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An intriguing story, like I literally can't stop reading [img=update][img=update]. Just keep it coming[img=strong][img=More pls][img=More pls]
This hope for future chapter will not end in band one finger crossed Keep it up bro
It is pretty good with fast paced chapters. The world building is also interesting In general. This has some potential Hope to read more in the future!
To be honest this is pretty good so far. It's can be pretty funny, but it's a tinge bit difficult to read in parts. The development of the main character could be better and the writing fluidity and grammar can be improved just by simple editing. I do enjoy the thought put into the magic system, and the feel of an ero game is kind of there but it kind of incorporates real consequences vs someone just behind a screen able to redo it.
The pacing of the story is a bit fast for me, but since the world building have already been explained from the first chapters I guess it's easy to follow. There are some typos on the writing, and still can be edited so 👍. The plot of the story is interesting, hopes the author keep updating and improving it!
Overall, the story is quite interesting just that I found it is a little difficult to read. I think your writing style can be improve for reader easy to read. The world background and plot development has the potential. Keep it up!
The story is a good read. It just needs a bit of refining and I believe it will be better than it is now. I really like the mc so far, a character drawn from a lot of comic relief.
Don't known much about giving reviews, so am trying. I like the book, but its filled with many grammatical errors. Apart from that its good.
Really good lay out of the story, the writing is a bit wordy, but again it makes up for the story itself. It’s a really good read and I recommend more people to read it :)
The book has lots of potential and really straightforward too, it just needs a bit of smoothening touch to it and everything will be perfect, nevertheless it was a nice read
You did a great work here author but u only need to improve your writing skills because it look so so good if you try your best. Keep it up author
I don't really like reading books like this,but I got hooked on this one, characters and writing is good.Keep up the good work author 🥰🥰
Having gone through the story. I must say your story is good and interesting. All you need is to improve more in your writing. You Character Design and Introduction, your world background and development are lacking some flavour. I know there is room for improvement. So I must say, "keep the nice work up! "
I really don't trust novels where the author uses all his secondary accounts to promote his books. I've logged into all the accounts that qualify this and they are all the author's.
I dont why but the author is keepng long to update The nicel is good anyway and am looking foeward to seeing some improvement
i like everytging so far just try to correct some grammar mistake and everything is good, hope your novel became popular!
The fake reviews.....could have tried to make it seem believable........................................................................................
I have read novels but this is very interesting.It has more room for improvement.Author BaKumi your novel is superior to other novels.There is a great opportunity for you move forward, infact this is a nice novel to read.
Nice book.i like reading novels a lot and I find them very interesting as I get to know fictions ,characters and acts which I think is not happening in this era yet
Nice novel when I read it,I think that i am going to be using my power stone on this one.Author should continue his good work.i recommend It to harem and system lovers
The moment I saw this novel I knew it was a great one.ti be able to accomplish this sort of setting for your second novel is great,keep it up
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I liked the book the moment I saw the synopsis even though there were a lot of glitch staff for me. The novel is a gem book written by a novice author, no insult....
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I don't know what to say about this novel ,not that I am been compell to take something about this book but I don't find any fault or mistake from the book.i hope author keep keeps it up and gives us a surprise
This is actually a review though ! I picked my phone and decided to check Webnovel as i got a free time...and seeing that my book still keeps increasing with collections and ps, I’ve made it a target to write and the happy news is i might start publishing next week... Thank you all..
Nice work author 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
An intriguing story, like I literally can't stop reading [img=update][img=update]. Just keep it coming[img=strong][img=More pls][img=More pls]
This hope for future chapter will not end in band one finger crossed Keep it up bro
It is pretty good with fast paced chapters. The world building is also interesting In general. This has some potential Hope to read more in the future!
To be honest this is pretty good so far. It's can be pretty funny, but it's a tinge bit difficult to read in parts. The development of the main character could be better and the writing fluidity and grammar can be improved just by simple editing. I do enjoy the thought put into the magic system, and the feel of an ero game is kind of there but it kind of incorporates real consequences vs someone just behind a screen able to redo it.
The pacing of the story is a bit fast for me, but since the world building have already been explained from the first chapters I guess it's easy to follow. There are some typos on the writing, and still can be edited so 👍. The plot of the story is interesting, hopes the author keep updating and improving it!
Overall, the story is quite interesting just that I found it is a little difficult to read. I think your writing style can be improve for reader easy to read. The world background and plot development has the potential. Keep it up!
The story is a good read. It just needs a bit of refining and I believe it will be better than it is now. I really like the mc so far, a character drawn from a lot of comic relief.
Don't known much about giving reviews, so am trying. I like the book, but its filled with many grammatical errors. Apart from that its good.
Really good lay out of the story, the writing is a bit wordy, but again it makes up for the story itself. It’s a really good read and I recommend more people to read it :)
The book has lots of potential and really straightforward too, it just needs a bit of smoothening touch to it and everything will be perfect, nevertheless it was a nice read
You did a great work here author but u only need to improve your writing skills because it look so so good if you try your best. Keep it up author
I don't really like reading books like this,but I got hooked on this one, characters and writing is good.Keep up the good work author 🥰🥰
Having gone through the story. I must say your story is good and interesting. All you need is to improve more in your writing. You Character Design and Introduction, your world background and development are lacking some flavour. I know there is room for improvement. So I must say, "keep the nice work up! "
I really don't trust novels where the author uses all his secondary accounts to promote his books. I've logged into all the accounts that qualify this and they are all the author's.
I dont why but the author is keepng long to update The nicel is good anyway and am looking foeward to seeing some improvement
i like everytging so far just try to correct some grammar mistake and everything is good, hope your novel became popular!
The fake reviews.....could have tried to make it seem believable........................................................................................
I have read novels but this is very interesting.It has more room for improvement.Author BaKumi your novel is superior to other novels.There is a great opportunity for you move forward, infact this is a nice novel to read.
Nice book.i like reading novels a lot and I find them very interesting as I get to know fictions ,characters and acts which I think is not happening in this era yet
Nice novel when I read it,I think that i am going to be using my power stone on this one.Author should continue his good work.i recommend It to harem and system lovers
The moment I saw this novel I knew it was a great one.ti be able to accomplish this sort of setting for your second novel is great,keep it up
Reveal Spoiler I liked the book the moment I saw the synopsis even though there were a lot of glitch staff for me. The novel is a gem book written by a novice author, no insult....
Reveal Spoiler I don't know what to say about this novel ,not that I am been compell to take something about this book but I don't find any fault or mistake from the book.i hope author keep keeps it up and gives us a surprise
This is actually a review though ! I picked my phone and decided to check Webnovel as i got a free time...and seeing that my book still keeps increasing with collections and ps, I’ve made it a target to write and the happy news is i might start publishing next week... Thank you all..