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please I'm begging you, please pick this up again. I really loved this one and it was one of my favorites, I can't take it being left like this
Honest reviews are here.. I only read up to Ch100, and after that, I decided to stop reading this novel.. This novel is about MC, who keeps reincarnated countless times after he learns "Life equation" on earth.. MC is reincarnated as goblin, horse, and so on until one day, he reincarnated as fetus who in the progress coming out from his mother ehm.. MC got the memories and knowledge of his past life, but no skill is brought back into this life.. MC got a system to keep him in check.. No quest or mission is given, no communication with the system, and no OP cheat.. You will see the journey of the "baby MC" growth progress.. From the days he is born until he grows older.. By older, I mean 6 years old.. Yes, at Ch.100, MC is still 6 years old kid.. And as MC has going thru many reincarnated cycles, he is not acting as a child at all.. Just by the way MC speaks (rude and ill-mannered) and action (manipulative his own family).. The author ruins the image of innocent kids.. In this novel, the author tries to make MC strong but not overpowered.. You will see how many times MC is in life and death situation at a toddler or kid age.. Instead of letting MC have a peaceful growth phase and learning arc at a young age, the author skipped that and threw MC into crisis situations many times.. There are many times you would see that the author keeps changing the character or outline of the story.. For example, you think MC is just a "curious" individual type of person, but then later, MC seems like "psychopath" and even further later on, MC changed into "willing to do anything" for his family.. There are also other cases, like when you read at the beginning, you will feel that MC has a weak father, but later, his seem weak father is actually strong.. The storyline also changes, like at first, MC is at his village with his family, but later, MC suddenly joins Evil Organisation without mentioning his city/village or his family.. I feel like I am reading a different novel.. The author also uses new terms for power levels like Oryx, Garnett, Topaz, Amethyst, Sapphire, Emerald, Ruby, and Diamond.. This is my first time that I heard this type of magic power level.. Even I'm not sure if I list it right.. There are also a character that you thought might become his rival or master (important characters for this novel), but they died later on. So, this novel is unpredictable and keeps changing the pace of the storyline and character from a wisp of thought of the author..
I read this book without expecting much boy was I pleasantly surprised. Word of warning though, if you don't like borderline psycho MCs this may not be for you. Mc is smart. Like infi IQ smart. And I like that quality in my main character. 🥰Romance so far in the story is off the table. Description and explanation on the power system is detailed but not too detailed that it's basically just junk words to increase word count. Basically I like how the author has written it. TLDR: smart mc, great story, read it.
Main character transmigrated in a world of Magic after causing genocide on earth due to his inability to find a way to fix his own mess, now this mf is in a 1 year old child's body and is already capable enough to kill an adult warrior and a pathetic loser of an adult mage without dying from mana exhaustion, everything that happened was extremely illogical and full of plot holes. DO NOT READ THIS WORTHLESS NOVEL UNLESS YOU CAN BEAR THE READ.
I don’t really know what to put here. But I like the story! 👍 At first, I wasn’t really sure from the first chapters but if you start reading, I started to like it more and more
Really good novel, would like it if author isnt so irregular with updates. Aside from that it could easily make top 10 if effort is put in
overall this is an excellent story. characters are well written and interesting. the world is decently fleshed out but could still use some work. though I may not be the best judge of that because Tolkien set my standards of world building.
