Reviews of Secrets Unveiled: The Love Story of Lucien and Vivienne by Abysalyounglord - Webnovel

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Reveries_

it was very nice with everything.. specially your writing quality😍. I love it waiting for next chapter 💜💜

1yr
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Abysalyounglord

Hi, this is the author. Thank you for taking the time to read my novel. This is my second novel, and I hope that this time, I won't fall short and will produce a wonderful story. So please continue to give me your support. Thank you.

1yr
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Kashin_san

I am really curious though, what both the protagonist are hidding from each other. Their interaction, the way they both subconsiously let each other enter their life and heart. I want to see more romance moment between the both, but also like how the author is taking it slow, growing the feeling gradually. Keep up the job, Author!!

1yr
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Myra_Agpalza_Butac

Excellent start! Although I admit to seeing more conversations instead of narrations in your story, you have still managed to grab with your amazing storytelling style. I have placed your book in my library so I can see your story unfold. Amazing work, Author! Keep it up...[img=recommend]

11mth
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Rainism_11

Great book. I love it so much 😍😍😍😍. Author, you are doing wonderful, especially with the updates. Thank you so much. I love the book and everything in it. The main characters ❤️❤️❤️. More. I need more.

1yr
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Sophia_Yomere

I have been reading this book for a while now and am truly enjoying the journey of Lucien and Vivienne. The author is really doing a great job in conveying this story that I look forward to reading till the end.

1yr
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jeanpierregerardo

good history.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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obiparadise_purity

This is a very nice and interesting story, it really caught my attention. I admire Vivienne a lot, the way she handles things is unique. She is very clever and smart and that I love her for. The fashion industry is mostly full of competition but who is willing to rise must be patient and put in all they got but not forcing yourself. on the other hand I hope Vivienne and Lucien get along. Great work author.

1yr
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Zefyr
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Wow , is it just because I barely read any romance at all , but do all romance authors like to describe everything to their readers ? I must say that i'm impressed . Definitely bookmark it and read it later.

1yr
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ZoeTinnah

This book is a piece of art from the character development, writing quality, and everything about it is funny and interesting. Good work Author keep on fighting.

1yr
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Maxemillian

not my usual cup of tea but a very nice novel.

1yr
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pink_lollie24

An enchanting read, the author has a way of creating a breathtaking world that is so real, it is luxury to read about. Looking forward to reading more chapters. The author is very artistic, well done in capturing the reader's attention!

1yr
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shreya_ki

wow the story is good. I love the story where both FL and Ml are successful and rich heheheh hehehe. Also looking forward how they fall in love with each other. Its going to be interesting. [img=recommend]

1yr
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Teddy_write

wow such a nice book. I love everything about it, starting from the characters settings, the plot everything. keep it up author

1yr
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FightLoveSystem

Great! I just like how the author describes every single thing for readers to understand. I like this novel Romance with a touch of Future. Kudos to the Author🤗

1yr
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SupremeDaoist2

GREAT NOVEL! IT'S REALLY AMAZING ESPECIALLY THE STORY DEVELOPMENT. ALL IN ALL, IT'S JUST WONDERFUL. I CAN'T TO SEE WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT

1yr
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MonarchTheFirst

This is a wonderful story; it would do with more interactions between characters instead of the narrator telling us what happens in the scene. But it makes up for shortcomings in the wonderful world building and intriguing plot.

1yr
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HeartzDiary

The storyline is amazing and the concept... expecting more to come.

1yr
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Marckaroni

The premise of the story is intruiging and got me curious on how the relationship between the two will continue. I like the pace as it isn’t fast and the writing quality is good. The story is unique and thats something rare on webnovel which I greatly appreciate. Besides the sometimes extremely long paragraphs there is nothing I can point out. Great job author

1yr
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AceAmbrosia

The story itself is amazing, I must say. The writing quality is thorough, and works to describe each part of the settings accurately. A piece of advice would be to work on the sudden "tense" switch in the first chapter from present-tense to past-tense. Otherwise, the novel itself is wonderful. Keep up the good work, author!

