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Draul_TheOminous

Dum! Dum!! Dum!! My second fanfiction is finally here and I have to say I'm pretty nervous about this one. The reason I chose a Teen Wolf fic to wrote is because there were absolutely none(those on Wattpad don't count) that I found, interesting, except one here on Webnovel, but unfortunately it was dropped so I have high hopes for this one. I decided to write Teen Wolf because I wanted to challenge myself and also take a break, or rather another outlook, from the one I took in Marvel: Re-do. Believe it or not, writing something as complicated as a Marvel fic is hard so kudos to all the authors who managed to make theirs a wonderful story. Now unto TEEN WOLF: BLOODBORN. The starting is a little iffy as I was torn between the different scenarios that came to me when writing the first few chapters so it might seem a little bit... nor sure of the word I want to use there, but that's how it might seem. Whatever it might be, it's definitely a unique start, one of its kind. I assure you. I'm not going to give too many spoilers about it so you'll just have to make your own impressions. Romance? Of course. Though this one will be way different than what I tried to portray in Marvel. Main love interest is Malia... I just love that girl. She's the very picture of my ideal girlfriend so don't judge. The only thing I'll say is that they both meet quite early on, way earlier than she waS introduced in the series...and I mean WAY earlier. As for MC, this is where it gets a little bit interesting. The situation about the MC's beginning in reference to the starting of the novel is quite interesting so his situation overall follows the same route. As for what he is... He's a vampire. Or at least one of the many types portrayed in media. Like everyone knows, a vampire in Teen Wolf is overkill so I'll have to bring him down to their level, like way down. His vampirism is a cross between Twilight's and The Vampire Diaries', in the sense that he doesn't burn in the sun and does not glow either. He has the normal weakness to vampires, also news one based on Teen Wolf's myths and also the urge which impacts his character in most ways. In essence, he would be quite similar to a Wendigo for those familiar with Teen Wolf's supernaturals. That's all I can say, so please look forward to it.

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JustWhy_69

So I'm really digging this story but noticed it hasn't been updated in 7 months..... anyone know if it's on hiatus or dropped? Author I hope you see this and continue you were doing a damn good job.

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CouchPotatoDandy

I've chapter 5 and still couldn't wrap my head on what the hell is going on. For me that means the author tried to be too mysterious and was unsuccessful.

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DaoistcAoBFM

I love this fic but three months without an update please author don't do it dirty are you still on this or have you dropped it

4mth
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FishingAnEmptySky

The best and longest teen wolf novel on Webnovel. Really like the character development for Tristan and his evolution as a person. The pacing events essentially follow canon (duh what do you expect) but the author has done a good job in my opinion with inserting his own character and plot developments. It doesn’t feel like Tristan is just “along for the ride with the cast”. Thanks Author, would love to see more 😊

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Cukimai_01

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8mth
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DaoistElxnbZ

Hey guys, my friend has a very good teen Wolf story on FanFiction.net called Teen Wolves, look for it and read it, it's currently in season 5 and releasing chapters, read it, you won't regret it

9mth
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sauske_Aizen

Great Book, Great story, Slow at first , then it becomes whole another level. One of my top 5 fics

9mth
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Alexander_Mencos

Todo muy aburrido y sin sentido... Pero es bueno si quieren algo que los haga dormir

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Flash_YT

Who is the love interest for the character

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Aye_itz_cloudz

I was not interested because of the reviews but I decided to give it a shot because his marvel fic is one of the best I have read the first 10-20 chaps are not my favorite but as you keep reading you get to watch the character grow I like how he is not OP at the start and how he grows into it and it’s good he is not op because it allows for other characters to be involved more this isn’t a wish fulfillment so if you have come for a character who is shallow with no character development this is not for you I have read to chap 150 as of this post best teen wolf fic on this app

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Un_lecteur

very good fan fiction, a good development of person especially of our MC, the only thing I had to reproach was the lack of information regarding his past and his disinterest in it that has probably changed, looking forward to the next chapters!!!