You can read upto 60 chapters, them it's just unpalatable, unless you are beginner to this genre/ kid Well the story is basically, there was one a mad scientist on earth who even used his Forster parents for his research and killing them in a process, later caused massi e casualties in his search for knowledge and finally found the immortality secret, but it backfired in the common mass as immortality is not a common reason you can pickup on the roadside and be given to everyone you deem it, this lead to the district of human civilization, so depressed by it, he killed himself, and got reincarnated in a magical world. Here he became a family living protagonist with cheats and strong plot armors and potential anastagonists appearing in a stepwise manner and when the bmc will suddenly evolve like goku, becoming stronger and overcoming the adversary, rinse and repeat MC shows abnormal behavior from the start and nobody seems to care. I mean an adult losing to a 5 year old kid is strange by itself and should arouse suspicion
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once again someone gave the author this template for a novel but he decided to change stuff part way through, mc pulls a 180 and his personality shifts from "ruthlessly pursues his goals despite risks or damage done to the world" into a "oh no I bettew fake my affinity test or it might be scawey 🥺" for no given reasons other than I guess it's easier to write the same novel as everyone else since you can copy paste their story and just change the names
I have to say the novel was not that bad not that good Yes it was a nice read It has it's fair share of problems Like MC gets emotional at random times And later in the story when he is super OP he becomes to aloof and cold like he killed a guard at the space gate just because he was a greedy guard Plus the story looses some of his charms It feels he uses more brawn the brain in the latest chapters Like after the time skip he Become to cold we don't get to see what he is thinking so ya its Drop in quality Plus random weird events happen to many times And I Dont get why is he in the school like he is a known terrorist How he can just kill some guards and kick a professor and one one cares And fights with the tree girl and makes her a slave and they give him and slap on the wrist Many things just Does not make sense And there is a gojo wanna be to
If you’ve read Supreme Magus you can skip the first 15 chapters. This book reminds me of Warlock of the Magus World if the author didn’t know how to write. The sheer audacity is there but the author has no handles on interactions, plot, foreshadowing, and intelligence. Writing fluctuates every chapter it feels like a different author is taking charge of the story. Character inconsistencies are at large and author narration doesn’t make sense. He establishes a rule then break it the next chapter. (Spoiler: A woman believes she mades him her slave, then after a day she sends forty assassins to kill him. Why would she do that to someone she has full control of? One second a guys an entire army to prevent anyone from knowing his name then next chapter the guy tells everyone and her mother his full identity, skillset, blessings and whatever. Happened two times already and has caused him more problems than he could handle. ) There’s no proper baseline of how things worked so instead of being immersed in the story you are threwn recklessly around it. Instead of being properly immersed in the world I feel like reading through a blurred window. If I didn’t get reminded of how the author killed billions of people and ruled the earth every chapter I probably wouldnt have known because of the character acts. The main character wouldnt care about the character as long as their on screen but as soon as they have a tiny interaction with mc he would rather share all his secrets to sacrifice for the character.
Good story, some minor grammatical errors. I stopped at 56 because a core development moment leads the story in a direction I don’t like and while I cannot fathom why the author takes the direction that they do, I don’t think it detracts from the story but it is not my cup of tea so I stop here.
Has to be one of if not the best novel I've read, might be a bit of a stretch but everything is so good I can't wait for more
I am 168 chapters in and thoroughly enjoying this book. I even paid for the highest privilege tier recently. I can't wait to see where this book goes.
It's pretty good. If you like magic and world-building, this is the novel for you. So, have my money author :)[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
pretty decent at the start but like it's not my piece of pie .Seth was a man who didn't care about anyone even his family in his previous life having even experimented on them but it is now becoming something I can't just stomach he has been brainwashed with all this family drama of his new life . If you like it you can stomach it but it's gotten out of hand story doesn't seem controlled like it was before.
good concept. lost a clear direction made it skip from one thing to another without any warning we went from a simple suicide mission to and assasisination to a mind control plot with in 10 chapters I Have nothing against that sequence but it happened too fast
Silas, the graceless. As he ascends the stairs leading to his treacherous goals, the soles of his feet leave a mark of divinity—his history—the mundane creatures, both Humans and beasts, bear witness to his adventures as he climbs to his own galaxy, until he holds what his heart most desire. Even the blind, even the deaf, even the criplled, stand up to see, to hear, his shivering steps. The dead live once again, not to miss the spectacle. The forgotten rises, to trade their souls to witness his glory. The lost find their way, the bloody light illuminated by him leading them their way. And at last, Silas, the graceless, shines bright in the darkness that is above, hanging like a bloody moon above the agape audience. His graceless self, leaving grace for the first time, and the last.
