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A translation and adaptation of Chinese fiction, therefore with errors. However, without the typical Chinese stuff, all in all one of the better Chinese fiction.
Trash, didn't even make it past chapter 10 before the typical disgusting CN filth racism started seeping in.
couldn't finish it. I got about 130 ish chapters in, but the characters just killed it for me. I get with the whole multiverse that there are infinite variations of the same characters, BUT that doesn't explain how well-known characters act completely nonsensical. this is by far my main issue with the story. the arc with Jean Grey was just painful and had me grimacing. it should be mentioned that the plot armor is very strong with this one, like vibranium could be broken if he sneezed. it's a fun story if you want a mind-numbing read. the gold finger is interesting, and the early story is great. overall, it's not bed but has some major 6 if those don't really bug you, you'll really enjoy it. the interactions between the twins and mc were cute, but girls won't fall in love with a man because he is handsome the same way a man will fall in love with a girl because she is beautiful. it's a solid mixed bag. Some great stuff, some really bad. I'd say it's worth at least reading the beginning WW2 arc
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Its actually very good and has a consistent story i just hope it's continued and not dropped like the others. Also DO NOT NERF!!!!!!!!! ................ .
c49-50 sigh...i just can't... could've saved the story with simple logic/explanation like the Space Stone disrupting his power and that Power Disruptor being designed by an elder....its like the author just gave up from that point on.
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I didn't expect much in the quality of this fanfic because it's Chinese, but I liked it, it's not the best but I recommend you read it. (Google translator)
While the book establishes an interesting premise in the opening chapters, I was disappointed that the story failed to develop or progress in a meaningful way as I continued reading. For many pages, often spanning whole chapters, the narrative seemed to get stuck repeating the same scenes and scenarios without advancing the overall plot. Around the halfway point at page 248, I noticed the story was still following the same repetitive patterns of character behaviors and interactions rather than unfolding new events or revealing deeper layers to the mystery first introduced. This lack of narrative momentum left me feeling frustrated, as the early promise of an engaging mystery or character drama was not delivered on. The repetitive nature of the writing made it difficult for me to stay engaged or invested in what would happen next. As a reader, I want a story to evolve and take me to new places, introducing surprises and revelations along the way. Unfortunately, this book got stuck in a rut and did not satisfy my desire for progression of the central storyline. While the setup intrigued me, the execution ultimately fell short of taking the narrative to the next level in a truly compelling way.
I have to stop at chapter 6, in such a short time, the author was extreme sexism, call agent Carter, female agent, beautiful woman who has no place on the battlefield, stares at the MC in awe not even 3 seconds after he speaks. The MC is arrogant enough to think that he alone can change the course of the war and to ask the colonel to trust his genius. In short, 6 chapter and my desire to kill the MC was quite high
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As of chapter 27: it’s not worth it. Author just… isn’t doing anything worthwhile, just some guy doing stuff and plot is barely changing, actually scrap that, even when mc takes action that could derail plot author then does sth so plot is steered back on track. Honestly, it’s disappointing so far, and a lot of stuff is just forced. Writing quality: 3 Update stability: 5 Story development: 1 Character design: 4 or 3 World background: 2 or 3
Feels good in a unusual way. Author san, ignore all my in chapter comments, they are all made with sarcasm. You doing good work. It will take time to learn to write good and engaging content, just keep at it. My advice is to work more on character design. The way, the entire trip to Sakaar and grinding was written felt way too forced. Though I am still at chapter 41 and still continuing. Thank you for the hard work.May you have a great day.-Will update review later if I have more points to mention.
This story is amazing, I really enjoy reading it, and I look forward to more. Our protagonist is making some changes and I confess that I'm liking them. Now I wonder whether these changes will have good or bad consequences in the future. I personally hope these changes are good. Waiting for the next one, see you later, Bye ....
someone spoil me does he use sentry serum or not im thinking of dropping atm and if he does in which chapter ..........................................
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Spoiler Alert!! It is recommended to only read up to chapter 60, for the next chapter you can say it's trash. Because the author's logic has decreased so that the novel feels like a Chinese novel, the more you read each chapter you will get bored. Thank You!!
Mc is stupid and doesnt learn anything he is constantly a plaything for others the onlything good about it is the chapter releases and small parts every now and then.
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Novel is interesting and grammar is okay. The author is obviously new to writing and is confused which causes a lot of Inconsistency. Things don’t match up and MC changes personality’s every few chapters and his goals change every other chapter it seems.
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Just a dog leashed by the army... Even when it is unleashed, it still wags its tail when its name is called... I have read until chp 40
A translation and adaptation of Chinese fiction, therefore with errors. However, without the typical Chinese stuff, all in all one of the better Chinese fiction.
