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This novel sounds like a rollercoaster ride of emotions and obstacles for the main characters. It takes a lot of skill to develop complex characters like Arissa and Nicklaus, and I commend the author for their ability to do so. I can't wait to see how their relationship develops and how they overcome the challenges that lie ahead. Keep up the great work, and I look forward to reading more updates!
I'm not usually into these type of romance novels. But I love this particular book. I love the fact that, the female lead is resilient, and this sets it apart from the other novels i've read so far. And overall, the novel is just really great. Your writing a really awesome book author😍.
To put it simply it’s a great story. The characters, plot and everything is great so far. I also am liking the character development with the characters. As of right now, There hasn’t been updated in a month but hopefully it will continue to have more chapters soon and update more frequently. Love the story so far. 🙌💕🙌
Love the way you write! The first chapter sucked me in, and teased me to read along. Great work! Hoping to expect some great development between the characters.
I really enjoy the book, even though the story is quite at a slow pace, the detail and narrative keep me excited. I like how MC has her stand and did not give up easily. I hope the author keeps up the good work and continues the journey!
Hi there! So this is my review! Story-wise, I think this is what an FL story should look like--glamor, the cat, the soul sisters, etc. However, I noticed some flaws in the story that hindered maximal reader enjoyment: repeated punctuation mistakes and, this part gets me very confused, are you meaning to use -- instead of __? I just want clarification on that part because I've never read a story using underscores before. Overall, this was a good read! I like it and enjoyed it thoroughly. Will come back to this story when I have more time!
Interesting novel so far, Im amazed that you took such a simple idea and turned it into 200+ chapters though I can tell by the clear experience this author has by their words and how the right, everything here is a 10/10 keep it up author
Great story if you like arranged marriage and a lot of up-and-down emtions. it will take you on a wild ride with the author writing and scenes will make you hooked on it if you like this type of theme I recommend it!
There's absolutely no reason why anyone, wouldn't love this amazing story. keep up the good work author❤️
when she said she that she was his drug and he was her water she isn't lieing.this is an amazing 😍 work of love hate relationship,arissa and Nick relationship let see how these two stubborn and strong head people fall in love 🤭🥲
This is the first FL novel I've read..and it's quite intriguing I must say the description ain't bad and also the characters are sure to undergo development and ..nice one auth,I must say the first five chap did intrigue me and when I get time I'll finish the toxic addiction .yeepee..
You're about to be on a rollercoaster spree of emotions with this novel! 🔥🔥🔥 Nice one Author! She grows with every chapter I tell y'all! 👏👏🤭💕🔥
The story looks promising!✨✨ Author has a unique way of plotting her characters, and that is something to appreciate her for, although a mix-up with the punctuations in some parts, if the author can work on them then I don't see what's stopping the novel from becoming even more fantastic ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Keep up the good work author Liz🥰❤️✨
This is a nice story if I must say. I love the fact that the female lead is headstrong and not a pushover. However, there's little work to be done in the writing quality. Keep the good work up and thanks for sharing your story.
I love the contrast between Arissa and Nicklaus's personalities, and I'm curious to see how they will complement each other in their relationship. Looking forward to reading more!
It's been only 6 chapters and I must say, the author has done a great job at introducing the characters. Our FL is strong and independent, yet emotional. And our ML is yet to make an entry. I hope he is hot and dashing *winks*. That aside, the story has great potential. There are grammatical errors, but they do not hinder the story much. All in all, the story is good and worth a read. Let's hope Arissa starts with her revenge soon and her horrible parents get what they deserve. Best of luck author. Keep up the good work.
had to drop a review because this book is amazing, five chapters ik and I'm loving it. Although the grammar may not be perfect, the story is still wonderful
I love the fact that this book captured my attention right from tye time i started reading it. I hope author Lizbella updates regularly.
The plot is similar to other plots in some stories in Webnovel but also different. I don't know about others but what I like about this story is the FL. I like almost everything about her but most of all, her outfits 😂 The writer is doing great in updating and making the story interesting. The characters were portrayed well and the world wasn't confusing. However, I must say that the author's writing needs some work. There are multiple mistakes in grammar, punctuation, and description. Aside from that, it's a great and intriguing story, and I would implore y'all to read it. Keep it up, Author! 🤍
The book turned out to be a surprise. I enjoyed it. I hope the writer could keep updating because I love the story so much. I can't wait to see the chemistry ahead and what would happen to Arissa. Thanks for the mind blower.