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ChaMy
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Very good; I'm currently in chapter 185 and so far nothing has really displeased me, perhaps the lack of development of the protagonist's past, but that will probably have an explanation in the future and I really liked the MC's development with his friends, I found it very satisfactory and in line with his personality. And of course the Romance with Malia is very good, not something that takes up the focus of the story, they are small constructed moments that give a very good natural quality.(Google Translate)

11mth
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CreationGODBlack

I love it,,, please don't give up on it Great author 🙏🏾 thank you for your work looking forward to more

11mth
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The_Ram_TS

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Jacob_Hickok

I think this is a great book, I wasn't ever a huge fan of teen wolf, but for some reason this just got my attention so great job my friend.

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LastGod

So the first in the book was okay. If that had been it and it moved forward with him. Finally learning how to talk . Him Learning and the story moving forward. It would have been good. But chapter, after chapter of him not being able to talk of him having to be mute and boring chapters of him trying to survive. Trying to figure out why he's in pain. It's boring.

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Rigchel

This fanfic has much greater potential than the author's previous work. The Teen Wolf universe is a pretty good setting to use since it has everything from a mythological lore to occult and mad science. Plus my personal feeling is that the Teen Wolf universe wasn't explored to its full potential. Characters are also well-developed especially the protagonist whom I find to be quite different from Draul St. Cross (the MC of Marvel:Re-Do). The plot follows the standard continuity of the Teen Wolf TV Series, but the author proves that a fanfic can be better than the original when done right

1yr
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Mystical_Z

the story gets better the more you read, trust. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

1yr
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Dissconnected

I just binged this… I really like the OC and as far as i can tell the characters are developing nicely[img=update][img=update][img=update]

1yr
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ItzMenace12

Read a couple of chapters and really enjoyed the story so far but I can already see this becoming into a harem one way or another but i could be wrong... Its just I've unfortunately read enough harem fics that I immediately know its gonna be a harem before it even happens...So I'm gonna dip out. Great fic tho...[img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Josh_Richie

I just wanna ask... Will there be a Scott-Allison Ship?Cause if not then this story actually lacks... Something? I get that Tristan is the Protagonist in this FF but please don't forget the original protagonist.I remember when Scott was looking for his anchor, it was Allison. But now? Stiles?I'm still in chapter 30 so I don't know how it'll progress later on so...

1yr
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Iam_Owler

It's not perfect but it got better the more I read it. This is only fic, that I don't abhorred the MC killing a lot of humans and supernatural characters. maybe because it's teen wolf. No need to justify and natural. This is not for everyone but do try it. I recommend this for a nightly read.

1yr
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Bro_is_bored

i don't like wolf and vimper gener but i will read for you author . 👍

1yr
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Lazy_Fox111

You get a 4 star for this fic being the most decent among the numerous teenwolf fanfics. Really, I tried to search for teenwolf fics but the synopsis and genre as well as the pairings made me give up out of... how do I say this? uhh, uncomfortableness, perhaps?

1yr
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Reimoss
LV 14 Badge

Author writing a chapter: He went shopping and stuffAuthor in the comments: He was turned but not into a werewolf, no big deal so I just did it off screen

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1yr
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Issac_Bonilla

It has a good character development, nice introduction of mc, nothing out of the ordinary without breaking the logic of teen wolf, not a good introduction to vampires, good development of dialogues between characters, and the fights are good 5 stars in my personal opinion After reading this play, I loved it and I love the relationship he made between the mc and a character within the play, it was quite credible

1yr
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Worn_out_by

Honestly bad the character has zero development even after years he remains the same with no goal or ambition boring af. The pacing and story telling are horrendous it’s every where and the author can’t seem to remember or decide what supernatural he is or if he even is one. There is also the issue of him having no ambition he’s essentially just an insert that is just there to be a rag doll