1yr
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Nonik_Farellidzy

this is very good with early shown the roles of the characters. I'm curious how each of the characters will fare here. 🙂❤️

1yr
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Reveries_

it was very nice with everything.. specially your writing quality😍. I love it waiting for next chapter 💜💜

1yr
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Abysalyounglord

Hi, this is the author. Thank you for taking the time to read my novel. This is my second novel, and I hope that this time, I won't fall short and will produce a wonderful story. So please continue to give me your support. Thank you.

1yr
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Kashin_san

I am really curious though, what both the protagonist are hidding from each other. Their interaction, the way they both subconsiously let each other enter their life and heart. I want to see more romance moment between the both, but also like how the author is taking it slow, growing the feeling gradually. Keep up the job, Author!!

1yr
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Myra_Agpalza_Butac

Excellent start! Although I admit to seeing more conversations instead of narrations in your story, you have still managed to grab with your amazing storytelling style. I have placed your book in my library so I can see your story unfold. Amazing work, Author! Keep it up...[img=recommend]

11mth
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Rainism_11

Great book. I love it so much 😍😍😍😍. Author, you are doing wonderful, especially with the updates. Thank you so much. I love the book and everything in it. The main characters ❤️❤️❤️. More. I need more.

1yr
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Sophia_Yomere

I have been reading this book for a while now and am truly enjoying the journey of Lucien and Vivienne. The author is really doing a great job in conveying this story that I look forward to reading till the end.

1yr
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jeanpierregerardo

good history.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

1yr
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obiparadise_purity

This is a very nice and interesting story, it really caught my attention. I admire Vivienne a lot, the way she handles things is unique. She is very clever and smart and that I love her for. The fashion industry is mostly full of competition but who is willing to rise must be patient and put in all they got but not forcing yourself. on the other hand I hope Vivienne and Lucien get along. Great work author.

1yr
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Zefyr
LV 14 Badge

Wow , is it just because I barely read any romance at all , but do all romance authors like to describe everything to their readers ? I must say that i'm impressed . Definitely bookmark it and read it later.

1yr
View 1 Replies
ZoeTinnah

This book is a piece of art from the character development, writing quality, and everything about it is funny and interesting. Good work Author keep on fighting.

1yr
View 1 Replies
Maxemillian

not my usual cup of tea but a very nice novel.

1yr
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pink_lollie24

An enchanting read, the author has a way of creating a breathtaking world that is so real, it is luxury to read about. Looking forward to reading more chapters. The author is very artistic, well done in capturing the reader's attention!

1yr
View 1 Replies
shreya_ki

wow the story is good. I love the story where both FL and Ml are successful and rich heheheh hehehe. Also looking forward how they fall in love with each other. Its going to be interesting. [img=recommend]

1yr
View 1 Replies
Teddy_write

wow such a nice book. I love everything about it, starting from the characters settings, the plot everything. keep it up author

1yr
View 1 Replies
FightLoveSystem

Great! I just like how the author describes every single thing for readers to understand. I like this novel Romance with a touch of Future. Kudos to the Author🤗

1yr
View 0 Replies
SupremeDaoist2

GREAT NOVEL! IT'S REALLY AMAZING ESPECIALLY THE STORY DEVELOPMENT. ALL IN ALL, IT'S JUST WONDERFUL. I CAN'T TO SEE WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT

1yr
View 1 Replies
MonarchTheFirst

This is a wonderful story; it would do with more interactions between characters instead of the narrator telling us what happens in the scene. But it makes up for shortcomings in the wonderful world building and intriguing plot.

1yr
View 0 Replies
HeartzDiary

The storyline is amazing and the concept... expecting more to come.

1yr
View 0 Replies
Marckaroni

The premise of the story is intruiging and got me curious on how the relationship between the two will continue. I like the pace as it isn’t fast and the writing quality is good. The story is unique and thats something rare on webnovel which I greatly appreciate. Besides the sometimes extremely long paragraphs there is nothing I can point out. Great job author

1yr
View 1 Replies
AceAmbrosia

The story itself is amazing, I must say. The writing quality is thorough, and works to describe each part of the settings accurately. A piece of advice would be to work on the sudden "tense" switch in the first chapter from present-tense to past-tense. Otherwise, the novel itself is wonderful. Keep up the good work, author!

1yr
View 0 Replies
Nonik_Farellidzy

this is very good with early shown the roles of the characters. I'm curious how each of the characters will fare here. 🙂❤️

1yr
View 0 Replies