon and sydney. Hope to see 1000 more chapters mate🤣 maybe id tie you to ur chair so u can write all day🤣💀
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Whoever Is Not reading this Novel is missing out!! Keep Going author !!
I liked this story a lot, though i did not liked that he just had s*x with any and every woman.
It's a great story. Nice characters and competent MC. Story progression is neat, nothing bad sticks out, it's all smooth and nothing illogical. --- The only bad thing I can say here: - Many wives = not good I don't mind if he's a playboy that flirts and does the deed and then dips and disappears. The problem is when he likes someone, we get a lot of details during his conquest to conquer her and how he wifes her up. But after that we readers forget her cuz she's now in his collection, so why go in depth into her character? That's a problem. It'll become more of a problem the more wives he gets, it's just adding wives to his collection and adding baggage on top of his problems. It wouldn't have been a problem if he actually makes them his wife but leaves them in their world. It wouldn't be a problem if MC was just trashy and he just uses them then forgets them without making them wives. It becomes a problem when he's constantly trying to juggle between them when they're with him, we don't see their personalities and don't go in depth of their psyche, they just become a chore for the MC at that point. As a reader, I'm tired just reading about he plans his dates with each one. ----- Now, where my gripe lies: Why the heck is he capturing anyone and everyone and turning them into a wife? He can conquer anyone but no need to turn her into a wife! What's the point of layla? She has absolutely nothing to do with him, so why take her along? She's useless and doesn't add anything to the story. Even Sophie is too much, he just had a slight little connection with her, no feelings and certainly no purpose for MC to take care and wife her up. At this point it just feels like a collect em all type of story in terms of harem. The same type of problem every harem story has. Authors don't focus of the story and feelings behind characters. They focus on collecting as many girls for MC as possible within the confines of the story. I see this story heading in a similar direction. If the harem gets too much, even the author wouldn't know how to deal with it. My favorite characters in this story are: MC Anna Emily (cute lil kid) Favorite wives: Alice Sasha All others are just extra with no real need to add them in the story, it would've been fine if they were in their own world.
At the start I had my issues because of some misunderstanding between what's written but it got short out after reading further , guys I have to tell you this novel is really good , it hooks you up pretty fast and you get so character development step by step which is a huge plus point so hight recommended give it a go
I started this at the request of the author and I sat down and binge read everything 2 days lol needless to say I have enjoyed it quite a bit. really looking forward to what the mc gets up to next and his meeting Anna!
novel ini bagus, saya juga punya rekomendasi novel fantasi sihir bahasa Indonesia "Kehidupan Bebas dari Yang Mahakuasa (Indonesia Version)"
amazing story indeed, i was actually looking for a story like this to read...., i give this story 5 stars.... and my 2 power stones that i have😁😁😁💐
A masterpiece from author. This is definitely one of best harem novel out there. Author,the orb's lvl system is wierd, sometimes it doesn't make sense. like mc worked hard with system but stupid Xander already at lvl 300k, then maybe vampire king lvl Billn?.Also bro don't forget to add Amelia in to slave list not harem..
- I don't know about others but personally I find this novel very comfortable to read, especially the fighting scenes which were pretty good. Pacing is also executed well, Not too fast and not too slow. Harem is executed well. Definitely recommend it to Fellow cultured men..
I am writing this before reading the novel ,but one thing I liked (from the comments) is that author is interaction with readers and at least answers their queries.Much appreciative 👏.I will review the story after reading it.
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Really liking the novel so far, but I am having a hard time imagining some of the characters. I tried to use the discord link. However, it said it was expired, any way you could post a new one?
this is the one of best novel ever hope you create such more amazing novels
A really well writen novel. I'd say one of the best novels on webnovel, Just my opinion tho. The world building is great but could be a little better but who cares🤷🏽♂️ its already so good🤠 Just hope to see anna blake meet jayden soon and sydney. Hope to see 1000 more chapters mate🤣 maybe id tie you to ur chair so u can write all day🤣💀
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Whoever Is Not reading this Novel is missing out!! Keep Going author !!
I liked this story a lot, though i did not liked that he just had s*x with any and every woman.
It's a great story. Nice characters and competent MC. Story progression is neat, nothing bad sticks out, it's all smooth and nothing illogical. --- The only bad thing I can say here: - Many wives = not good I don't mind if he's a playboy that flirts and does the deed and then dips and disappears. The problem is when he likes someone, we get a lot of details during his conquest to conquer her and how he wifes her up. But after that we readers forget her cuz she's now in his collection, so why go in depth into her character? That's a problem. It'll become more of a problem the more wives he gets, it's just adding wives to his collection and adding baggage on top of his problems. It wouldn't have been a problem if he actually makes them his wife but leaves them in their world. It wouldn't be a problem if MC was just trashy and he just uses them then forgets them without making them wives. It becomes a problem when he's constantly trying to juggle between them when they're with him, we don't see their personalities and don't go in depth of their psyche, they just become a chore for the MC at that point. As a reader, I'm tired just reading about he plans his dates with each one. ----- Now, where my gripe lies: Why the heck is he capturing anyone and everyone and turning them into a wife? He can conquer anyone but no need to turn her into a wife! What's the point of layla? She has absolutely nothing to do with him, so why take her along? She's useless and doesn't add anything to the story. Even Sophie is too much, he just had a slight little connection with her, no feelings and certainly no purpose for MC to take care and wife her up. At this point it just feels like a collect em all type of story in terms of harem. The same type of problem every harem story has. Authors don't focus of the story and feelings behind characters. They focus on collecting as many girls for MC as possible within the confines of the story. I see this story heading in a similar direction. If the harem gets too much, even the author wouldn't know how to deal with it. My favorite characters in this story are: MC Anna Emily (cute lil kid) Favorite wives: Alice Sasha All others are just extra with no real need to add them in the story, it would've been fine if they were in their own world.
At the start I had my issues because of some misunderstanding between what's written but it got short out after reading further , guys I have to tell you this novel is really good , it hooks you up pretty fast and you get so character development step by step which is a huge plus point so hight recommended give it a go
I started this at the request of the author and I sat down and binge read everything 2 days lol needless to say I have enjoyed it quite a bit. really looking forward to what the mc gets up to next and his meeting Anna!
novel ini bagus, saya juga punya rekomendasi novel fantasi sihir bahasa Indonesia "Kehidupan Bebas dari Yang Mahakuasa (Indonesia Version)"
amazing story indeed, i was actually looking for a story like this to read...., i give this story 5 stars.... and my 2 power stones that i have😁😁😁💐
A masterpiece from author. This is definitely one of best harem novel out there. Author,the orb's lvl system is wierd, sometimes it doesn't make sense. like mc worked hard with system but stupid Xander already at lvl 300k, then maybe vampire king lvl Billn?.Also bro don't forget to add Amelia in to slave list not harem..
- I don't know about others but personally I find this novel very comfortable to read, especially the fighting scenes which were pretty good. Pacing is also executed well, Not too fast and not too slow. Harem is executed well. Definitely recommend it to Fellow cultured men..
I am writing this before reading the novel ,but one thing I liked (from the comments) is that author is interaction with readers and at least answers their queries.Much appreciative 👏.I will review the story after reading it.
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really good novel I hope you don't drop?