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Well, it's a good book with a strong FL. I like her boldness, and I guess she learned that from her mom. Kudos to the author .
i love the story . there's nothing much for me to say.... just keep writing dude[img=recommend][img=update]
Nice work, the book has a nice plot and strong chracters with a great personality, a bit of work needs to be done in your writing skill but its great and twas fun to read anyways.
I really like the novel because it isn't everyday you see a strong FL that can stand up to injustice but trust me this is different and that's what I enjoyed the most. I would implore if the author could pay more attention to the writing quality so it won't diminished the quality of the book. The updates are steady and I would give the author that. Keep on designing the world of creation,you are doing an excellent work. The book is all good for me
For starters, the book has potential and I love to see strong female leads. Although the author has done a good work with the interesting plot, her punctuations need a bit of work and it's a bit disappointing to have caught a glimpse of the ml till chapter five (although it's a slow burn to man romance I guess) and some scenes seem too face paced. Nonetheless, I hope the books gets better with more chapters. Good work author!
Finally, AUTHOR'S review is here. First and foremost, I want to thank all readers and potential readers that are sticking to this novel and would forever stick to it🥰🥰. You all are adding more ink to my pen each morning I wake up and see more progress on my work. My grammar isn't perfect and that is unintentional because English isn't my second but fourth language so if anything, I would want every reader not to give up on my work because of grammar errors but, one thing is sure and that is I would make sure of improvement in grammar quality each chapter and each day. So now, we're going down to the quality of the book (Spoiler Alert🤫🤫). Hmmm firstly, I want you all to not expect a fast romance because both ML and FL have their inner battles and that would make them extremely hard to tame. While Nicklaus battles his inner demons, Arissa battles with her parent's injustice and deadly secrets. Their relationship would also go through numerous ups and downs including occasional breakups, aggressive ex-girlfriends, attempted murderers, and more. Oops!! 🤫🤫🤭 I have spilled out so much information and I can already see that you all are already curious to know more about the story behind Nicklaus and Arissa's extremely crazy romance so, why don't we dig into this work and see how long they can stand? And once again, while reading, have it in mind that my grammar isn't top-notch ☹️☹️ but guess what, I would do all possible best for grammar improvement😉😙. And once again, Happy reading and please, do well to support this novel in every way you can❤️🥰.
This novel sounds like a rollercoaster ride of emotions and obstacles for the main characters. It takes a lot of skill to develop complex characters like Arissa and Nicklaus, and I commend the author for their ability to do so. I can't wait to see how their relationship develops and how they overcome the challenges that lie ahead. Keep up the great work, and I look forward to reading more updates!
I'm not usually into these type of romance novels. But I love this particular book. I love the fact that, the female lead is resilient, and this sets it apart from the other novels i've read so far. And overall, the novel is just really great. Your writing a really awesome book author😍.
To put it simply it’s a great story. The characters, plot and everything is great so far. I also am liking the character development with the characters. As of right now, There hasn’t been updated in a month but hopefully it will continue to have more chapters soon and update more frequently. Love the story so far. 🙌💕🙌
Love the way you write! The first chapter sucked me in, and teased me to read along. Great work! Hoping to expect some great development between the characters.
I really enjoy the book, even though the story is quite at a slow pace, the detail and narrative keep me excited. I like how MC has her stand and did not give up easily. I hope the author keeps up the good work and continues the journey!
Hi there! So this is my review! Story-wise, I think this is what an FL story should look like--glamor, the cat, the soul sisters, etc. However, I noticed some flaws in the story that hindered maximal reader enjoyment: repeated punctuation mistakes and, this part gets me very confused, are you meaning to use -- instead of __? I just want clarification on that part because I've never read a story using underscores before. Overall, this was a good read! I like it and enjoyed it thoroughly. Will come back to this story when I have more time!
Interesting novel so far, Im amazed that you took such a simple idea and turned it into 200+ chapters though I can tell by the clear experience this author has by their words and how the right, everything here is a 10/10 keep it up author
Great story if you like arranged marriage and a lot of up-and-down emtions. it will take you on a wild ride with the author writing and scenes will make you hooked on it if you like this type of theme I recommend it!
There's absolutely no reason why anyone, wouldn't love this amazing story. keep up the good work author❤️
when she said she that she was his drug and he was her water she isn't lieing.this is an amazing 😍 work of love hate relationship,arissa and Nick relationship let see how these two stubborn and strong head people fall in love 🤭🥲
This is the first FL novel I've read..and it's quite intriguing I must say the description ain't bad and also the characters are sure to undergo development and ..nice one auth,I must say the first five chap did intrigue me and when I get time I'll finish the toxic addiction .yeepee..