1yr
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Draul_TheOminous

Dum! Dum!! Dum!! My second fanfiction is finally here and I have to say I'm pretty nervous about this one. The reason I chose a Teen Wolf fic to wrote is because there were absolutely none(those on Wattpad don't count) that I found, interesting, except one here on Webnovel, but unfortunately it was dropped so I have high hopes for this one. I decided to write Teen Wolf because I wanted to challenge myself and also take a break, or rather another outlook, from the one I took in Marvel: Re-do. Believe it or not, writing something as complicated as a Marvel fic is hard so kudos to all the authors who managed to make theirs a wonderful story. Now unto TEEN WOLF: BLOODBORN. The starting is a little iffy as I was torn between the different scenarios that came to me when writing the first few chapters so it might seem a little bit... nor sure of the word I want to use there, but that's how it might seem. Whatever it might be, it's definitely a unique start, one of its kind. I assure you. I'm not going to give too many spoilers about it so you'll just have to make your own impressions. Romance? Of course. Though this one will be way different than what I tried to portray in Marvel. Main love interest is Malia... I just love that girl. She's the very picture of my ideal girlfriend so don't judge. The only thing I'll say is that they both meet quite early on, way earlier than she waS introduced in the series...and I mean WAY earlier. As for MC, this is where it gets a little bit interesting. The situation about the MC's beginning in reference to the starting of the novel is quite interesting so his situation overall follows the same route. As for what he is... He's a vampire. Or at least one of the many types portrayed in media. Like everyone knows, a vampire in Teen Wolf is overkill so I'll have to bring him down to their level, like way down. His vampirism is a cross between Twilight's and The Vampire Diaries', in the sense that he doesn't burn in the sun and does not glow either. He has the normal weakness to vampires, also news one based on Teen Wolf's myths and also the urge which impacts his character in most ways. In essence, he would be quite similar to a Wendigo for those familiar with Teen Wolf's supernaturals. That's all I can say, so please look forward to it.

1yr
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JustWhy_69

So I'm really digging this story but noticed it hasn't been updated in 7 months..... anyone know if it's on hiatus or dropped? Author I hope you see this and continue you were doing a damn good job.

4d
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CouchPotatoDandy

I've chapter 5 and still couldn't wrap my head on what the hell is going on. For me that means the author tried to be too mysterious and was unsuccessful.

2mth
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DaoistcAoBFM

I love this fic but three months without an update please author don't do it dirty are you still on this or have you dropped it

4mth
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FishingAnEmptySky

The best and longest teen wolf novel on Webnovel. Really like the character development for Tristan and his evolution as a person. The pacing events essentially follow canon (duh what do you expect) but the author has done a good job in my opinion with inserting his own character and plot developments. It doesn’t feel like Tristan is just “along for the ride with the cast”. Thanks Author, would love to see more 😊

6mth
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Cukimai_01

Up thor yyyyyyy yyyyyyy yyyyyyy yyyyyyy yyyyyyy yyyyyyy yyyyyyy yyyyyyy yyyyyyy yyyyyyy yyyyyyy yyyyyyy yyyyyyy yyyyyyy yyyyyyy yyyyyyy yyyyyyy yyyyyyy yyyyyyy yyyyyyy yyyyyyy yyyyyyy yyyyyyy yyyyyyy yyyyyyy yyyyyyy yyyyyyy

6mth
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Cukimai_01

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Cukimai_01

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6mth
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Cukimai_01

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8mth
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DaoistElxnbZ

Hey guys, my friend has a very good teen Wolf story on FanFiction.net called Teen Wolves, look for it and read it, it's currently in season 5 and releasing chapters, read it, you won't regret it

9mth
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sauske_Aizen

Great Book, Great story, Slow at first , then it becomes whole another level. One of my top 5 fics

9mth
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Alexander_Mencos

Todo muy aburrido y sin sentido... Pero es bueno si quieren algo que los haga dormir

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10mth
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Flash_YT

Who is the love interest for the character

10mth
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Aye_itz_cloudz

I was not interested because of the reviews but I decided to give it a shot because his marvel fic is one of the best I have read the first 10-20 chaps are not my favorite but as you keep reading you get to watch the character grow I like how he is not OP at the start and how he grows into it and it’s good he is not op because it allows for other characters to be involved more this isn’t a wish fulfillment so if you have come for a character who is shallow with no character development this is not for you I have read to chap 150 as of this post best teen wolf fic on this app

10mth
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Un_lecteur

very good fan fiction, a good development of person especially of our MC, the only thing I had to reproach was the lack of information regarding his past and his disinterest in it that has probably changed, looking forward to the next chapters!!!

