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Write a reviewIf you can put up with the main character making himself weak in fights that could get him killed. If you can put up with him making himself weak in front of people just to somehow manipulate them, you can get over him being stupid, I mean, I guess it's a good novel for you. But it just isn't for me.
Me encanta la historia no encuentro ningΓΊn fanfiction de este anime hasta ahora y lo encuentro muy entretenido y bien desarrollado ...................................
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Everything is at its best. can't complain about anything, its fun to read. Greatly Recommendedπ€ππ
finally a unique fanfic. I'm getting bored of all the generic stuff so this is very refreshing. the story is well developed and I can wait for more chapters. I'm very excited for how the school arc will be done. I hope it's as good as it has been till now. Keep up the good work π
You have good ideas and you handle the interactions between the characters well, but you fail to implement all the clichΓ©s that everyone copy and paste, which just ruins the world you chose.
Well, erase the god of the beginning, the system, who abandons his grandparents at 11, the world already offers powers op use them, watch some romance tutorials and your story would easily be one of the best.
complete nonsense trash gods, stupid system and various script holes. The story has potential but it needs to be polished more. A rewrite when the story is done would be nice
I like the story ....................................................................................................................................
Author has a good idea for a start but does not have a comprehensive understanding of the world he is building on and the fact a system is implemented in such an easy world tells me that this is more of a wishfulfilment story than is a good quality What if story. If you're okay with random, unnecessary, pointless power-ups being thrown in. Then go for a read, just be warned
Love it. Keep it up. .................................................................................................................................. ...................
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Why not? Why don't I, as an author, blatantly leave a 5-star review on my novel? Also, he author is the most beautiful person in the world hahaha
This is the first ff I've seen here on Kenja no Mago. Spoiler But it would've been a lot better if he wasn't protagonist's brother. Then later, he left them either way. I expected the story where mc would roam around the world alone till till he was 15 and meet the characters and 'know that he was in Kenja no Mago.' Overall, not a bad story.
I only encouraged myself to put my comment , because of those 1 star reviews I read(it was the most stupid and silly thing xD , I just see you cry for something that if you want you can read the original and stop crying for not being equal to the original xD ) I'm not going to say that the story is perfect, I have read worse and now with time they are better at writing stories, and I know that writing something is not easy, but if you approach to read a fanfic, you will realize that there are authors who write the same as the original just changing something and putting other things for their main character and on the other hand there are other authors who like to change and not follow the same and give it their special touch. (and I applaud it, because what sense does it make to read something that you already know is going to happen, and for the same reason the novels of antagonists that reincarnate or travel to the past are famous, because they like to see something different not something that you can already predict, I can continue criticizing those who put 1 star for nonsense), but it would be a testament xD. - and I can only say cheer up author, I hope you finish it and don't leave it like many authors.
This is now my favorite novel. Everybody assumes the mc to have this knowledge and it creates less character development. Author I applaud you
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I wanted to denounce and take down this fanfic just for breaking the fourth wall that was totally unnecessary in the first chapter. Well, I'll leave the fanfic, the author jokes too much and writes literally anything. Someone without a minimum of seriousness will not write something good of their own free will.
not worth it guys, author dont understand OP, he thinks its like Saitama BS... clearly writer here have amateur knowledge to OP MC.... what a pathetic fanfic... need to be rewritten
this is just a question will there be any yuri in this not a fan, just giving you 5* for now since couldn't haven't read it yet and be unfair π
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If you can put up with the main character making himself weak in fights that could get him killed. If you can put up with him making himself weak in front of people just to somehow manipulate them, you can get over him being stupid, I mean, I guess it's a good novel for you. But it just isn't for me.
Me encanta la historia no encuentro ningΓΊn fanfiction de este anime hasta ahora y lo encuentro muy entretenido y bien desarrollado ...................................
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Everything is at its best. can't complain about anything, its fun to read. Greatly Recommendedπ€ππ
finally a unique fanfic. I'm getting bored of all the generic stuff so this is very refreshing. the story is well developed and I can wait for more chapters. I'm very excited for how the school arc will be done. I hope it's as good as it has been till now. Keep up the good work π
You have good ideas and you handle the interactions between the characters well, but you fail to implement all the clichΓ©s that everyone copy and paste, which just ruins the world you chose.
Well, erase the god of the beginning, the system, who abandons his grandparents at 11, the world already offers powers op use them, watch some romance tutorials and your story would easily be one of the best.
complete nonsense trash gods, stupid system and various script holes. The story has potential but it needs to be polished more. A rewrite when the story is done would be nice
I like the story ....................................................................................................................................
Author has a good idea for a start but does not have a comprehensive understanding of the world he is building on and the fact a system is implemented in such an easy world tells me that this is more of a wishfulfilment story than is a good quality What if story. If you're okay with random, unnecessary, pointless power-ups being thrown in. Then go for a read, just be warned
Love it. Keep it up. .................................................................................................................................. ...................
La verdad me gustΓ³ la Recomiendo mucho VvvvvvΓ±nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnbnbbjdkdkkdkfkgkkgkgkgkgkgjgkhjdbdndnnfnfndnbdndnennenenenneeklspsposlsllslsosoeofkkrmrmrmrmlelflfllrlrlrltltltm.gmt
Why not? Why don't I, as an author, blatantly leave a 5-star review on my novel? Also, he author is the most beautiful person in the world hahaha
This is the first ff I've seen here on Kenja no Mago. Spoiler But it would've been a lot better if he wasn't protagonist's brother. Then later, he left them either way. I expected the story where mc would roam around the world alone till till he was 15 and meet the characters and 'know that he was in Kenja no Mago.' Overall, not a bad story.
I only encouraged myself to put my comment , because of those 1 star reviews I read(it was the most stupid and silly thing xD , I just see you cry for something that if you want you can read the original and stop crying for not being equal to the original xD ) I'm not going to say that the story is perfect, I have read worse and now with time they are better at writing stories, and I know that writing something is not easy, but if you approach to read a fanfic, you will realize that there are authors who write the same as the original just changing something and putting other things for their main character and on the other hand there are other authors who like to change and not follow the same and give it their special touch. (and I applaud it, because what sense does it make to read something that you already know is going to happen, and for the same reason the novels of antagonists that reincarnate or travel to the past are famous, because they like to see something different not something that you can already predict, I can continue criticizing those who put 1 star for nonsense), but it would be a testament xD. - and I can only say cheer up author, I hope you finish it and don't leave it like many authors.
This is now my favorite novel. Everybody assumes the mc to have this knowledge and it creates less character development. Author I applaud you
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I wanted to denounce and take down this fanfic just for breaking the fourth wall that was totally unnecessary in the first chapter. Well, I'll leave the fanfic, the author jokes too much and writes literally anything. Someone without a minimum of seriousness will not write something good of their own free will.
not worth it guys, author dont understand OP, he thinks its like Saitama BS... clearly writer here have amateur knowledge to OP MC.... what a pathetic fanfic... need to be rewritten
this is just a question will there be any yuri in this not a fan, just giving you 5* for now since couldn't haven't read it yet and be unfair π
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use this spell to protect you before every chapter