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author you can delete this comment, but one thing is certain this is one of the stories that made me most disgusted to read, one piece of advice is to create this rubbish MC and story, don't waste your time doing this, you will only receive negativity from several people.
I know if this is cornbringer, it's gonna be a masterpiece, but since I've never really watched Fairy Tail, I'm gonna be confused af. So I'm gonna wait for the next one.
The story is truly great the world background the emotions in its characters it’s basically no different from the real fairy tale amazing in this regard. And then we have our dear Mc who have shinigami powers (bleach) in a magic world, the main character design was absolute flawless before timeskip I mean before the canon starts. His growth and everything about him great his banter with the other characters, he can be ruthless when need to and a kind loving brother when needed his funny and all. But sadly all that changed after the canon started. The fights! Pre canon, was wonderful every fight was exciting albeit he was a punching bag most of the times but still great to read i really loved it. But everything changed when the canon started every fight he can basically finish in one move and it is against weaker opponents, what does he do? He trash talk through 3 chapters and almost getting beaten etc... this is very frustrating, he feels like Chinese beta Male sometimes. But what mostly disappoints me it’s the power system for this novel, one chapter he kills a god and few years of time skips he struggles against Jalal. He has so much power to use but he can’t because his body cant withstand that said power so he’s basically nerfed, what angers me the most is his Bankai, I have waited and longed for the moment he says BANKAI and then power up but sadly NO! He can only use it once because of his fragile body, 80% of his fights it’s him catching dirt and being punching bag for the strong thus always hospitalized and survives because of Plot armor. Anyways the novel went down hill for me after the canon started, don’t even know why is rated 5stars by everyone here 🤔
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i love this book I really do.... it's just that the Romance tag of this novel is a complete lie. if romance between characters other than the MC then there's Cana's parents I guess but with the MC? Zero romance. His relationship with the women are all platonic, aquaintances or familial.
the author doesn't know how to make things exciting. that's one of the only two things I dislike about the novel but it is quite bad imo. the fight scenes are lacklustre at best and arnt built up properly. and I also really dislike the fact that the soul society (bleach world) exists as a separate dimension/ reality and that mc goes there for like 40% of the novel. its disappointing if anything tbh. i read 140 chapters or whatever (its hard to say because there's like 40 announcment chapters littered throughout which was annoying) to get there and i just really didnt wanna read about bleach for 100 chapters tbh so i dropped there after reading the chapter names and finding out the rest of the novel is there.
Honestly everything fits the storyline quite well, the characters, the world background. It’s honestly scarily accurate.
great. so far I read avatar/gameofthrones/don'tutteraword/fairytale. not one as disappointed me
Go Back to writing Marvel and the other ones. Where's the sequel for Avatar Cold Path? Better yet where is Twilight Venom Huh??? Huh!!! I want stories that are dark, not wholesome. I know I can't order you around but this is just an inquiry. So please heed my Request and publish more. [img=update]
Interesting, because it's interesting I give it five stars. But it would be more interesting if you stopped by my place and found the same thing too!
the story is great the writing is readable the characters are great bit the problem is when we get to bleach the strength scaling is inconsistent and it sounds like the author is buffing the bleach characters and downplaying fairy tail which I always find annoying is when people downplay the people of fairy tail mainly about the power of friendship which is technically an actual thing that works since emotions effect magic to strengthen it like one story of the fairy tail guild gets transported into one piece instead of being trapped for 7 years and for some reason during the first encounter of akoji in pre timeskip the entire guild of fairy tail somehow got destroyed by akoji easily the author didn't even have natsu use lightning fire dragon mode nor was gildarts or Makarov like they wouldn't just let them get destroyed, and the reason the author gave was Despite their magic being the same some how the power of friendship doesn't come with them and he said that one piece didn't have power of friendship
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Honestly I love corn stories but this one is kinda boring and well the only reason for that is the MC is not progressing. Maybe it's because of the power system chosen but anyway I am at 150 chapter and their has been no change in the MC power still same as what was at the start just trying to control his power or something which is kinda boring because while it is shown he is stronger but we can't visually see his growth. They say oh he is faster stronger but that's not enough he doesn't use his space manipulation in fun or intresting way kinda making it boring. In a way he is like Ichigo someone already having strength but not the way to use it but you can see that every other time Ichigo becomes stronger they show a transformation to represent his growth making it exciting which is missing here. 150 chapter and no bankai still on shikai which he learned like in first 20 or some chapter rest the story has good progression. At start character development was good but now it's kinda repetitive as he doesn't interact much outside his circle rest i think it's a good fic.
I love your wokr but all these cliffhangers and starting to get annoying and with the chapters being so short it feels like the day or so apart updates take so much longer. Other than that i dont really have anything bad to say about the story.