Trash, didn't even make it past chapter 10 before the typical disgusting CN filth racism started seeping in.
couldn't finish it. I got about 130 ish chapters in, but the characters just killed it for me. I get with the whole multiverse that there are infinite variations of the same characters, BUT that doesn't explain how well-known characters act completely nonsensical. this is by far my main issue with the story. the arc with Jean Grey was just painful and had me grimacing. it should be mentioned that the plot armor is very strong with this one, like vibranium could be broken if he sneezed. it's a fun story if you want a mind-numbing read. the gold finger is interesting, and the early story is great. overall, it's not bed but has some major 6 if those don't really bug you, you'll really enjoy it. the interactions between the twins and mc were cute, but girls won't fall in love with a man because he is handsome the same way a man will fall in love with a girl because she is beautiful. it's a solid mixed bag. Some great stuff, some really bad. I'd say it's worth at least reading the beginning WW2 arc
Reveal Spoiler Its actually very good and has a consistent story i just hope it's continued and not dropped like the others. Also DO NOT NERF!!!!!!!!! ................ .
c49-50 sigh...i just can't... could've saved the story with simple logic/explanation like the Space Stone disrupting his power and that Power Disruptor being designed by an elder....its like the author just gave up from that point on.
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⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ I think this stars are enough to show my appreciation for this book
I didn't expect much in the quality of this fanfic because it's Chinese, but I liked it, it's not the best but I recommend you read it. (Google translator)
While the book establishes an interesting premise in the opening chapters, I was disappointed that the story failed to develop or progress in a meaningful way as I continued reading. For many pages, often spanning whole chapters, the narrative seemed to get stuck repeating the same scenes and scenarios without advancing the overall plot. Around the halfway point at page 248, I noticed the story was still following the same repetitive patterns of character behaviors and interactions rather than unfolding new events or revealing deeper layers to the mystery first introduced. This lack of narrative momentum left me feeling frustrated, as the early promise of an engaging mystery or character drama was not delivered on. The repetitive nature of the writing made it difficult for me to stay engaged or invested in what would happen next. As a reader, I want a story to evolve and take me to new places, introducing surprises and revelations along the way. Unfortunately, this book got stuck in a rut and did not satisfy my desire for progression of the central storyline. While the setup intrigued me, the execution ultimately fell short of taking the narrative to the next level in a truly compelling way.
I have to stop at chapter 6, in such a short time, the author was extreme sexism, call agent Carter, female agent, beautiful woman who has no place on the battlefield, stares at the MC in awe not even 3 seconds after he speaks. The MC is arrogant enough to think that he alone can change the course of the war and to ask the colonel to trust his genius. In short, 6 chapter and my desire to kill the MC was quite high
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Reveal Spoiler As of chapter 27: it’s not worth it. Author just… isn’t doing anything worthwhile, just some guy doing stuff and plot is barely changing, actually scrap that, even when mc takes action that could derail plot author then does sth so plot is steered back on track. Honestly, it’s disappointing so far, and a lot of stuff is just forced. Writing quality: 3 Update stability: 5 Story development: 1 Character design: 4 or 3 World background: 2 or 3
Feels good in a unusual way. Author san, ignore all my in chapter comments, they are all made with sarcasm. You doing good work. It will take time to learn to write good and engaging content, just keep at it. My advice is to work more on character design. The way, the entire trip to Sakaar and grinding was written felt way too forced. Though I am still at chapter 41 and still continuing. Thank you for the hard work.May you have a great day.-Will update review later if I have more points to mention.
This story is amazing, I really enjoy reading it, and I look forward to more. Our protagonist is making some changes and I confess that I'm liking them. Now I wonder whether these changes will have good or bad consequences in the future. I personally hope these changes are good. Waiting for the next one, see you later, Bye ....
someone spoil me does he use sentry serum or not im thinking of dropping atm and if he does in which chapter ..........................................
😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Spoiler Alert!! It is recommended to only read up to chapter 60, for the next chapter you can say it's trash. Because the author's logic has decreased so that the novel feels like a Chinese novel, the more you read each chapter you will get bored. Thank You!!
Mc is stupid and doesnt learn anything he is constantly a plaything for others the onlything good about it is the chapter releases and small parts every now and then.
Reveal Spoiler Novel is interesting and grammar is okay. The author is obviously new to writing and is confused which causes a lot of Inconsistency. Things don’t match up and MC changes personality’s every few chapters and his goals change every other chapter it seems.
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Just a dog leashed by the army... Even when it is unleashed, it still wags its tail when its name is called... I have read until chp 40