Développement des personnage ✓ Histoire ✓ Rebondissements parfait ✓ J'ai hâte de voir la catégorie construction royaume. De voir le développement des différents runes. Des artefacts, aux tableaux. L'auteur à parler d'aura j'ai hâte de voir un développement sur plusieurs aura. J'ai beaucoup aimé le développement de l'intention de tuer. J'espère voir qu'il sera fort au maniement des armes. J'ai beaucoup aimé le faîte qu'il y a différentes capacités qui sont débloqués lors de l'augmentation du rang du noyau de mana. J'en suis au chapitre 133, il y a une crise via sa famille. Haha j'aimerais qu'il fasse de la folie en prenant otage le prince pour l'échanger contre sa famille. Mais ça risque d'être difficile.. J'adore le faîte qu'il est encore jeune et qu'il a 7 ans. J'aimerais aussi qu'il crée une nouvelle ville, et qu'il crée des artefacts moderne. J'ai hâte de voir le développement sur le mana externe : le tolki. J'espère qu'il y aura des niveaux a propos des maniment des armes. J'ai adoré le faîte qu'il y ai des niveaux sur les armures. J'espère qu'il y en aura d'autre niveau sur d'autres artefacts. Je suis pas enthousiaste sur les bloodlins mais c'est pas dérangeant car il en a pas beaucoup pour l'instant mais c'est assez spécial. Ça fait partie de l'intrigue sur l'équation de la vie ^^ J'espère qu'il va crée une bibliothèque, et qu'il prendra architecte et vie en esclave. Si il fait partie de la noblesse j'aimerais le voir avec une certaine aura impériale et une étiquette parfaite. J'ai hâte vu la photo de couverture ahah. Hâte aussi sur les différents races et leurs systèmes magiques et des runes. J'aimerais qu'il approfondisse le système magique des bêtes. Bref i love Book 👍❤️ [Trad Fr > En] Thx author !
final review upto chapter 100... story is average with some flaw and some good point.. cons:- 1)- mc constantly getting into life and death situation. form age 1.5 he is fighting life and death situation as trouble always come to him and boom plot armor survie.. he lives in no name town with all the family member too strong and care for him but still he always end up life and death situation and somehow survive cause he just learned some fking spell few days ago.. 2) the way he use and manipulate his sweet and caring family is very disgusting. he didn't even make sure to make his sister happy who litraly died protecting him. and yeah people are trash family is not smart enough blalbalba ..this all the thing that mc thinks.. but if you see mc from unbiased point he would seem disgusting as a family member his sister end up distancing herself from everyone due to mc mistake and all mc did was played victim card while his sister end up taking blames for mc mistake.. 3) fight is boring and long.. every fight is boring and long the reason is - mc 2 paragraph of internal monoloug after every villains cliche acting or dialouge.. 4) mc hides everything from his family for no reason. and no he doesn't hides his power from rest of the world .. he just lie to his family even if he doesn't need to.... well it's not about trust issue as everyone already know how poerful he is so what is the point of changing the source of his power... but it's okey ... first 3 point is what I trully don't like about this story. pros:- nice story , smart mc , good power system , good grammar .
This novel is a bit to much like Supreme magus for me. There is a lot of similarities beetwen the two novels. There is also some difference (i'm not saying its a copy paste). But the mc having an abomination side just like Lith was a huge disapointement for me.
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Never written any reviews but belive me thid is a hidden gem đź’Ž the synops is great and the stor is even better so just read it [img=update][img=update]
(4 2 3 3 2)/5=2.8This story has a decided plot. it's not a copy paste of the reincarnation genre so there is that.Most reviews here call this story a gem or gold.But it has its flaws. what's the smartest in one world/pond became the smartest in another for now or until arrogance and confident certainty are met with a reality check. other characters somehow are automatically less intelligent or overestimate themselves too much. non mc characters who've trained themselves for this world for a while somehow train less than a younger MC who even trains more effectively than they do. and that's considering they have a knack for physical fighting and he doesn't. this I find to be too mc biased. I admit the grammar is pretty much flawless. i say pretty much because I'm not perfect so there may be mistakes i would not notice.we met characters who showed the mc that his smarts and cheat will not always surpass years of experience and training. this world was called medieval, then dismissed as medieval and magical, and religious. that works.I'll be dipping out as I am not too interested in main characters who alienate a new family who actually does care for them. The baby manipulating the parents was expected, but taken a little further than is the norm from what i have read. It basically tipped the balance that makes the manipulation interesting, funny, and cute. To, everything is nothing but a means to an end. as in nothing mixed with what would otherwise be normal pursuing goals
A gem! just don't add any romance or harem and we are all good (seriously why does everyone add those things and the r-cough cough thing!?) literally look at 'Let me game in peace' or... s*** I can't remember anything else. my point is, you don't have to add those things, just add a bit of moments here or there as customer service
