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I would say this would be a good story if the author would stop trying to advertise that he was from India. I mean really every other chapter is about how this is a traditional food in India and how good it tastes or how there is a revolution or something so it’s not known in the west. Dude really? What does that have to do with anything I am trying to read? You don’t see people giving a history lesson on Ramen in a Naruto ff. Or is he is a transmigrator he doesn’t introduce hamburgers and tell us it’s history. Is it just going to be all Indian stuff from now on? I would like a mix of stuff personally.
Nice story for many people who are interested in harem building. The story has a nice background building where he has to climb to the top. I want to see how he rises up to the top with his harem
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I would say this would be a good story if the author would stop trying to advertise that he was from India. I mean really every other chapter is about how this is a traditional food in India and how good it tastes or how there is a revolution or something so it’s not known in the west. Dude really? What does that have to do with anything I am trying to read? You don’t see people giving a history lesson on Ramen in a Naruto ff. Or is he is a transmigrator he doesn’t introduce hamburgers and tell us it’s history. Is it just going to be all Indian stuff from now on? I would like a mix of stuff personally.
Nice story for many people who are interested in harem building. The story has a nice background building where he has to climb to the top. I want to see how he rises up to the top with his harem
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keep up the good work