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At first I thought it would be like all novels by Cornbringer, but as it picks up pace, I realize that this work is different from his previous ones. While it still has its share of flaws, the strengths are enough to make them negligible provided one keeps reading it and doesn't lose patience. Bottom line, this is Cornbringer's best fanfict and story up to date in my opinion
This is an amazing novel. Sasuga Corn-sama. Just gotta ask though... who's the love interest?
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For me. I really like corn......Its corn!! A big lump with knots. It has the juice (It has the juice~) I can't imagine a more beauthiful thing...Its corn, I can tell you all about it. I mean LOOK AT THIS THING!!! When I tried it with butter everything changed.....The book is AMAZING!!
Goated. .................................................................................................................................................
One of the best fairy tail fan fic. Really enjoyed it, keep updating my friend. This makes me wana watch fairy tail again.....................
Good interactions between characters character has moments that show that he isn't overly op and still struggles
(english is not my language so please forgive any grammatical errors) I love your story and I can't wait to see the continuation and denouement of this story.
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By far one of the best fanfics online with fleshed out story and characters with good plot progression and power system with bleach powers being implemented in the main character.
When are you gonna upload the other novels? Aka DC, marvel Avatar korra, overlord and Naruto WoW? Cause ive been waiting on all of em. And you said that Dc would be uploaded 4 months ago. PS this book is rly good and i just hope this one wont go on hiautus like all the others. Cause you said you have the chapters but you havent uploaded them on Webnovel. Have you perhaps uploaded them on pa tre on?
holy heck I didn't know you were still writing stuff, been off the platform for far too long. Almost all the work you do is perfection, and I only say almost because nobody is perfect. you should try your hand at your own fully original works, get published in the wider world!
No character growth whatsoever, suddenly after a few chapters the MC starts to risk his life to fight unbeatable opponents for the current time or tries to save innocent people like he became a hero or something (again, for no apparent reason... He just felt like it...) He risks his life and sometimes literally going to missions with certain death to save someone he barely knew for a day, and I'm sorry to tell you but that is not how emotions and human nature work, and that makes it all the more hard to swallow while reading this... Honestly I love the author and all his other works, which is all the more disappointing for me to see that he might just have no more creativity to make good arcs and plot lines. Anyway, I won't recommend this fanfic.
author you can delete this comment, but one thing is certain this is one of the stories that made me most disgusted to read, one piece of advice is to create this rubbish MC and story, don't waste your time doing this, you will only receive negativity from several people.
I know if this is cornbringer, it's gonna be a masterpiece, but since I've never really watched Fairy Tail, I'm gonna be confused af. So I'm gonna wait for the next one.
The story is truly great the world background the emotions in its characters it’s basically no different from the real fairy tale amazing in this regard. And then we have our dear Mc who have shinigami powers (bleach) in a magic world, the main character design was absolute flawless before timeskip I mean before the canon starts. His growth and everything about him great his banter with the other characters, he can be ruthless when need to and a kind loving brother when needed his funny and all. But sadly all that changed after the canon started. The fights! Pre canon, was wonderful every fight was exciting albeit he was a punching bag most of the times but still great to read i really loved it. But everything changed when the canon started every fight he can basically finish in one move and it is against weaker opponents, what does he do? He trash talk through 3 chapters and almost getting beaten etc... this is very frustrating, he feels like Chinese beta Male sometimes. But what mostly disappoints me it’s the power system for this novel, one chapter he kills a god and few years of time skips he struggles against Jalal. He has so much power to use but he can’t because his body cant withstand that said power so he’s basically nerfed, what angers me the most is his Bankai, I have waited and longed for the moment he says BANKAI and then power up but sadly NO! He can only use it once because of his fragile body, 80% of his fights it’s him catching dirt and being punching bag for the strong thus always hospitalized and survives because of Plot armor. Anyways the novel went down hill for me after the canon started, don’t even know why is rated 5stars by everyone here 🤔
Reveal Spoiler i love this book I really do.... it's just that the Romance tag of this novel is a complete lie. if romance between characters other than the MC then there's Cana's parents I guess but with the MC? Zero romance. His relationship with the women are all platonic, aquaintances or familial.
the author doesn't know how to make things exciting. that's one of the only two things I dislike about the novel but it is quite bad imo. the fight scenes are lacklustre at best and arnt built up properly. and I also really dislike the fact that the soul society (bleach world) exists as a separate dimension/ reality and that mc goes there for like 40% of the novel. its disappointing if anything tbh. i read 140 chapters or whatever (its hard to say because there's like 40 announcment chapters littered throughout which was annoying) to get there and i just really didnt wanna read about bleach for 100 chapters tbh so i dropped there after reading the chapter names and finding out the rest of the novel is there.