I love this novel, and I'm certain that it's going to be one of the best on this app. Let me break it down. Writing quality: 5/5 The writing quality is spectacular. It has good grammar (surprising for a webnovel novel), great word play that makes sentences flow smoothly, and even better descriptions (if the synopsis doesn't show you that already). The fight scenes are incredibly done too. I don't know how the author did it, but some fights feel like they come to life, while others have been written in a way that allows you to put yourself in the place of the mc. Story Development: 5/5 The pacing is amazing! The author doesn't tell you more than you need to know. Its pacing is incredible especially for a reincarnation story, since most other stories either cut to the mc being 14+ years old or take far too long describing the younger years of the mc. The author has somehow found a cozy middle area where it isn't too slow to the point you get bored, and isn't too fast to the point where the author is skipping many things that should be explained. Character Designs: 5/5 The characters not only feel alive, they also feel real. The interactions between the MC's parents feel real. The emotions and reactions feel real. The characters are also very likable. Silas (the mc) has an older sister, but unlike many of the novels on here, she isn't annoying. she's real, and extremely likable at that. The father is kind of goofy but can be serious, the mother is strict but she makes mistakes of her own and is called out for it. The grandmother is a little bit of a D to everyone as she always makes random funny but rude comments (doesn't care about etiquette), but she's been shown to care for her grandchildren. The mc himself is flawed. he isn't social but he tries. He regrets things about his past, but he's still ruthless and doesn't regret many of the things we would have considered "bad". he has his own moral compass, and I love that about him. Updating Stability: 5/5 7 times a week, long chapters. Something always happens in each chapter, making them feel unique and worth the read. World Background: 5/5 The world feels large. the magic system is big, but not complete. The main character is a scientist, so I can only assume that in the future he will add new things to the magic system and make new discoveries. He even mentions that the magic system is "too limiting" and that he will have to change it. He also mentions that he will use mana for technological advancements he was unable to complete in his past life, and since this novel had kingdom building as one of the tags, you can see in what direction this might go. On the discord server, the author has also stated that there is much more about the world that we still don't know, so I'm waiting for that but I'm certain it will be amazing. 5/5 overall, great novel so far. i can only hope for its success so more people can witness it.
What happened to the novel?? Did the writer give up on it?? Why are there no more updates?
please I'm begging you, please pick this up again. I really loved this one and it was one of my favorites, I can't take it being left like this
Honest reviews are here.. I only read up to Ch100, and after that, I decided to stop reading this novel.. This novel is about MC, who keeps reincarnated countless times after he learns "Life equation" on earth.. MC is reincarnated as goblin, horse, and so on until one day, he reincarnated as fetus who in the progress coming out from his mother ehm.. MC got the memories and knowledge of his past life, but no skill is brought back into this life.. MC got a system to keep him in check.. No quest or mission is given, no communication with the system, and no OP cheat.. You will see the journey of the "baby MC" growth progress.. From the days he is born until he grows older.. By older, I mean 6 years old.. Yes, at Ch.100, MC is still 6 years old kid.. And as MC has going thru many reincarnated cycles, he is not acting as a child at all.. Just by the way MC speaks (rude and ill-mannered) and action (manipulative his own family).. The author ruins the image of innocent kids.. In this novel, the author tries to make MC strong but not overpowered.. You will see how many times MC is in life and death situation at a toddler or kid age.. Instead of letting MC have a peaceful growth phase and learning arc at a young age, the author skipped that and threw MC into crisis situations many times.. There are many times you would see that the author keeps changing the character or outline of the story.. For example, you think MC is just a "curious" individual type of person, but then later, MC seems like "psychopath" and even further later on, MC changed into "willing to do anything" for his family.. There are also other cases, like when you read at the beginning, you will feel that MC has a weak father, but later, his seem weak father is actually strong.. The storyline also changes, like at first, MC is at his village with his family, but later, MC suddenly joins Evil Organisation without mentioning his city/village or his family.. I feel like I am reading a different novel.. The author also uses new terms for power levels like Oryx, Garnett, Topaz, Amethyst, Sapphire, Emerald, Ruby, and Diamond.. This is my first time that I heard this type of magic power level.. Even I'm not sure if I list it right.. There are also a character that you thought might become his rival or master (important characters for this novel), but they died later on. So, this novel is unpredictable and keeps changing the pace of the storyline and character from a wisp of thought of the author..