You're about to be on a rollercoaster spree of emotions with this novel! 🔥🔥🔥 Nice one Author! She grows with every chapter I tell y'all! 👏👏🤭💕🔥
The story looks promising!✨✨ Author has a unique way of plotting her characters, and that is something to appreciate her for, although a mix-up with the punctuations in some parts, if the author can work on them then I don't see what's stopping the novel from becoming even more fantastic ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Keep up the good work author Liz🥰❤️✨
This is a nice story if I must say. I love the fact that the female lead is headstrong and not a pushover. However, there's little work to be done in the writing quality. Keep the good work up and thanks for sharing your story.
I love the contrast between Arissa and Nicklaus's personalities, and I'm curious to see how they will complement each other in their relationship. Looking forward to reading more!
It's been only 6 chapters and I must say, the author has done a great job at introducing the characters. Our FL is strong and independent, yet emotional. And our ML is yet to make an entry. I hope he is hot and dashing *winks*. That aside, the story has great potential. There are grammatical errors, but they do not hinder the story much. All in all, the story is good and worth a read. Let's hope Arissa starts with her revenge soon and her horrible parents get what they deserve. Best of luck author. Keep up the good work.
had to drop a review because this book is amazing, five chapters ik and I'm loving it. Although the grammar may not be perfect, the story is still wonderful
I love the fact that this book captured my attention right from tye time i started reading it. I hope author Lizbella updates regularly.
The plot is similar to other plots in some stories in Webnovel but also different. I don't know about others but what I like about this story is the FL. I like almost everything about her but most of all, her outfits 😂 The writer is doing great in updating and making the story interesting. The characters were portrayed well and the world wasn't confusing. However, I must say that the author's writing needs some work. There are multiple mistakes in grammar, punctuation, and description. Aside from that, it's a great and intriguing story, and I would implore y'all to read it. Keep it up, Author! 🤍
The book turned out to be a surprise. I enjoyed it. I hope the writer could keep updating because I love the story so much. I can't wait to see the chemistry ahead and what would happen to Arissa. Thanks for the mind blower.
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Reveal Spoiler Well, it's a good book with a strong FL. I like her boldness, and I guess she learned that from her mom. Kudos to the author .
i love the story . there's nothing much for me to say.... just keep writing dude[img=recommend][img=update]
Nice work, the book has a nice plot and strong chracters with a great personality, a bit of work needs to be done in your writing skill but its great and twas fun to read anyways.
I really like the novel because it isn't everyday you see a strong FL that can stand up to injustice but trust me this is different and that's what I enjoyed the most. I would implore if the author could pay more attention to the writing quality so it won't diminished the quality of the book. The updates are steady and I would give the author that. Keep on designing the world of creation,you are doing an excellent work. The book is all good for me
For starters, the book has potential and I love to see strong female leads. Although the author has done a good work with the interesting plot, her punctuations need a bit of work and it's a bit disappointing to have caught a glimpse of the ml till chapter five (although it's a slow burn to man romance I guess) and some scenes seem too face paced. Nonetheless, I hope the books gets better with more chapters. Good work author!
Finally, AUTHOR'S review is here. First and foremost, I want to thank all readers and potential readers that are sticking to this novel and would forever stick to it🥰🥰. You all are adding more ink to my pen each morning I wake up and see more progress on my work. My grammar isn't perfect and that is unintentional because English isn't my second but fourth language so if anything, I would want every reader not to give up on my work because of grammar errors but, one thing is sure and that is I would make sure of improvement in grammar quality each chapter and each day. So now, we're going down to the quality of the book (Spoiler Alert🤫🤫). Hmmm firstly, I want you all to not expect a fast romance because both ML and FL have their inner battles and that would make them extremely hard to tame. While Nicklaus battles his inner demons, Arissa battles with her parent's injustice and deadly secrets. Their relationship would also go through numerous ups and downs including occasional breakups, aggressive ex-girlfriends, attempted murderers, and more. Oops!! 🤫🤫🤭 I have spilled out so much information and I can already see that you all are already curious to know more about the story behind Nicklaus and Arissa's extremely crazy romance so, why don't we dig into this work and see how long they can stand? And once again, while reading, have it in mind that my grammar isn't top-notch ☹️☹️ but guess what, I would do all possible best for grammar improvement😉😙. And once again, Happy reading and please, do well to support this novel in every way you can❤️🥰.