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11mth
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ChaMy
LV 4 Badge

Very good; I'm currently in chapter 185 and so far nothing has really displeased me, perhaps the lack of development of the protagonist's past, but that will probably have an explanation in the future and I really liked the MC's development with his friends, I found it very satisfactory and in line with his personality. And of course the Romance with Malia is very good, not something that takes up the focus of the story, they are small constructed moments that give a very good natural quality.(Google Translate)

11mth
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CreationGODBlack

I love it,,, please don't give up on it Great author 🙏🏾 thank you for your work looking forward to more

11mth
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The_Ram_TS

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1yr
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Jacob_Hickok

I think this is a great book, I wasn't ever a huge fan of teen wolf, but for some reason this just got my attention so great job my friend.

1yr
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LastGod

So the first in the book was okay. If that had been it and it moved forward with him. Finally learning how to talk . Him Learning and the story moving forward. It would have been good. But chapter, after chapter of him not being able to talk of him having to be mute and boring chapters of him trying to survive. Trying to figure out why he's in pain. It's boring.

1yr
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Rigchel

This fanfic has much greater potential than the author's previous work. The Teen Wolf universe is a pretty good setting to use since it has everything from a mythological lore to occult and mad science. Plus my personal feeling is that the Teen Wolf universe wasn't explored to its full potential. Characters are also well-developed especially the protagonist whom I find to be quite different from Draul St. Cross (the MC of Marvel:Re-Do). The plot follows the standard continuity of the Teen Wolf TV Series, but the author proves that a fanfic can be better than the original when done right

1yr
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Mystical_Z

the story gets better the more you read, trust. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

1yr
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Dissconnected

I just binged this… I really like the OC and as far as i can tell the characters are developing nicely[img=update][img=update][img=update]

1yr
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ItzMenace12

Read a couple of chapters and really enjoyed the story so far but I can already see this becoming into a harem one way or another but i could be wrong... Its just I've unfortunately read enough harem fics that I immediately know its gonna be a harem before it even happens...So I'm gonna dip out. Great fic tho...[img=recommend][img=recommend]

1yr
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Josh_Richie

I just wanna ask... Will there be a Scott-Allison Ship?Cause if not then this story actually lacks... Something? I get that Tristan is the Protagonist in this FF but please don't forget the original protagonist.I remember when Scott was looking for his anchor, it was Allison. But now? Stiles?I'm still in chapter 30 so I don't know how it'll progress later on so...

1yr
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Iam_Owler

It's not perfect but it got better the more I read it. This is only fic, that I don't abhorred the MC killing a lot of humans and supernatural characters. maybe because it's teen wolf. No need to justify and natural. This is not for everyone but do try it. I recommend this for a nightly read.

1yr
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Bro_is_bored

i don't like wolf and vimper gener but i will read for you author . 👍

1yr
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Lazy_Fox111

You get a 4 star for this fic being the most decent among the numerous teenwolf fanfics. Really, I tried to search for teenwolf fics but the synopsis and genre as well as the pairings made me give up out of... how do I say this? uhh, uncomfortableness, perhaps?

1yr
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Reimoss
LV 14 Badge

Author writing a chapter: He went shopping and stuffAuthor in the comments: He was turned but not into a werewolf, no big deal so I just did it off screen

Reveal Spoiler
1yr
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Issac_Bonilla

It has a good character development, nice introduction of mc, nothing out of the ordinary without breaking the logic of teen wolf, not a good introduction to vampires, good development of dialogues between characters, and the fights are good 5 stars in my personal opinion After reading this play, I loved it and I love the relationship he made between the mc and a character within the play, it was quite credible

1yr
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Worn_out_by

Honestly bad the character has zero development even after years he remains the same with no goal or ambition boring af. The pacing and story telling are horrendous it’s every where and the author can’t seem to remember or decide what supernatural he is or if he even is one. There is also the issue of him having no ambition he’s essentially just an insert that is just there to be a rag doll

1yr
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