I read this book without expecting much boy was I pleasantly surprised. Word of warning though, if you don't like borderline psycho MCs this may not be for you. Mc is smart. Like infi IQ smart. And I like that quality in my main character. 🥰Romance so far in the story is off the table. Description and explanation on the power system is detailed but not too detailed that it's basically just junk words to increase word count. Basically I like how the author has written it. TLDR: smart mc, great story, read it.
Main character transmigrated in a world of Magic after causing genocide on earth due to his inability to find a way to fix his own mess, now this mf is in a 1 year old child's body and is already capable enough to kill an adult warrior and a pathetic loser of an adult mage without dying from mana exhaustion, everything that happened was extremely illogical and full of plot holes. DO NOT READ THIS WORTHLESS NOVEL UNLESS YOU CAN BEAR THE READ.
I don’t really know what to put here. But I like the story! 👍 At first, I wasn’t really sure from the first chapters but if you start reading, I started to like it more and more
Really good novel, would like it if author isnt so irregular with updates. Aside from that it could easily make top 10 if effort is put in
overall this is an excellent story. characters are well written and interesting. the world is decently fleshed out but could still use some work. though I may not be the best judge of that because Tolkien set my standards of world building.
You can read upto 60 chapters, them it's just unpalatable, unless you are beginner to this genre/ kid Well the story is basically, there was one a mad scientist on earth who even used his Forster parents for his research and killing them in a process, later caused massi e casualties in his search for knowledge and finally found the immortality secret, but it backfired in the common mass as immortality is not a common reason you can pickup on the roadside and be given to everyone you deem it, this lead to the district of human civilization, so depressed by it, he killed himself, and got reincarnated in a magical world. Here he became a family living protagonist with cheats and strong plot armors and potential anastagonists appearing in a stepwise manner and when the bmc will suddenly evolve like goku, becoming stronger and overcoming the adversary, rinse and repeat MC shows abnormal behavior from the start and nobody seems to care. I mean an adult losing to a 5 year old kid is strange by itself and should arouse suspicion
Reveal Spoiler once again someone gave the author this template for a novel but he decided to change stuff part way through, mc pulls a 180 and his personality shifts from "ruthlessly pursues his goals despite risks or damage done to the world" into a "oh no I bettew fake my affinity test or it might be scawey 🥺" for no given reasons other than I guess it's easier to write the same novel as everyone else since you can copy paste their story and just change the names
I have to say the novel was not that bad not that good Yes it was a nice read It has it's fair share of problems Like MC gets emotional at random times And later in the story when he is super OP he becomes to aloof and cold like he killed a guard at the space gate just because he was a greedy guard Plus the story looses some of his charms It feels he uses more brawn the brain in the latest chapters Like after the time skip he Become to cold we don't get to see what he is thinking so ya its Drop in quality Plus random weird events happen to many times And I Dont get why is he in the school like he is a known terrorist How he can just kill some guards and kick a professor and one one cares And fights with the tree girl and makes her a slave and they give him and slap on the wrist Many things just Does not make sense And there is a gojo wanna be to
If you’ve read Supreme Magus you can skip the first 15 chapters. This book reminds me of Warlock of the Magus World if the author didn’t know how to write. The sheer audacity is there but the author has no handles on interactions, plot, foreshadowing, and intelligence. Writing fluctuates every chapter it feels like a different author is taking charge of the story. Character inconsistencies are at large and author narration doesn’t make sense. He establishes a rule then break it the next chapter. (Spoiler: A woman believes she mades him her slave, then after a day she sends forty assassins to kill him. Why would she do that to someone she has full control of? One second a guys an entire army to prevent anyone from knowing his name then next chapter the guy tells everyone and her mother his full identity, skillset, blessings and whatever. Happened two times already and has caused him more problems than he could handle. ) There’s no proper baseline of how things worked so instead of being immersed in the story you are threwn recklessly around it. Instead of being properly immersed in the world I feel like reading through a blurred window. If I didn’t get reminded of how the author killed billions of people and ruled the earth every chapter I probably wouldnt have known because of the character acts. The main character wouldnt care about the character as long as their on screen but as soon as they have a tiny interaction with mc he would rather share all his secrets to sacrifice for the character.
Good story, some minor grammatical errors. I stopped at 56 because a core development moment leads the story in a direction I don’t like and while I cannot fathom why the author takes the direction that they do, I don’t think it detracts from the story but it is not my cup of tea so I stop here.
