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Author here! This is my first book, so I may have made some errors at the beginning, but I'm working on learning and perfecting my craft as the story progresses. The story features a plot that includes elements of fighting and psychology. As you continue reading, you'll become more familiar with mental illness terms. However, don't expect in-depth details about them, as I'm also a beginner when it comes to things like this. If you find my descriptions and portrayals inaccurate, I hope you'll inform me of my ignorance so that I can learn and improve. While the story has a slow start, you'll find it increasingly entertaining as you go on. Sigh... It wasn't my initial intention to write it this way, but perhaps I was influenced by LOTM that I unwittingly adopted a slow-start writing style. If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to leave a comment.
I just got fully caught up to the current chapters and I greatly enjoyed what you have done so far. it started a bit slow but the world building is good and people do things that actually make sense. the power system has been very well thought out and having multiple of them was a great idea. it's also not often that you see a mc go down this type of power system compared to a mage/warrior type so props for that. overall this is a great start to the book and I look forward to more. if you like a world building that feels similar to LOTM then try this out and enjoy :)
This is my first book in webnovel. Someone from a discord groupchat recommended this and I couldn’t help but read it. This really coincides with my preference. A competition similar to squid games but had a mixture of fantasy. The characters also started young so everyone was equal. Moreover, I like how it has a psychology storyline. This reminds me of a novel I read in the past where a character survived just with manipulating people. Thank you for this book, author. Pls don’t stop writing. I know this will get hit in the future.
One of the best novels I have read on this app the development is insane and the story and the power system is unique and get better each chapter.
i like it keep going and don't drop i can't wait to see more chapters. [img=faceslap][img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend][img=fp][img=update][img=update]
I'm not good with praise so all I can say is this is a really good novel. The story and world background seem good so far. I can only hope the author doesn't drop or slow down in updates.
It’s nice the author continued his work. I was very sad when he suddenly delete his novel.
Good start. Very enjoyable. I’m excited to know more about the other players.[img=update][img=update]
I’ve been reading a hardbook called ‘Soulless’ and tried searching it on the search bar. This was the best impulsive thing I’ve ever done as I discover this unique webnovel.
I need meoowree! It's so funny you use Steve Jobs as one of the characters but rename it as Steve Works instead. Wishing for consistent daily updates!
This is good. It's easy to understand since the words used are simple. As for first impression, it's nice to see something unique. I just hope there is no harem. Keep on posting author-nim!
this novel is simply amazing it starts a bit slow but if you are patient you will be blown away. a smart, tricky and cautious mc but not too cautious ; Amazing power system that has a lot of elements but doesn't feel chaotic.The world building is great, the characters feel realistic, the story development is intriguing and hooks you in.Nicely done author.
Author here! This is my first book, so I may have made some errors at the beginning, but I'm working on learning and perfecting my craft as the story progresses. The story features a plot that includes elements of fighting and psychology. As you continue reading, you'll become more familiar with mental illness terms. However, don't expect in-depth details about them, as I'm also a beginner when it comes to things like this. If you find my descriptions and portrayals inaccurate, I hope you'll inform me of my ignorance so that I can learn and improve. While the story has a slow start, you'll find it increasingly entertaining as you go on. Sigh... It wasn't my initial intention to write it this way, but perhaps I was influenced by LOTM that I unwittingly adopted a slow-start writing style. If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to leave a comment.
I just got fully caught up to the current chapters and I greatly enjoyed what you have done so far. it started a bit slow but the world building is good and people do things that actually make sense. the power system has been very well thought out and having multiple of them was a great idea. it's also not often that you see a mc go down this type of power system compared to a mage/warrior type so props for that. overall this is a great start to the book and I look forward to more. if you like a world building that feels similar to LOTM then try this out and enjoy :)
This is my first book in webnovel. Someone from a discord groupchat recommended this and I couldn’t help but read it. This really coincides with my preference. A competition similar to squid games but had a mixture of fantasy. The characters also started young so everyone was equal. Moreover, I like how it has a psychology storyline. This reminds me of a novel I read in the past where a character survived just with manipulating people. Thank you for this book, author. Pls don’t stop writing. I know this will get hit in the future.
One of the best novels I have read on this app the development is insane and the story and the power system is unique and get better each chapter.
i like it keep going and don't drop i can't wait to see more chapters. [img=faceslap][img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend][img=fp][img=update][img=update]
I'm not good with praise so all I can say is this is a really good novel. The story and world background seem good so far. I can only hope the author doesn't drop or slow down in updates.
It’s nice the author continued his work. I was very sad when he suddenly delete his novel.
Good start. Very enjoyable. I’m excited to know more about the other players.[img=update][img=update]
I’ve been reading a hardbook called ‘Soulless’ and tried searching it on the search bar. This was the best impulsive thing I’ve ever done as I discover this unique webnovel.
I need meoowree! It's so funny you use Steve Jobs as one of the characters but rename it as Steve Works instead. Wishing for consistent daily updates!
This is good. It's easy to understand since the words used are simple. As for first impression, it's nice to see something unique. I just hope there is no harem. Keep on posting author-nim!
this novel is simply amazing it starts a bit slow but if you are patient you will be blown away. a smart, tricky and cautious mc but not too cautious ; Amazing power system that has a lot of elements but doesn't feel chaotic.The world building is great, the characters feel realistic, the story development is intriguing and hooks you in.Nicely done author.