Honestly everything fits the storyline quite well, the characters, the world background. It’s honestly scarily accurate.
great. so far I read avatar/gameofthrones/don'tutteraword/fairytale. not one as disappointed me
Go Back to writing Marvel and the other ones. Where's the sequel for Avatar Cold Path? Better yet where is Twilight Venom Huh??? Huh!!! I want stories that are dark, not wholesome. I know I can't order you around but this is just an inquiry. So please heed my Request and publish more. [img=update]
Interesting, because it's interesting I give it five stars. But it would be more interesting if you stopped by my place and found the same thing too!
the story is great the writing is readable the characters are great bit the problem is when we get to bleach the strength scaling is inconsistent and it sounds like the author is buffing the bleach characters and downplaying fairy tail which I always find annoying is when people downplay the people of fairy tail mainly about the power of friendship which is technically an actual thing that works since emotions effect magic to strengthen it like one story of the fairy tail guild gets transported into one piece instead of being trapped for 7 years and for some reason during the first encounter of akoji in pre timeskip the entire guild of fairy tail somehow got destroyed by akoji easily the author didn't even have natsu use lightning fire dragon mode nor was gildarts or Makarov like they wouldn't just let them get destroyed, and the reason the author gave was Despite their magic being the same some how the power of friendship doesn't come with them and he said that one piece didn't have power of friendship
Reveal Spoiler Honestly I love corn stories but this one is kinda boring and well the only reason for that is the MC is not progressing. Maybe it's because of the power system chosen but anyway I am at 150 chapter and their has been no change in the MC power still same as what was at the start just trying to control his power or something which is kinda boring because while it is shown he is stronger but we can't visually see his growth. They say oh he is faster stronger but that's not enough he doesn't use his space manipulation in fun or intresting way kinda making it boring. In a way he is like Ichigo someone already having strength but not the way to use it but you can see that every other time Ichigo becomes stronger they show a transformation to represent his growth making it exciting which is missing here. 150 chapter and no bankai still on shikai which he learned like in first 20 or some chapter rest the story has good progression. At start character development was good but now it's kinda repetitive as he doesn't interact much outside his circle rest i think it's a good fic.
I love your wokr but all these cliffhangers and starting to get annoying and with the chapters being so short it feels like the day or so apart updates take so much longer. Other than that i dont really have anything bad to say about the story.
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At first I thought it would be like all novels by Cornbringer, but as it picks up pace, I realize that this work is different from his previous ones. While it still has its share of flaws, the strengths are enough to make them negligible provided one keeps reading it and doesn't lose patience. Bottom line, this is Cornbringer's best fanfict and story up to date in my opinion
This is an amazing novel. Sasuga Corn-sama. Just gotta ask though... who's the love interest?
Reveal Spoiler Corn 🌽Corn 🌽Corn 🌽Corn 🌽Corn 🌽Corn 🌽Corn 🌽Corn 🌽Corn 🌽Corn 🌽Corn 🌽Corn 🌽Corn 🌽Corn 🌽Corn 🌽Corn 🌽Corn 🌽Corn 🌽Corn 🌽Corn 🌽
For me. I really like corn......Its corn!! A big lump with knots. It has the juice (It has the juice~) I can't imagine a more beauthiful thing...Its corn, I can tell you all about it. I mean LOOK AT THIS THING!!! When I tried it with butter everything changed.....The book is AMAZING!!
Goated. .................................................................................................................................................
One of the best fairy tail fan fic. Really enjoyed it, keep updating my friend. This makes me wana watch fairy tail again.....................
Good interactions between characters character has moments that show that he isn't overly op and still struggles
(english is not my language so please forgive any grammatical errors) I love your story and I can't wait to see the continuation and denouement of this story.
Reveal Spoiler By far one of the best fanfics online with fleshed out story and characters with good plot progression and power system with bleach powers being implemented in the main character.
When are you gonna upload the other novels? Aka DC, marvel Avatar korra, overlord and Naruto WoW? Cause ive been waiting on all of em. And you said that Dc would be uploaded 4 months ago. PS this book is rly good and i just hope this one wont go on hiautus like all the others. Cause you said you have the chapters but you havent uploaded them on Webnovel. Have you perhaps uploaded them on pa tre on?
holy heck I didn't know you were still writing stuff, been off the platform for far too long. Almost all the work you do is perfection, and I only say almost because nobody is perfect. you should try your hand at your own fully original works, get published in the wider world!
No character growth whatsoever, suddenly after a few chapters the MC starts to risk his life to fight unbeatable opponents for the current time or tries to save innocent people like he became a hero or something (again, for no apparent reason... He just felt like it...) He risks his life and sometimes literally going to missions with certain death to save someone he barely knew for a day, and I'm sorry to tell you but that is not how emotions and human nature work, and that makes it all the more hard to swallow while reading this... Honestly I love the author and all his other works, which is all the more disappointing for me to see that he might just have no more creativity to make good arcs and plot lines. Anyway, I won't recommend this fanfic.