Has to be one of if not the best novel I've read, might be a bit of a stretch but everything is so good I can't wait for more
I am 168 chapters in and thoroughly enjoying this book. I even paid for the highest privilege tier recently. I can't wait to see where this book goes.
It's pretty good. If you like magic and world-building, this is the novel for you. So, have my money author :)[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
pretty decent at the start but like it's not my piece of pie .Seth was a man who didn't care about anyone even his family in his previous life having even experimented on them but it is now becoming something I can't just stomach he has been brainwashed with all this family drama of his new life . If you like it you can stomach it but it's gotten out of hand story doesn't seem controlled like it was before.
good concept. lost a clear direction made it skip from one thing to another without any warning we went from a simple suicide mission to and assasisination to a mind control plot with in 10 chapters I Have nothing against that sequence but it happened too fast
Silas, the graceless. As he ascends the stairs leading to his treacherous goals, the soles of his feet leave a mark of divinity—his history—the mundane creatures, both Humans and beasts, bear witness to his adventures as he climbs to his own galaxy, until he holds what his heart most desire. Even the blind, even the deaf, even the criplled, stand up to see, to hear, his shivering steps. The dead live once again, not to miss the spectacle. The forgotten rises, to trade their souls to witness his glory. The lost find their way, the bloody light illuminated by him leading them their way. And at last, Silas, the graceless, shines bright in the darkness that is above, hanging like a bloody moon above the agape audience. His graceless self, leaving grace for the first time, and the last.
Développement des personnage ✓ Histoire ✓ Rebondissements parfait ✓ J'ai hâte de voir la catégorie construction royaume. De voir le développement des différents runes. Des artefacts, aux tableaux. L'auteur à parler d'aura j'ai hâte de voir un développement sur plusieurs aura. J'ai beaucoup aimé le développement de l'intention de tuer. J'espère voir qu'il sera fort au maniement des armes. J'ai beaucoup aimé le faîte qu'il y a différentes capacités qui sont débloqués lors de l'augmentation du rang du noyau de mana. J'en suis au chapitre 133, il y a une crise via sa famille. Haha j'aimerais qu'il fasse de la folie en prenant otage le prince pour l'échanger contre sa famille. Mais ça risque d'être difficile.. J'adore le faîte qu'il est encore jeune et qu'il a 7 ans. J'aimerais aussi qu'il crée une nouvelle ville, et qu'il crée des artefacts moderne. J'ai hâte de voir le développement sur le mana externe : le tolki. J'espère qu'il y aura des niveaux a propos des maniment des armes. J'ai adoré le faîte qu'il y ai des niveaux sur les armures. J'espère qu'il y en aura d'autre niveau sur d'autres artefacts. Je suis pas enthousiaste sur les bloodlins mais c'est pas dérangeant car il en a pas beaucoup pour l'instant mais c'est assez spécial. Ça fait partie de l'intrigue sur l'équation de la vie ^^ J'espère qu'il va crée une bibliothèque, et qu'il prendra architecte et vie en esclave. Si il fait partie de la noblesse j'aimerais le voir avec une certaine aura impériale et une étiquette parfaite. J'ai hâte vu la photo de couverture ahah. Hâte aussi sur les différents races et leurs systèmes magiques et des runes. J'aimerais qu'il approfondisse le système magique des bêtes. Bref i love Book 👍❤️ [Trad Fr > En] Thx author !
final review upto chapter 100... story is average with some flaw and some good point.. cons:- 1)- mc constantly getting into life and death situation. form age 1.5 he is fighting life and death situation as trouble always come to him and boom plot armor survie.. he lives in no name town with all the family member too strong and care for him but still he always end up life and death situation and somehow survive cause he just learned some fking spell few days ago.. 2) the way he use and manipulate his sweet and caring family is very disgusting. he didn't even make sure to make his sister happy who litraly died protecting him. and yeah people are trash family is not smart enough blalbalba ..this all the thing that mc thinks.. but if you see mc from unbiased point he would seem disgusting as a family member his sister end up distancing herself from everyone due to mc mistake and all mc did was played victim card while his sister end up taking blames for mc mistake.. 3) fight is boring and long.. every fight is boring and long the reason is - mc 2 paragraph of internal monoloug after every villains cliche acting or dialouge.. 4) mc hides everything from his family for no reason. and no he doesn't hides his power from rest of the world .. he just lie to his family even if he doesn't need to.... well it's not about trust issue as everyone already know how poerful he is so what is the point of changing the source of his power... but it's okey ... first 3 point is what I trully don't like about this story. pros:- nice story , smart mc , good power system , good grammar .
This novel is a bit to much like Supreme magus for me. There is a lot of similarities beetwen the two novels. There is also some difference (i'm not saying its a copy paste). But the mc having an abomination side just like Lith was a huge disapointement for me.
Reveal Spoiler Never written any reviews but belive me thid is a hidden gem đź’Ž the synops is great and the stor is even better so just read it [img=update][img=update]
(4 2 3 3 2)/5=2.8This story has a decided plot. it's not a copy paste of the reincarnation genre so there is that.Most reviews here call this story a gem or gold.But it has its flaws. what's the smartest in one world/pond became the smartest in another for now or until arrogance and confident certainty are met with a reality check. other characters somehow are automatically less intelligent or overestimate themselves too much. non mc characters who've trained themselves for this world for a while somehow train less than a younger MC who even trains more effectively than they do. and that's considering they have a knack for physical fighting and he doesn't. this I find to be too mc biased. I admit the grammar is pretty much flawless. i say pretty much because I'm not perfect so there may be mistakes i would not notice.we met characters who showed the mc that his smarts and cheat will not always surpass years of experience and training. this world was called medieval, then dismissed as medieval and magical, and religious. that works.I'll be dipping out as I am not too interested in main characters who alienate a new family who actually does care for them. The baby manipulating the parents was expected, but taken a little further than is the norm from what i have read. It basically tipped the balance that makes the manipulation interesting, funny, and cute. To, everything is nothing but a means to an end. as in nothing mixed with what would otherwise be normal pursuing goals
A gem! just don't add any romance or harem and we are all good (seriously why does everyone add those things and the r-cough cough thing!?) literally look at 'Let me game in peace' or... s*** I can't remember anything else. my point is, you don't have to add those things, just add a bit of moments here or there as customer service
I love this novel, and I'm certain that it's going to be one of the best on this app. Let me break it down. Writing quality: 5/5 The writing quality is spectacular. It has good grammar (surprising for a webnovel novel), great word play that makes sentences flow smoothly, and even better descriptions (if the synopsis doesn't show you that already). The fight scenes are incredibly done too. I don't know how the author did it, but some fights feel like they come to life, while others have been written in a way that allows you to put yourself in the place of the mc. Story Development: 5/5 The pacing is amazing! The author doesn't tell you more than you need to know. Its pacing is incredible especially for a reincarnation story, since most other stories either cut to the mc being 14+ years old or take far too long describing the younger years of the mc. The author has somehow found a cozy middle area where it isn't too slow to the point you get bored, and isn't too fast to the point where the author is skipping many things that should be explained. Character Designs: 5/5 The characters not only feel alive, they also feel real. The interactions between the MC's parents feel real. The emotions and reactions feel real. The characters are also very likable. Silas (the mc) has an older sister, but unlike many of the novels on here, she isn't annoying. she's real, and extremely likable at that. The father is kind of goofy but can be serious, the mother is strict but she makes mistakes of her own and is called out for it. The grandmother is a little bit of a D to everyone as she always makes random funny but rude comments (doesn't care about etiquette), but she's been shown to care for her grandchildren. The mc himself is flawed. he isn't social but he tries. He regrets things about his past, but he's still ruthless and doesn't regret many of the things we would have considered "bad". he has his own moral compass, and I love that about him. Updating Stability: 5/5 7 times a week, long chapters. Something always happens in each chapter, making them feel unique and worth the read. World Background: 5/5 The world feels large. the magic system is big, but not complete. The main character is a scientist, so I can only assume that in the future he will add new things to the magic system and make new discoveries. He even mentions that the magic system is "too limiting" and that he will have to change it. He also mentions that he will use mana for technological advancements he was unable to complete in his past life, and since this novel had kingdom building as one of the tags, you can see in what direction this might go. On the discord server, the author has also stated that there is much more about the world that we still don't know, so I'm waiting for that but I'm certain it will be amazing. 5/5 overall, great novel so far. i can only hope for its success so more people can witness it.